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it all just stopped being good when the mc pulled an idiotic move and cheated on his girlfriend
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pretty average amd sometimes below average story. The usual - Mc is reborn(or whatever the term is) but is just an idiot. If it's your 2nd life and you can't stand up to your bullies then the whole superhero and villian thing is not for you. His mother is an xmen but doing multiple jobs to get by. It doesn't matter if she cut off all the connections with xmen, she should have some people to help her (like the ppl xmen worked with, or the people she saved etc.) below average story
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Good story with a SI MC. He kinda childish tho? Sometimes heโll make decisions without thinking of the consequences like he when fought Ironman and almost died or when he got with Natasha. Overall itโs a good read. At least itโs a lot better than some of the other trash on this app
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I was wondering what scale of of villain and what scale of dark will the story be.... like he could do bad stuff but is not evil and it could be dark as in people die but not as dark as in R### and shis
Writing quality good. The story is Tv-novel mexican... "la rosa de Guadalupe". MC is SI, but is a brat (minded). [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
Ok so I was bored and decided To find some more villain storyโs and came across this and decided To read this and love it so far its got plot in my opinion And so far has been good up to his first kill and. His road to becoming A villain Which I hope will happen But one thing I donโt really want to happen is the mom bringing Him down too not kill if u know what I mean But love the story so far and enjoying it so I hope u continue
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everything really good, the only problem I have is the MC actions. 1. he forgave his father way to easily. 2. it says villain in the tags and he has yet to do anything of the sort. 3. Im not sure if he refuses to but he never thinks about his action and rushes into everything.
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Very nice, Waiting for more!! ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Great start so far. Can't wait to see where you go from here [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
Muy buena bro pero si la subes mas seguido seria grandรญsimo pero esta bien muchas gracias por los cap que subiste antes muchรญsimas gracias tus capรญtulos son los mejores
Great start canโt wait to see more Yup yes yup yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes I yup yes yup yeah I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yup yes yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes I
Hey, just me again for another shameless review! I hope you enjoy the story as our MC rises to become one of the top people in the Marvel universe!
it all just stopped being good when the mc pulled an idiotic move and cheated on his girlfriend
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Anlatฤฑm gรผzel ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
pretty average amd sometimes below average story. The usual - Mc is reborn(or whatever the term is) but is just an idiot. If it's your 2nd life and you can't stand up to your bullies then the whole superhero and villian thing is not for you. His mother is an xmen but doing multiple jobs to get by. It doesn't matter if she cut off all the connections with xmen, she should have some people to help her (like the ppl xmen worked with, or the people she saved etc.) below average story
Spoiler enthรผllen Good story with a SI MC. He kinda childish tho? Sometimes heโll make decisions without thinking of the consequences like he when fought Ironman and almost died or when he got with Natasha. Overall itโs a good read. At least itโs a lot better than some of the other trash on this app
Spoiler enthรผllen I was wondering what scale of of villain and what scale of dark will the story be.... like he could do bad stuff but is not evil and it could be dark as in people die but not as dark as in R### and shis
Writing quality good. The story is Tv-novel mexican... "la rosa de Guadalupe". MC is SI, but is a brat (minded). [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
Ok so I was bored and decided To find some more villain storyโs and came across this and decided To read this and love it so far its got plot in my opinion And so far has been good up to his first kill and. His road to becoming A villain Which I hope will happen But one thing I donโt really want to happen is the mom bringing Him down too not kill if u know what I mean But love the story so far and enjoying it so I hope u continue
More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More
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everything really good, the only problem I have is the MC actions. 1. he forgave his father way to easily. 2. it says villain in the tags and he has yet to do anything of the sort. 3. Im not sure if he refuses to but he never thinks about his action and rushes into everything.
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Very nice, Waiting for more!! ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Great start so far. Can't wait to see where you go from here [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
Muy buena bro pero si la subes mas seguido seria grandรญsimo pero esta bien muchas gracias por los cap que subiste antes muchรญsimas gracias tus capรญtulos son los mejores
Great start canโt wait to see more Yup yes yup yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes I yup yes yup yeah I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yup yes yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes I
Hey, just me again for another shameless review! I hope you enjoy the story as our MC rises to become one of the top people in the Marvel universe!
Please don't drop this book ๐ ๐ I will wait for you to finish it