All Heaven and Worlds Store

LV 5

95_novel_maniac_95

concept is good, mc is also nice (easygoing personality) update speed is also okay but writing quality and story execution sucks too much..... first thing first I can't understand how trade works .... the store evaluate the customer for everything he or she is worth in terms of spirit point which they use for trade now here's the question- the customer are not losing anything for the point they used for trade.... so where are the point coming from also different timeline are mixed when zuzuqing arrived she was 3-4yrs old , it was stated she's from different timeline but now they are in same(original).... next is gender are always mixed.....(one doesn't need to know grammar for getting gender correct)

LV 2

AnotherAtlas

This novel has two big problems I can see atm. 1 The translation is often pretty bad. It's understandable, but still bad. 2 Even with apparently changed fates, the characters act pretty much the same. Originally Tang San built up his love for Xiao Wu from an early age i'm pretty sure. Here, he just falls in love at first sight + Xiao Wu is acting the exact same way she would with Xin as she would have with Tang. Experiences make a part of a person. It's extremely unrealistic seeing some of these characters acting the same way they did in the og.

LV 4

Npc_a

Its unique. like unique nah.... just read it. =========================================+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++================================

LV 14

womb_raider

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LV 14

Tsubasa93

The writing is clunky and doesn't flow well at all. The system is straight up garbage that made the MC into a slave with severe penalties and forced quests. Don't bother with it.

LV 14

DeathLingers

harem trash and even worse its ntr. even though the author hasn't tagged it as harem. he constantly introduces more thots and some of those thots already have destined partners so yeah ntr. such a shame was interesting but I cant and also the system abuses him as well

LV 4

Burning_flames

great story only one issue and that is the grammar not to say mine is any better but still I will never write a book so you can't criticise me. hahaha

LV 1

Z_A_S_S_H_U

Interesting concept unfortunately the MC is a total slave of the system ................................................................................

LV 6

MagikarpBombado

it's interesting... but what's the point in the shop, it's more like he's giving free itens, the first customer used almost all of her sp, and after using the itens she purchased , she got 7k sp, so what's the point in this? there's a part where is said that the customer can use life force, fate, money, etc. to purchase, but I didn't see the mention of this when he sold the itens...

LV 13

Crytach

I'm going to be honest, I wish I could love this fanfiction but the translation is horrific, there are often many times when you have to invent what you think is being said as what they said makes absolutely no sense. in general it could be good, but it suffers majorly due to a horrible translation that is not showing ANY signs of improvement.

LV 15

Lunar_Light

The merchant system is pretty decent, but the currency other than it can be traded with gold is pretty much useless? I don’t get it, the system evaluate the customer’s worth into currency to buy things, and do their fate/life/title/identity or something got stripped or not? The only one make sense when a certain woman trade her life as slave to save her clan, yep something got traded but other that auto have thousands of sp? What do they actually lose? Its kinda bad just sums up their total value, personally i prefer if they have individual value before the total, for example daugther of destiny worth how much, or they want to trade 50 years of lifespan for something, they lose it immediately and the trade is completed.

LV 1

DaoistdoKJss

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LV 3

Gabichu_Yeah

Why is it a boy? Where is the fun in a fanfic with a shota? I finally found a Douluo fanfic and it's about a shota with memory problems and a death wish. My day is ruined and my disappointment is immeasurable

LV 4

TruthExposer123

first time i read this type of Douluo Fanfic I approved for its uniqueness :D Keep Updating it Plzzzzz - Thank You [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

LV 2

Leo_L_Levi

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LV 13

Lamentad

Pocas veces siento que las cosas pueden ser interesantes, espero que no me decepcione como otras veces, sigue asi...........................................................................................................................

LV 14

lTzSuperman

I really liked the story, I hope continue adding new chapter when you are able to again. I will be looking forward to it, Thanks

LV 4

Z_a_a_1_2_3

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LV 4

Z_a_a_1_2_3

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LV 1

Drako_0692

Typical Chinese story. mc slave to the system (because everyone loves this plot so badly life treats him) young master personality Typical Chinese story. mc slave to the system (because everyone loves this plot so badly life treats him) young master personality