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Nice concept ⚔️ Nice pace ⚔️ Good romance ⚔️ Nothing to complain about ⚔️ (☞ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)☞ ( ˘ ³˘)♥︎ ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ シシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシ
Simple but perfectly executed. The system is the part i like most about the novel, innovative interface aswell as cool ways to gain new elements and power. Mc is smart and althought he looks lazy in the beggining he has great drive for power. Mc has the space element(main element) which is something i find very appealing to the readers(such as myself). Father of the mc is strong and helps him in farming his skills. If you like game elements with cliche but well executed moments, give this Great novel a try.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leozhan2020*@*gmail.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
pretty decent so far with good schedule. There is some parts here in there where you switch from the 3rd to the 1st person in terms of perspective, but, at least for me that is a minus. The mc gives me vibes of the mc of 'it seems like i got transmigrated into an eroge' but doesnt question everything that happens around him like in that novel, which i think is a plus. Keep up the good work, enjoying the novel so far 👍
Nice concept ⚔️ Nice pace ⚔️ Good romance ⚔️ Nothing to complain about ⚔️ (☞ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)☞ ( ˘ ³˘)♥︎ ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ シシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシシ
Simple but perfectly executed. The system is the part i like most about the novel, innovative interface aswell as cool ways to gain new elements and power. Mc is smart and althought he looks lazy in the beggining he has great drive for power. Mc has the space element(main element) which is something i find very appealing to the readers(such as myself). Father of the mc is strong and helps him in farming his skills. If you like game elements with cliche but well executed moments, give this Great novel a try.
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Spoiler enthüllen Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leozhan2020*@*gmail.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
pretty decent so far with good schedule. There is some parts here in there where you switch from the 3rd to the 1st person in terms of perspective, but, at least for me that is a minus. The mc gives me vibes of the mc of 'it seems like i got transmigrated into an eroge' but doesnt question everything that happens around him like in that novel, which i think is a plus. Keep up the good work, enjoying the novel so far 👍