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- Qualität des Schreibens
- Veröffentlichungsstabilität
- Geschichtenentwicklung
- Charakter-Design
- Welthintergrund
Teilen Sie Ihre Gedanken mit anderen
Schreiben Sie eine Rezension
I'm not going to speak ill of the fanfic, because he makes it clear from the beginning that if you don't want to read it, don't read it, but I can't help but think that this is a waste. If it didn't have so much NTR, it would be very good, but anyway, I don't recommend it.
Spoiler enthüllen
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I WANT MORE FATE WHOLESOME STORIES!!! PLEASE! ..................................................................................................
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if the original could be mentioned that woulf be even better or sinopsis at the start of ghe chapter to know what its up to.................
I’m a simple person. The moment I see Mommy or Makima I gotta rate this 5 unless it’s GhostyZ one which is an exception to the 5 star I give Author should do Freya from Danmachi since she is Hot specifically the Novel where she looks more innocent than Anime
I wuv it yey heheeheeheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheeheheheheheheheheheheheh
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Spoiler enthüllen
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I'm here once again. Please do tell if there are errors, I'll fix them them as soon as I see them............................................
I'm not going to speak ill of the fanfic, because he makes it clear from the beginning that if you don't want to read it, don't read it, but I can't help but think that this is a waste. If it didn't have so much NTR, it would be very good, but anyway, I don't recommend it.
Spoiler enthüllen Buenas historia, aunque... un poco locas y crueles. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I WANT MORE FATE WHOLESOME STORIES!!! PLEASE! ..................................................................................................
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if the original could be mentioned that woulf be even better or sinopsis at the start of ghe chapter to know what its up to.................
I’m a simple person. The moment I see Mommy or Makima I gotta rate this 5 unless it’s GhostyZ one which is an exception to the 5 star I give Author should do Freya from Danmachi since she is Hot specifically the Novel where she looks more innocent than Anime
I wuv it yey heheeheeheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheeheheheheheheheheheheheh
Good read, I like it. ...................................................................................................................... ........................................................................................... ...........................................
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