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The story starts off good then starts to endlessly drag on by the later chapters. He gets a quest to save someone with a 60 hour time limit, queue 60+ chapters before he even starts the attempt. The story just reached the very start of canon events (academy graduation) after over 300 chapters.
I have been reading this fix for 1 1/2 years, and out of all the dozens of Naruto fics that I read, this is still my favorite. Good job author
Can you write a story about saskue reincarnating in bleach as a shinigami I feel with your talent you could take this story to another level
Loving the story so far, keep up the great work author. I just wanted to ask if there's any, or gonna be any romance? I'm only at chapter 14, so iIwant to know whether to get my hopes up or not. Even if romance isn't the main focus (as in dates and stuff), does he get together with anyone or remain single. I'd continue either way as the story seems work it regardless, and hope he gets with someone (not Hinata as I loved her crushing on Naruto, regardless of how oblivious he was, but wouldn't be opposed to it either way 😔).
You are better off reading an ad on a porn site. This is the place where brain cells are sent to die. System is not systeming, gamer is not gamering. Some stuff is so stupid that it makes you angry, laugh out of anger and at the end of each chapter you want to either throw yourself off or the author. Basic stuff from the system is missing or outright wrong/ not explained/author doesn't give a f*ck; such as dmg reduction percentage, chakra reduction for each jutsu, stats boost, exp gained, dungeon str, gamer mind can be turned off and somehow that feels better and goes on a mission with it turned off(but he acts like a cold smoothie brained baboon, and as we know: the character can't be smarter than the one who wrote it), stats seem to do nothing (int, wis), and many other brain rotting, disgustingly introduced notions to nerf the MC.
Writing quality is OK but Author uses to many flashbacks and force feeds the reader every small detail even the painful obvious things Autor-san explain where it would not have been necessary which is why I give 4 stars for writing quality. Story development ideas it problem especially at the later part of the story it feels often forced and unbelievable but Author-san passing is superb I really love it. Character so I really love the main character he feels fleshed out and alive so good job there and his self made characters are really good to. Sadly there is a really big but in all of my praise for his Characters and it is his he depicts the Conon characters in my opinion. Author-san makes them stronger without real cause. It I just said that they suddenly train more even if they already trained all the time in Canon. So for example with Sasuke Author tells us that he suddenly has more reason the become stronger because mc is strong as if Sasuke did not have reason and motivation enough in Canon it just does not work. Regardless even with all my criticism I have big respect for Author-san work and think he can be proud of what he has written.
This is a good story it takes a while to get things moving but the wait is worth it good story
everything is good but update is too slow it's been at least since I started reading still in 300 s
Author san this is an amazing story I have on request the once finished with this can you right a story of what if zoro reincarnated in the bleach world I feel you would make this story amazing.
I've seen praises for this fic for a while but postponed trying it for a whale (~year i believe . For the record, ive started reading this at 8pm and i stopped at 6am. Yeah. good thing that next day is sunday 😀 Sooo.... its truly a masterpiece. it started very slow, and it still is. But the quality is incredible. You feel that MC is alive and not mindless drobe, as well as the other characters. When danzo and others schemes were introduced i thought that would be classic cliche villian 2-steps shit, but boy i was wrong. Its really interesting to uncover them with the MC and interludes. And there is filler stories (au and canon). Surprise-surprise they are really good! If you are fan of detective works you should really check this out. sire they are not that deep, but nonetheless interesting. Another good thing that through the work you feel that author improves. at first ~30-40 chapters work is good but not 5 stars. But later it picks up and become even better! Kudos to author and keep up with good work!
One of the best Naruto fanfic I’ve read. There some cringe stuff, but I like it so far. Plus the originality of the plot . It’s amazing. It’s one of the few where it don’t describes the 3rd hokage as a scheming stupid old man . Which I find refreshing. But I do wish the novel speed up a lil bit. 🙏 Keep up the good work author.
the novel was good the downside is the immersion is pulled down by the special characters breakers( like *,=,_) specially when using auto read(audio read) overall its good story
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Very good story but I’m a little frustrated that we are 300 plus chapters in and haven’t made much progress into canon but I love the story.
Okay now I'm simply gonna put it, this is a really good story I started this book and finished it in 3 days, no two days and I Love it! Everything down to the last detail is good! The plot, the characters everything I can't find a single mistake I got addicted to this I kept reading this all the time and seriously I;m sure this books has a lot of ways to go on and please make it go till the 4 great Ninja war this is peak thanks for writing this!
________________________________________ When Are you gonna update new chapters..? _________________________________________
My absolute favorite naruto gamer fanfic! I love how u do the mcs stats,skills👍🏻 I keep comparing this fanfic to other gamer fanfics since I've read it... please 🙏🏻 keep up the amazing work!!!!!
The story is decent. The system implementation is quite mediocre. Reputations can be removed and would not have changed much. A good piece of advice: don't mess with the aspect of space and time. Most authors' implementation of it ruins the story. Don't think you would be the special one that would succeed.
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This story is one of the best Naruto fanfics I’ve read my main problem with it though is the pacing, for reference I’m about 250 chapters in and Naruto still hasn’t even become a genin yet which is crazy. Despite these criticisms the author explains everything very well and there’s no ‘filler’ parts per say. I understand the slow pacing but I personally just think that the author could’ve cut out some of the missions that we seen the mc take and just overall speed things up a bit.
Las estadísticas son números sin importancia, el protagonista podria tener una gran cantidad de puntos en inteligencia y sabiduría, pero aun seguirá tomando desciciones tontas solo porque al autor le conviene, muchas de sus peleas son al estilo berserker, las habilidades ninja estan de adorno y las habilidades "mente de gamer", "cuerpo de gamer", "bendición de gaia" parece que se fueron de vacaciones, porque no suerten efecto cuando realmente importa. La historia es interesante, pero no hay mucha interacción entre personajes al principio
Good story but kind of hard to picture when I don’t know what the MC looks like. Don’t know if I missed it somewhere but strange
I like how the main character is strong but not to overpowered and that he still loses to the more experienced ninja like kakashi and orochimaru
boring story about a dude that only trains and becomes OP compared to his peers very fast. no exitement, no challenge, just boring
I love it, I would say that it is the best Naruto story I have ever read, it really feels different, I feel that the story advances a little slowly but I think the development of the story is very good.
Author's Shameless 5 Star Review. A few points about the story - A reborn Gamer in the Naruto world. - No Harem. No pairings decided. - I'll try to stay as authentic to the Naruto world as possible. Meaning no Haki or Nen or Ki. -But I might give him mana in a very limited capacity. - Updates 3 times a week but that could increase.
The story starts off good then starts to endlessly drag on by the later chapters. He gets a quest to save someone with a 60 hour time limit, queue 60+ chapters before he even starts the attempt. The story just reached the very start of canon events (academy graduation) after over 300 chapters.
I have been reading this fix for 1 1/2 years, and out of all the dozens of Naruto fics that I read, this is still my favorite. Good job author
Can you write a story about saskue reincarnating in bleach as a shinigami I feel with your talent you could take this story to another level
Loving the story so far, keep up the great work author. I just wanted to ask if there's any, or gonna be any romance? I'm only at chapter 14, so iIwant to know whether to get my hopes up or not. Even if romance isn't the main focus (as in dates and stuff), does he get together with anyone or remain single. I'd continue either way as the story seems work it regardless, and hope he gets with someone (not Hinata as I loved her crushing on Naruto, regardless of how oblivious he was, but wouldn't be opposed to it either way 😔).
You are better off reading an ad on a porn site. This is the place where brain cells are sent to die. System is not systeming, gamer is not gamering. Some stuff is so stupid that it makes you angry, laugh out of anger and at the end of each chapter you want to either throw yourself off or the author. Basic stuff from the system is missing or outright wrong/ not explained/author doesn't give a f*ck; such as dmg reduction percentage, chakra reduction for each jutsu, stats boost, exp gained, dungeon str, gamer mind can be turned off and somehow that feels better and goes on a mission with it turned off(but he acts like a cold smoothie brained baboon, and as we know: the character can't be smarter than the one who wrote it), stats seem to do nothing (int, wis), and many other brain rotting, disgustingly introduced notions to nerf the MC.
Writing quality is OK but Author uses to many flashbacks and force feeds the reader every small detail even the painful obvious things Autor-san explain where it would not have been necessary which is why I give 4 stars for writing quality. Story development ideas it problem especially at the later part of the story it feels often forced and unbelievable but Author-san passing is superb I really love it. Character so I really love the main character he feels fleshed out and alive so good job there and his self made characters are really good to. Sadly there is a really big but in all of my praise for his Characters and it is his he depicts the Conon characters in my opinion. Author-san makes them stronger without real cause. It I just said that they suddenly train more even if they already trained all the time in Canon. So for example with Sasuke Author tells us that he suddenly has more reason the become stronger because mc is strong as if Sasuke did not have reason and motivation enough in Canon it just does not work. Regardless even with all my criticism I have big respect for Author-san work and think he can be proud of what he has written.
This is a good story it takes a while to get things moving but the wait is worth it good story
everything is good but update is too slow it's been at least since I started reading still in 300 s
Author san this is an amazing story I have on request the once finished with this can you right a story of what if zoro reincarnated in the bleach world I feel you would make this story amazing.
I've seen praises for this fic for a while but postponed trying it for a whale (~year i believe . For the record, ive started reading this at 8pm and i stopped at 6am. Yeah. good thing that next day is sunday 😀 Sooo.... its truly a masterpiece. it started very slow, and it still is. But the quality is incredible. You feel that MC is alive and not mindless drobe, as well as the other characters. When danzo and others schemes were introduced i thought that would be classic cliche villian 2-steps shit, but boy i was wrong. Its really interesting to uncover them with the MC and interludes. And there is filler stories (au and canon). Surprise-surprise they are really good! If you are fan of detective works you should really check this out. sire they are not that deep, but nonetheless interesting. Another good thing that through the work you feel that author improves. at first ~30-40 chapters work is good but not 5 stars. But later it picks up and become even better! Kudos to author and keep up with good work!
One of the best Naruto fanfic I’ve read. There some cringe stuff, but I like it so far. Plus the originality of the plot . It’s amazing. It’s one of the few where it don’t describes the 3rd hokage as a scheming stupid old man . Which I find refreshing. But I do wish the novel speed up a lil bit. 🙏 Keep up the good work author.
the novel was good the downside is the immersion is pulled down by the special characters breakers( like *,=,_) specially when using auto read(audio read) overall its good story
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Very good story but I’m a little frustrated that we are 300 plus chapters in and haven’t made much progress into canon but I love the story.
Okay now I'm simply gonna put it, this is a really good story I started this book and finished it in 3 days, no two days and I Love it! Everything down to the last detail is good! The plot, the characters everything I can't find a single mistake I got addicted to this I kept reading this all the time and seriously I;m sure this books has a lot of ways to go on and please make it go till the 4 great Ninja war this is peak thanks for writing this!
________________________________________ When Are you gonna update new chapters..? _________________________________________
My absolute favorite naruto gamer fanfic! I love how u do the mcs stats,skills👍🏻 I keep comparing this fanfic to other gamer fanfics since I've read it... please 🙏🏻 keep up the amazing work!!!!!
The story is decent. The system implementation is quite mediocre. Reputations can be removed and would not have changed much. A good piece of advice: don't mess with the aspect of space and time. Most authors' implementation of it ruins the story. Don't think you would be the special one that would succeed.
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This story is one of the best Naruto fanfics I’ve read my main problem with it though is the pacing, for reference I’m about 250 chapters in and Naruto still hasn’t even become a genin yet which is crazy. Despite these criticisms the author explains everything very well and there’s no ‘filler’ parts per say. I understand the slow pacing but I personally just think that the author could’ve cut out some of the missions that we seen the mc take and just overall speed things up a bit.
Las estadísticas son números sin importancia, el protagonista podria tener una gran cantidad de puntos en inteligencia y sabiduría, pero aun seguirá tomando desciciones tontas solo porque al autor le conviene, muchas de sus peleas son al estilo berserker, las habilidades ninja estan de adorno y las habilidades "mente de gamer", "cuerpo de gamer", "bendición de gaia" parece que se fueron de vacaciones, porque no suerten efecto cuando realmente importa. La historia es interesante, pero no hay mucha interacción entre personajes al principio
Good story but kind of hard to picture when I don’t know what the MC looks like. Don’t know if I missed it somewhere but strange
I like how the main character is strong but not to overpowered and that he still loses to the more experienced ninja like kakashi and orochimaru
boring story about a dude that only trains and becomes OP compared to his peers very fast. no exitement, no challenge, just boring
I love it, I would say that it is the best Naruto story I have ever read, it really feels different, I feel that the story advances a little slowly but I think the development of the story is very good.
Author's Shameless 5 Star Review. A few points about the story - A reborn Gamer in the Naruto world. - No Harem. No pairings decided. - I'll try to stay as authentic to the Naruto world as possible. Meaning no Haki or Nen or Ki. -But I might give him mana in a very limited capacity. - Updates 3 times a week but that could increase.