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It was an excellent story. There were no grammar issues, the plot was engaging, and the main character was interesting. Unfortunately it appears that the author has dropped the story.
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It's about driving, it's about power. We stay hungry, we devour. Put in the work, put in the hours, and take what's ours. Finally... Finally, this novel is what I've been seeking for so long. The development, likeable MC, etc Keep it up! Semangat!
semangat bro , jangan sampe ga tamat y minim sampe tamat lah jadi tiap hari bisa kasih 1 batu hehehehe selamat gramar ny masih bisa d memgerti g masalah
how long have i read a good ff naruto.... this is one of the best ff naruto I've read so far... mc felt alive and the story development balanced so far....
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This is the FF I was looking for with Anti Hero MC and not naive, has its own purpose instead of following the original protagonist who usually takes the role passively instead of actively.
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too lazy to write .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
this book is good it is amazing. author don't drop this book or I'm going to come to your house and kill you.......................................
can't wait for the next one................................,................................................................................
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well written, despite being a translated version of Indonesian to English. Good concept of prototype system. recommended to be read. also, I like the MC depicted differently as of his other clan members.
love it keep it up. and i thick you should read MHA: code. It has similar pover and you could maybe get ideas from it . .. ... .. .. .. .
Good writing, excellent plot, good pacing, decent chapter lengths. Honestly this is a great story hopefully you upload more chapters and complete the story instead of dropping.
Very good and well written book with fresh new concept in terms of development ,cant wait to read more. --------------‐-----------------------
does anyone know it's raw chapters link? ?? ? ?? ?? ??? ? ? ?? ?? ?? jsujdjjssjsjsiksejejjeejsjksossuhg rid jusjsksis
The potential of this one is......... strong af like yeah. I hope maybe there’s world hopping and he will travel to Bleach or maybe smth similar.
mc finally started thinking but still six years wasted......................................................................................
Prototype of System is a concept that I accidentally thought of after reading a bunch collection of Chinese nationalism fanfics that use the idea of a system. Ten years ago, the concept of systems was a lot of fun to read, whether it was a character suddenly becoming an Op or something. But I'm sure I'm not the only one getting sick of reading too many novels where a character is very dependent on the system, so let's switch it; how about switching a character who relies on a system to live? Let's make one where a character builds his system instead of the type of system itself limiting the Character. A character who thinks out of the box, eccentric, is not limited to modern veiled racism thoughts, but is also not tied to rigid concepts of right and wrong, and thinks freely without the influence of any party. This fanfic may not even live up to all my expectations above, but sadly it's my best effort.
I'll let the meme speak for itself. f uf jf jf uf ug if jg ig ig jg jf ufxfxutxutxuxirxutxutxutxutxitxutxitxitxuxtxutxtxitxitxitx
It was an excellent story. There were no grammar issues, the plot was engaging, and the main character was interesting. Unfortunately it appears that the author has dropped the story.
(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
It's about driving, it's about power. We stay hungry, we devour. Put in the work, put in the hours, and take what's ours. Finally... Finally, this novel is what I've been seeking for so long. The development, likeable MC, etc Keep it up! Semangat!
semangat bro , jangan sampe ga tamat y minim sampe tamat lah jadi tiap hari bisa kasih 1 batu hehehehe selamat gramar ny masih bisa d memgerti g masalah
how long have i read a good ff naruto.... this is one of the best ff naruto I've read so far... mc felt alive and the story development balanced so far....
Spoiler enthüllen ....................................................................................................................................................................................
This is the FF I was looking for with Anti Hero MC and not naive, has its own purpose instead of following the original protagonist who usually takes the role passively instead of actively.
................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
too lazy to write .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
this book is good it is amazing. author don't drop this book or I'm going to come to your house and kill you.......................................
can't wait for the next one................................,................................................................................
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well written, despite being a translated version of Indonesian to English. Good concept of prototype system. recommended to be read. also, I like the MC depicted differently as of his other clan members.
love it keep it up. and i thick you should read MHA: code. It has similar pover and you could maybe get ideas from it . .. ... .. .. .. .
Good writing, excellent plot, good pacing, decent chapter lengths. Honestly this is a great story hopefully you upload more chapters and complete the story instead of dropping.
Very good and well written book with fresh new concept in terms of development ,cant wait to read more. --------------‐-----------------------
does anyone know it's raw chapters link? ?? ? ?? ?? ??? ? ? ?? ?? ?? jsujdjjssjsjsiksejejjeejsjksossuhg rid jusjsksis
The potential of this one is......... strong af like yeah. I hope maybe there’s world hopping and he will travel to Bleach or maybe smth similar.
mc finally started thinking but still six years wasted......................................................................................
Prototype of System is a concept that I accidentally thought of after reading a bunch collection of Chinese nationalism fanfics that use the idea of a system. Ten years ago, the concept of systems was a lot of fun to read, whether it was a character suddenly becoming an Op or something. But I'm sure I'm not the only one getting sick of reading too many novels where a character is very dependent on the system, so let's switch it; how about switching a character who relies on a system to live? Let's make one where a character builds his system instead of the type of system itself limiting the Character. A character who thinks out of the box, eccentric, is not limited to modern veiled racism thoughts, but is also not tied to rigid concepts of right and wrong, and thinks freely without the influence of any party. This fanfic may not even live up to all my expectations above, but sadly it's my best effort.