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Tbh rather mid story overall, the starting overpowered aspect isn’t handled well
So far it looks better than the previous one, the thing is to pray that it only gets better, it's just the delay in launching that is complicated
you did a much better job writing her background at the beginning then the first book, and you explained more detail then the first book, Soo doing good so far other than the updating part, so all and all a pretty good rewrite👌👌.
everything is written well so far, the character training herself and getting stronger and the interactions with them. it's just the updating consistency aint' there, I hope to see the future updates of chapter.but so far good chapters 🙌
Tbh rather mid story overall, the starting overpowered aspect isn’t handled well
So far it looks better than the previous one, the thing is to pray that it only gets better, it's just the delay in launching that is complicated
you did a much better job writing her background at the beginning then the first book, and you explained more detail then the first book, Soo doing good so far other than the updating part, so all and all a pretty good rewrite👌👌.
everything is written well so far, the character training herself and getting stronger and the interactions with them. it's just the updating consistency aint' there, I hope to see the future updates of chapter.but so far good chapters 🙌