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You got bored because you went into too much detail, it would have remained a bit superficial but you would have finished the story but you couldn't do that, this is normal because writing is difficult. He fought the Yakuza too much, it was boring. Shin don't enough grown of age - point , and Let's say other things aren't too much of a problem.
quality of writing 3. updating 4. plot development 3. character design 3. world background 3. even if I gave such a bad rating know that I enjoyed this fanfic
This has backwards Chinese mentality m.c. he isn't a psycho or cold. He simply acts like ungrateful Chinese mainlanders do. Very much a young master wannabe mentality. While also playing the "victim mentality'. It didn't even take 2 chapters to how shallow and morally simplistic he is.
honestly was enjoying the story but after getting to chapter 36 the story just feels long and got tired of reading it. don't mind the that people aren't where there suppose to be or that ages are different (don't even know how old mc is anymore) kept hoping for school arc but it took to long to come and lost interest. not the worst story I've read but far from best
very interesting story but the pace is too slow and also long chapters which make it boring for me sometimes because of the slow pace. I read 2-5ch but a day only passed in the story...
Unlike some novels with sissy and weird protagonists, this one is quite bearable, but I find this "I want to save the world" speech with his personality very strange, if it's just an excuse to rule everyone and reign supreme in a single regime under him I would understand, but as the author himself says, he is "a cold and psychopathic manipulator", it is hard to swallow this autistic and heroic act of his if the motive is "to do good". The blue fire guy and the marble guy's conversations are fun to read, please continue with this comic relief. As some have commented it's really strange the "coincidences" of him finding anime characters like Nezu where he shouldn't be, but hey, I consider it to be a different world/universe and parallel to the anime. Google translator.
Yazara sesleniyorum hileyrnün konusu mükemmel dünya seçimde hoş mc nin güçleri de güzel ama çok karmaşık bir yazı bir o yerden başlıyor bir bu yerden başı sonu neresi belli değil ve o kadar gücü olduğu halde basit kişileri yenemiyor
It was cool at first but I eventually got bored of it, when the character interactions and power fantasy elements were pushed to the side by underworld politics. And honestly the criminal underworld here is just kinda boring to read about.
This author is just amazing. His writing his sense of humor. The manipulative and villain yet real and consistent MC. The story keeps in getting better and demand you to read more. Little to none is the bad or shortcoming. One of the golden gem in the villain category.
This is quite good, almost all mha fics are focused on hero,justice, and hypocrisy lol.
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writing - good 5 ⭐ story - kinda boring but good 4⭐ character - manipulative mc instantly 5⭐ update - idk What To SAYY 3⭐ World - there's good enough details so 5 ⭐
This is one of the best MHA Fanfic👌👌. No complaints whatsoever. Yeah Read The Synopsis and tags before reading or else you make an idiot of yourself.
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It's gives me vibes of latest season of mha. Where villains was all about friendship and comardes bonds... It's nice and all, but I am really not sure that villains should use power of friendship...
Excellent story, delightfully smart/evil MC, wonderful writing of side characters. Beyond some easily ignorable typos and grammar mistakes this novel is an absolute gem. I highly suggest it and I am eagerly awaiting more chapters.
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The story is full of plot holes. First things first, he encounters Nezu when he had just escaped from the lab that experimented on him. So, I thought that MC was all mights age or older as nezu was already principle when all might enters UA. Afterwards we are shown that all might is already a pro hero which doesnt make sense. anyways, after this we are introduced to a lot of conviniently placed charcters that shoulndt be where they are right now like toga himiko who was atending aldera high with midoriya and bakugou, because yes, MC is in fact in midoriya's age group another plot hole. additionally, we can see gale force attending aldera high as well because they were in the same orphanage. once again it doesnt make sense. gale force was born in yamanashi prefecture while izuku was born in shizuoka prefecture. characters besides mc seem dumb and the world background is inconsistent as well. positive things about the novel are that: it is readable and the updating stability is good enough.
Very much enjoying the story, MC has a good group, he's smart, great quirk, loads of chaos. Looking forward to more. hopefully no yuri
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
For the love of god, how many reminders do I have to make, if you have ignored all the other warnings I keep telling you the reader then let me tell you again. My Mc is a psychopathic manipulative cold person, I don't understand how many times I have to spell it out for people. If you don't like this format of an MC then don't read it, it's not like I'm forcing you to lol.
You got bored because you went into too much detail, it would have remained a bit superficial but you would have finished the story but you couldn't do that, this is normal because writing is difficult. He fought the Yakuza too much, it was boring. Shin don't enough grown of age - point , and Let's say other things aren't too much of a problem.
quality of writing 3. updating 4. plot development 3. character design 3. world background 3. even if I gave such a bad rating know that I enjoyed this fanfic
This has backwards Chinese mentality m.c. he isn't a psycho or cold. He simply acts like ungrateful Chinese mainlanders do. Very much a young master wannabe mentality. While also playing the "victim mentality'. It didn't even take 2 chapters to how shallow and morally simplistic he is.
honestly was enjoying the story but after getting to chapter 36 the story just feels long and got tired of reading it. don't mind the that people aren't where there suppose to be or that ages are different (don't even know how old mc is anymore) kept hoping for school arc but it took to long to come and lost interest. not the worst story I've read but far from best
very interesting story but the pace is too slow and also long chapters which make it boring for me sometimes because of the slow pace. I read 2-5ch but a day only passed in the story...
Unlike some novels with sissy and weird protagonists, this one is quite bearable, but I find this "I want to save the world" speech with his personality very strange, if it's just an excuse to rule everyone and reign supreme in a single regime under him I would understand, but as the author himself says, he is "a cold and psychopathic manipulator", it is hard to swallow this autistic and heroic act of his if the motive is "to do good". The blue fire guy and the marble guy's conversations are fun to read, please continue with this comic relief. As some have commented it's really strange the "coincidences" of him finding anime characters like Nezu where he shouldn't be, but hey, I consider it to be a different world/universe and parallel to the anime. Google translator.
Yazara sesleniyorum hileyrnün konusu mükemmel dünya seçimde hoş mc nin güçleri de güzel ama çok karmaşık bir yazı bir o yerden başlıyor bir bu yerden başı sonu neresi belli değil ve o kadar gücü olduğu halde basit kişileri yenemiyor
It was cool at first but I eventually got bored of it, when the character interactions and power fantasy elements were pushed to the side by underworld politics. And honestly the criminal underworld here is just kinda boring to read about.
This author is just amazing. His writing his sense of humor. The manipulative and villain yet real and consistent MC. The story keeps in getting better and demand you to read more. Little to none is the bad or shortcoming. One of the golden gem in the villain category.
This is quite good, almost all mha fics are focused on hero,justice, and hypocrisy lol.
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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writing - good 5 ⭐ story - kinda boring but good 4⭐ character - manipulative mc instantly 5⭐ update - idk What To SAYY 3⭐ World - there's good enough details so 5 ⭐
This is one of the best MHA Fanfic👌👌. No complaints whatsoever. Yeah Read The Synopsis and tags before reading or else you make an idiot of yourself.
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It's gives me vibes of latest season of mha. Where villains was all about friendship and comardes bonds... It's nice and all, but I am really not sure that villains should use power of friendship...
Excellent story, delightfully smart/evil MC, wonderful writing of side characters. Beyond some easily ignorable typos and grammar mistakes this novel is an absolute gem. I highly suggest it and I am eagerly awaiting more chapters.
Edgelord Mc. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The story is full of plot holes. First things first, he encounters Nezu when he had just escaped from the lab that experimented on him. So, I thought that MC was all mights age or older as nezu was already principle when all might enters UA. Afterwards we are shown that all might is already a pro hero which doesnt make sense. anyways, after this we are introduced to a lot of conviniently placed charcters that shoulndt be where they are right now like toga himiko who was atending aldera high with midoriya and bakugou, because yes, MC is in fact in midoriya's age group another plot hole. additionally, we can see gale force attending aldera high as well because they were in the same orphanage. once again it doesnt make sense. gale force was born in yamanashi prefecture while izuku was born in shizuoka prefecture. characters besides mc seem dumb and the world background is inconsistent as well. positive things about the novel are that: it is readable and the updating stability is good enough.
Very much enjoying the story, MC has a good group, he's smart, great quirk, loads of chaos. Looking forward to more. hopefully no yuri
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
For the love of god, how many reminders do I have to make, if you have ignored all the other warnings I keep telling you the reader then let me tell you again. My Mc is a psychopathic manipulative cold person, I don't understand how many times I have to spell it out for people. If you don't like this format of an MC then don't read it, it's not like I'm forcing you to lol.