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I have nothing but love for this character in this entire story I love the way the character interacts with people out it's completely gone from Canon and those gun into his own story which it was longer if you had lemon but anyways let's get on with the next book
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Sinceramente perdí el interés en este fanfic cuando apareció los poder de Capitán falcon, por la sencilla razón que no veo que justifique como puede tener eso poderes teniendo imagine breaker y también porque el autor nerf a Imagine Breaker y volvió patético al mc por seguir la trama original
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good beginning but spoiled from excessive nerf to revealing his identity to early and it goes down hill
DON’T READ THIS NOVEL. BETTER FOR YOU IF YOU NEVER LAY AN EYE ON SUCH MONSTROSITY. absolutely disgusting novel.very bad character setting full of harem the protagonist is either getting a girl or on the way to getting a girl in 70 chs i got like8-10 love interests already. i am quitting.
What a fun read overall.Despite this being a Harem I never found it cringe, not in a single line of the story.The charachters are very Human and Natural and fun to read.The MC is everything one would like no faults there.all around an amazing fanfic thanks for writing this, seriously.This is so good that I felt compelled to write this review
when you see a fanfic with a lot of chapters it's like oh yeah, but when you start reading it the quality is...
I haven't even started reading the story and I don't even know what imagine breaker is **BUT** you put a rickroll in the bio and that's enough for me to give a 5star
only according to the description of the profile of MC, the desire to read has already disappeared...................................................................................................................
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It starts off great story wise then just slowly starts not making any sense the whole villian arc and beyond just seems so convoluted and pointless he’s supposed to be smart but does the dumbest things ever.
At first, it was nice, light FF with acceptable grammar, ok dialogs and fine plot, even if somewhat forced, making it an enjoyable read... However, at some point it started to feel as if it was written by ChatGPT. Gender pronouns are sometimes switching multiple times in one sentence, plot feels forced with a strength of a bunch of hardcore shippers and while the memes woven into the story were nice at first, with the way it is written now makes it just painful to read. I started to catch myself just glossing through paragraphs of dry humor, boring fight scenes and "peak comedy" as if taken from C rated ecchi anime from 80s, hoping for it to be better again. But maybe it's best to let it go...
(Disclaimer: This is the first time I'm making a review, so don't expect too much.) This is a good read. However, there are some things that I have seen in the newer chapters that I would like to address. While the story in and of itself is a good pass time to read, for example, in the earlier chapters, I have seen the amount of effort put into it. But in the recent chapters (this review was made right after chapter 132), I have seen no progress in the story. In chapters 122 and 121, both of them were basically just the sports festival written except for some minor changes (an example being that momo won her fight). This usually wouldn't be much of a bother to me. However, I just didn't see the appeal in reading anymore. The story was heading in almost the same way it had been in the anime and manga (in my opinion, FFs should be created when the author wants to change some aspect of the story. But this is my personal opinion) when there had been many instances in the story where it should be going in a completely different direction. Also, the recent chapters (chapters 128-132) feel as if they were mass produced and weren't given much thought into. My advice to the author would be to not drag the story on. I feel like the story could have ended a while back (around the last arc, I think? don't quote me on that) Or to take a small break. I feel like the writing quality would get better. If they decided to take a break to reset their mind, both the length and quality of the FF would be higher. Thank you for reading this review, and I hope you have a wonderful day. P.S. This is still an enjoyable read, so give it a shot. I am just giving my personal opinion, and this shouldn't influence if you should or should not read a FF or anything at all.
it was great maybe some annoying parts but let's be honest it turned to sĥit when they found out he was a child like man the transformation and weaking idea is great but once again a child why just make 2 completely different identitys it would have been ten times greater a shame
i like it cos it makes my day sometimes, not all the time, but it does the job well, some ppl r for some reason strictly hating plot...but that's them all i can say is give it a try
the way everything flows, the plot, the development, the characters... everything is so bad that I can't even describe my disgust. just don't read it
This story started good but became bad fast, it's full of grammatical errors and the story seems to not go anywhere he's interacting with rumi less and less, and for my personal opinion roboco and the androids shouldn't exist and only ruin the story more
My name is Yoshikage Kira. I’m 33 years old. My house is in the northeast section of Morioh, where all the villas are, and I am not married. I work as an employee for the Kame Yu department stores, and I get home every day by 8 PM at the latest. I don’t smoke, but I occasionally drink. I’m in bed by 11 PM, and make sure I get eight hours of sleep, no matter what. After having a glass of warm milk and doing about twenty minutes of stretches before going to bed, I usually have no problems sleeping until morning. Just like a baby, I wake up without any fatigue or stress in the morning. I was told there were no issues at my last check-up. I’m trying to explain that I’m a person who wishes to live a very quiet life. I take care not to trouble myself with any enemies, like winning and losing, that would cause me to lose sleep at night. That is how I deal with society, and I know that is what brings me happiness. Although, if I were to fight I wouldn’t lose to anyone.
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I did this for the synopsis. Yes, I’m making you look I don’t have much else to say
I have nothing but love for this character in this entire story I love the way the character interacts with people out it's completely gone from Canon and those gun into his own story which it was longer if you had lemon but anyways let's get on with the next book
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Sinceramente perdí el interés en este fanfic cuando apareció los poder de Capitán falcon, por la sencilla razón que no veo que justifique como puede tener eso poderes teniendo imagine breaker y también porque el autor nerf a Imagine Breaker y volvió patético al mc por seguir la trama original
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good beginning but spoiled from excessive nerf to revealing his identity to early and it goes down hill
DON’T READ THIS NOVEL. BETTER FOR YOU IF YOU NEVER LAY AN EYE ON SUCH MONSTROSITY. absolutely disgusting novel.very bad character setting full of harem the protagonist is either getting a girl or on the way to getting a girl in 70 chs i got like8-10 love interests already. i am quitting.
What a fun read overall.Despite this being a Harem I never found it cringe, not in a single line of the story.The charachters are very Human and Natural and fun to read.The MC is everything one would like no faults there.all around an amazing fanfic thanks for writing this, seriously.This is so good that I felt compelled to write this review
when you see a fanfic with a lot of chapters it's like oh yeah, but when you start reading it the quality is...
I haven't even started reading the story and I don't even know what imagine breaker is **BUT** you put a rickroll in the bio and that's enough for me to give a 5star
only according to the description of the profile of MC, the desire to read has already disappeared...................................................................................................................
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It starts off great story wise then just slowly starts not making any sense the whole villian arc and beyond just seems so convoluted and pointless he’s supposed to be smart but does the dumbest things ever.
At first, it was nice, light FF with acceptable grammar, ok dialogs and fine plot, even if somewhat forced, making it an enjoyable read... However, at some point it started to feel as if it was written by ChatGPT. Gender pronouns are sometimes switching multiple times in one sentence, plot feels forced with a strength of a bunch of hardcore shippers and while the memes woven into the story were nice at first, with the way it is written now makes it just painful to read. I started to catch myself just glossing through paragraphs of dry humor, boring fight scenes and "peak comedy" as if taken from C rated ecchi anime from 80s, hoping for it to be better again. But maybe it's best to let it go...
(Disclaimer: This is the first time I'm making a review, so don't expect too much.) This is a good read. However, there are some things that I have seen in the newer chapters that I would like to address. While the story in and of itself is a good pass time to read, for example, in the earlier chapters, I have seen the amount of effort put into it. But in the recent chapters (this review was made right after chapter 132), I have seen no progress in the story. In chapters 122 and 121, both of them were basically just the sports festival written except for some minor changes (an example being that momo won her fight). This usually wouldn't be much of a bother to me. However, I just didn't see the appeal in reading anymore. The story was heading in almost the same way it had been in the anime and manga (in my opinion, FFs should be created when the author wants to change some aspect of the story. But this is my personal opinion) when there had been many instances in the story where it should be going in a completely different direction. Also, the recent chapters (chapters 128-132) feel as if they were mass produced and weren't given much thought into. My advice to the author would be to not drag the story on. I feel like the story could have ended a while back (around the last arc, I think? don't quote me on that) Or to take a small break. I feel like the writing quality would get better. If they decided to take a break to reset their mind, both the length and quality of the FF would be higher. Thank you for reading this review, and I hope you have a wonderful day. P.S. This is still an enjoyable read, so give it a shot. I am just giving my personal opinion, and this shouldn't influence if you should or should not read a FF or anything at all.
it was great maybe some annoying parts but let's be honest it turned to sĥit when they found out he was a child like man the transformation and weaking idea is great but once again a child why just make 2 completely different identitys it would have been ten times greater a shame
i like it cos it makes my day sometimes, not all the time, but it does the job well, some ppl r for some reason strictly hating plot...but that's them all i can say is give it a try
the way everything flows, the plot, the development, the characters... everything is so bad that I can't even describe my disgust. just don't read it
This story started good but became bad fast, it's full of grammatical errors and the story seems to not go anywhere he's interacting with rumi less and less, and for my personal opinion roboco and the androids shouldn't exist and only ruin the story more
My name is Yoshikage Kira. I’m 33 years old. My house is in the northeast section of Morioh, where all the villas are, and I am not married. I work as an employee for the Kame Yu department stores, and I get home every day by 8 PM at the latest. I don’t smoke, but I occasionally drink. I’m in bed by 11 PM, and make sure I get eight hours of sleep, no matter what. After having a glass of warm milk and doing about twenty minutes of stretches before going to bed, I usually have no problems sleeping until morning. Just like a baby, I wake up without any fatigue or stress in the morning. I was told there were no issues at my last check-up. I’m trying to explain that I’m a person who wishes to live a very quiet life. I take care not to trouble myself with any enemies, like winning and losing, that would cause me to lose sleep at night. That is how I deal with society, and I know that is what brings me happiness. Although, if I were to fight I wouldn’t lose to anyone.
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