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Zachary and Odette’s 3rd Regression
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This is the story about Zachary and Odette who, unfortunately, was kidnapped and tortured for days. Two weeks later, their bodies were found dumped in one of the isolated roads in Ravenhall City.
Just when they thought they were dead already, they found themselves back two years prior to the murder. Anytime they die, they regress back as if on loop. It will only stop if they already had their retribution. But the drawback is that their mind gets twisted each time they regress. They’re already on their third regression and they meant to end the whole charade here.
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One word. Descriptive. Yes, descriptive. Very descriptive that you can imagine the gore scene. And the funny thing is, it is satisfying to read the way the author describes the even. I don't know if something is wrong with me lol.
A powerful start with great image created. The plot grows so well throughout the chapters while the picture becomes clearer through those words written. Overall a great read
A thrilling beginning The plot got me wanting more. I'm gonna stick with you author , don't relent I wish I could talk more about what I've seen so far but I'd keep commenting Accordingly....in each chapter that I find mind blowing
great... while reading I was felt like all the scenes were running in front of my eyes...all the characters were designed by you very well....keep writing [img=recommend]
What can I say except intriguing. The title pulls you in by forcing you to ask questions. I like how you gave us a little foreshadowing near the end of the third chapter. What exactly is the third regression I'm on my toes🧐
The moment you start reading it, you are presented with death so disgusting it makes you wanna puke. The writing style is good and the mystery is yet to be solved. The characters are equally amazing. Would love to see more of Zach and Odette. Need to add this to my library so I could know the culprit!
Wow, the story build-up is awesome! I am curious to read more about what happened to Zach and Odette! I can't wait to read more of your works! [img=recommend]
Very impressive beginning! What a perfect skill to bring the thrill to the audience. The character was well built, but the world building was restricted due to the nature of realistic novel. A great novel for who like novel with mystery element
Honest review time! 1. Writing Quality is great. I didn't find any difficulty in understanding what author wants to convey. 2. Updates are stable. No issue there. 3. Story Development is fine too. I don't see serious issues there. It has a touch of mystery which has been handled quite well. 4. Okay, character designs have some problems. First of all, I don't know how Zachary and Odette look in general and how they look in different scenes. They are good characters, but they feel a little empty, of course, it could be due to author using two MCs instead of one due to which each of them didn't get proper screen time. 5. World Background has not been fleshed for now. But giving 5 stars because it is only the beginning. Overall, it's a good novel with engaging mystery and even depicts mental illness which only a few dares to explore
I wanna say that I really really like this story and I definitely want to keep up with reading it. There were points where you made my toes and fingers curl because I could just feel the pain. However, that pain that I felt didn't come from how you described it, it came from prior works that properly described the same things. Mentioning that it happened, I was able to recall on those past works that I had read. I don't feel that they are in pain and I don't feel that they're afraid other than you've said that they are. I think that for a series like this, emotions are very very important to portray correctly and I think that's definitely something you should work on. For example, you could have described her thumb being dislocated much better, and given a bit of detail to the beginning of one of their limbs being cut off without going into the whole thing. By the time you got to the part of how they were laying there with missing toes and fingers and they were bloodied and naked, I didn't really feel any of it and I should. I should be pitying them, and I should feel for them. Also, you wrote that the kidnappers wanted Zach to make out with Odette but he hesitates and this didn't really make sense to me. When he's so afraid like you said, and the two of them have been middle school sweethearts, they're already talking marriage - making out should be nothing at this stage in their relationship. When I was in middle school, we were all already making out with our boyfriends. Maybe it's a cultural thing, maybe they're more conservative, but if that's the case I think that you should make that clear. Otherwise it was really shocking that he didn't just do something that most couples do comfortably out in public. As for world background and character design, I feel like you didn't describe anything regarding these two things. I don't have much of an idea of what Zach and Odette look like other than their clothes during the 3rd regression. I'd like to see you expand on these things in the future. I'm going to keep reading because I still really like the plot and I want to know where it goes, but I would love to see you improve on these things. If you did that this book would be close to perfect.
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Awesome. I can't wait to see want happened next to the two. Great storyline author. Waiting for more updates from you author. Keep going 👌👌
The story is very descriptive, that I can imagine seeing those scenes happening in front of my eyes. I felt disgusted and satisfied at the same time— something like that. I don't know what will happen next but it was ready a great read. Hoping to see them both in 4th Loop haha [img=recommend][img=recommend] Good Job author.
It's really good!! Gimme more!! I love the two of them they're so sweet <3<3 If you don't read this... it's your fault. But I need more chapters! tell me what happens next!!
Volumen 1
- 1 Kidnapped 3 years ago
- 2 For All Eternity 3 years ago
- 3 Third Loop 3 years ago
- 4 Coach Ron 3 years ago
- 5 After Death 3 years ago
- 6 After Death II 3 years ago
- 7 Faceless Men [r18] 3 years ago
- 8 Your Mental Health Buddy 3 years ago
- 9 Can’t Go Undefended. 3 years ago
- 10 Ravenhall Mental Health Clinic 3 years ago
- 11 Try Not Dying Midway [r18] 3 years ago
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