POKEMON: DRACONIC

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Wild_Wine

Approximately 50k + words in while reviewing. Review: Writing quality is amongst the best you can find on this site. Story development seems great as of now but can't be sure from here on. Character development is the biggest plus point as even the side characters like MC's dad and mom seemed three dimensional. Update stability is also good, I mean you can never complain if one chapter has 5k+ words. World background is also good as we are seeing the story in the Kalos area, an area where not many fanfictions dwell into. My Worries: MC seems to get everything with literally no effort and a lack of an antagonist or at least a suspense to things might bore some readers after a certain point of time. Not started the journey but is already at the level where he can beat people who have more than 6 or 7 badges, so I wonder if the book will end with just 30 chapters in. At the pace the story is going and how op the MC might get by the age of 10, there will be no need to continue the story after a certain point in time. These are my concerns Author, for now, it's a five star for its great quality but will change it after 20 chapters in.

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Buggy_The_Clown

Even though i know there is nothing thats much thicker than delia's ***, i should atleast probably give it a try. .

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Brian_Morco

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Brian_Morco

More, give me more!!! Anyways, I really enjoyed reading the story, good tone, pace, and grammar really makes this a great read. I'm glad I foudn this! Thanks, hope you update soon!![img=update]

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gg_gg_0642

did u drop this?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

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sean_perez

Love the build up, and speed of the story. The action is fun and believable. The comedy side of things is alittle flat. And maybe alittle more then a passing glance at the downtime is needed to show not tell the bond shared with his pokemon.

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Gabriel_Cabral

continue with this great fanfic author, i loved the story, so far i found the chapters very good, and a very good read, i'm waiting for more

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Param_Doshi

Please update soon with the next chapter

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5paghetti_5auce

Great stuff. I hope you got a release schedule because I crave for more ....................................... ............................

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Kaxharu_Ryuzaki

Es un de los mejores fanfiction de pokémon, me gusto el protagonista y la manera en que interactúan con otros personajes, su historia familiar es interesante, además los pokemon que consiguió fueron buenos y se les dio un buen desarrollo a la historia de estos,cosas como el porque son diferentes o la razón del porque los consiguió fue muy bien explicado. Los capítulos tardan mucho en ser publicados, pero son compensados por el tamaño de cada capítulo, cada capítulo es como 3 o 5 capítulos de algunos autores. ☆4.6

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Christian_Quirimit_7442

great work author, hope you update more frequently

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Psym

Writing Quality: Excellent Story Development: Excellent Character: Good Update: Less update but super long chapters World: As expected of Pokemon Overall: Satisfied

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Spencer_Music

This is a wonderful fan fiction, I enjoy the attention to details and the slow pace of the story.

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Isc_Soho

I love this story! Keep up the good work and can't wait for the update!❤️

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MS7soul

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Gartraz

An amazing story with lots of potential to come, with the lineup of pokemon and the knowledge this can go very far.also the way the world is talked about you can fill the the care put into development!

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Joshua_Knopps

Amazing story. I love the writing style and mc. Also how dianthia's ralts developed a phobia of feebas. So please keep up the good work and update soon thanks

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ShadowMonaRCh001

I really liked your fanfic and am looking forward to reading more of it ......so please update next chapters faster with less gap between them ...really looking forward to it

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FadeKnight

I’m looking forward to the pathway you set for your mc. This story is engaging. I rate it five stars in the hope you continue to completion.

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Anderson_

its really good but i don't want to write a lot so, each chapter is very long and extensive----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------