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What did I find? Right. A hidden gem. As a loyal sucker for strong female leads, Evelyn is straight-up in my ally. Love her reactions and character and general. The author's world-building is getting interesting as you read each chapter. The story had good punctuation that lets the words flow smoothly. Finally, the story has so much potential to be a masterpiece. Please, if you are up for a good romantic story and like werewolves, I recommend this journey!
Hello there, Author here This story revolves around the journey of a strong FL from being raised in an affectionating environment in her palace to stepping out into worldliness. On this journey of hers, a man joins supporting her secretly yet hiding his real identity. From being overthrown as the queen twice after her father's demise to protecting the people of her province from the vicious schemes of the wicked antagonist, her journey becomes the inspiration to many women. To know what it is, how it is and moreover, how she falls for the beast, read my novel, 'Falling for a Ferocious Beast'
well... i love the author... so I mah give my review now... this story is one of a kind werewolf story you could every find, its a story you'll never imagine from current werewolf stories that is about packs and all. this, however, is so different that I find it interesting to read, also i love historical, military, romance drama so yeah... there are scenes where Evelyn is doing business, that I find it intriguing. recommended for those that wanna read a different on the go werewolf stories.
Hello author can you please update your chapter. Yeet side block and update more . Uwu nice cover and synopsis. Best of luck in advance for your journey .[img=recommend][img=update] Now come back and updateeeee chapppyyy authorrr[img=exp]
I didn't expect for a female lead for this novel when I check it out or maybe, i really need glasses for my poor eyes. The story is great and a gem for a such genre of this novel. I don't know why webnovel didn't feature this on my front page😅 Keep up the good work for this Masterpiece of your!
When it comes to female lead novel I've so far encountered. This lightens the journey i as a reader am taking. The unique plot and narration are one of a kind. Highly recommendable to all readers irrespective of your favorite genre. Keep going author. Can't wait for more updates coming to my library 😍😍😍👌👌🏅🏅🥇
Evelyn is the kind of female lead I like reading and writing about. She is strong and confident, she knows what she wants and she goes for it. So far the male lead is mysterious and I guess he will reveal more about himself as the story continues. The world background is innovative and creative. The characters are well thought out and imaginative. Good luck in the contest author! 💜
The story was well executed! I can see that the narration was decent and so far so good. I like the fact that the MC was a strong one on her resolve. In combat too 😂 Story progresses in good pacing, also keeping you on your toes and never failing to give excitement on its cliffhangers. Any reader that liked this kind of genre will automatically binge-read it. Love lots and a hidden gem.
The story in one word is just A.M.A.Z.I.N.G !!!! The storyline goes in a flow and there are always cliffhanger in the end which will make you attached to your seats.
This is the first time since I use WebNovel that i read a writing that deserve a five star. Good use of punctuation, hidden gem beneath the pile of papers.
When first getting into the story, there are some immediate errors that present themselves, in chapter 1 in the forth paragraph "Slight crackling of twigs somewhere far deep in the forest caught his attention" Does not make sense, and could be rewritten as "The slight crackling." Slight errors like this as well as obvious improvements to word choice and gramatic errors are abundant in the novel. I recommend you proofread and edit all the chapters you have released and proofread especially more on unreleased chapters. Other than that I like the way you add a lot of expression into the dialogue, as many stories fail in this department , the actual interactions are ok, I'm not super impressed. The thoughts and development of the emotions and feelings between the characters are pretty well done, overall the story is pretty good, areas of improvement (without changing the story) would be in word choice, pacing and fixing the abundant errors. I hope you will not be angry with this realistic review even if it isn't 5 stars, as I know I would appreciate something like this.
This story is distinct one in the werewolf genre. Evelyn, a strong female lead character gets involved with a werewolf, and sparks created between them. The events described in the story in a wonderful way with a nice pacing. In the latest chapters, I found the werewolf's character is shown and reading that it felt that he has hatred towards humans... maybe because of a dark past or something (Can't judge as the story is in its initial phase). I would like to see how the story will unfold; how the two will fall in love and what new events are coming in their way!! My best wishes for you in this Werewolf Contest. Please support the author with Power-stones and comments. Lots of Love, CS💜
What did I find? Right. A hidden gem. As a loyal sucker for strong female leads, Evelyn is straight-up in my ally. Love her reactions and character and general. The author's world-building is getting interesting as you read each chapter. The story had good punctuation that lets the words flow smoothly. Finally, the story has so much potential to be a masterpiece. Please, if you are up for a good romantic story and like werewolves, I recommend this journey!
Hello there, Author here This story revolves around the journey of a strong FL from being raised in an affectionating environment in her palace to stepping out into worldliness. On this journey of hers, a man joins supporting her secretly yet hiding his real identity. From being overthrown as the queen twice after her father's demise to protecting the people of her province from the vicious schemes of the wicked antagonist, her journey becomes the inspiration to many women. To know what it is, how it is and moreover, how she falls for the beast, read my novel, 'Falling for a Ferocious Beast'
well... i love the author... so I mah give my review now... this story is one of a kind werewolf story you could every find, its a story you'll never imagine from current werewolf stories that is about packs and all. this, however, is so different that I find it interesting to read, also i love historical, military, romance drama so yeah... there are scenes where Evelyn is doing business, that I find it intriguing. recommended for those that wanna read a different on the go werewolf stories.
Hello author can you please update your chapter. Yeet side block and update more . Uwu nice cover and synopsis. Best of luck in advance for your journey .[img=recommend][img=update] Now come back and updateeeee chapppyyy authorrr[img=exp]
I didn't expect for a female lead for this novel when I check it out or maybe, i really need glasses for my poor eyes. The story is great and a gem for a such genre of this novel. I don't know why webnovel didn't feature this on my front page😅 Keep up the good work for this Masterpiece of your!
When it comes to female lead novel I've so far encountered. This lightens the journey i as a reader am taking. The unique plot and narration are one of a kind. Highly recommendable to all readers irrespective of your favorite genre. Keep going author. Can't wait for more updates coming to my library 😍😍😍👌👌🏅🏅🥇
Evelyn is the kind of female lead I like reading and writing about. She is strong and confident, she knows what she wants and she goes for it. So far the male lead is mysterious and I guess he will reveal more about himself as the story continues. The world background is innovative and creative. The characters are well thought out and imaginative. Good luck in the contest author! 💜
The story was well executed! I can see that the narration was decent and so far so good. I like the fact that the MC was a strong one on her resolve. In combat too 😂 Story progresses in good pacing, also keeping you on your toes and never failing to give excitement on its cliffhangers. Any reader that liked this kind of genre will automatically binge-read it. Love lots and a hidden gem.
The story in one word is just A.M.A.Z.I.N.G !!!! The storyline goes in a flow and there are always cliffhanger in the end which will make you attached to your seats.
This is the first time since I use WebNovel that i read a writing that deserve a five star. Good use of punctuation, hidden gem beneath the pile of papers.
When first getting into the story, there are some immediate errors that present themselves, in chapter 1 in the forth paragraph "Slight crackling of twigs somewhere far deep in the forest caught his attention" Does not make sense, and could be rewritten as "The slight crackling." Slight errors like this as well as obvious improvements to word choice and gramatic errors are abundant in the novel. I recommend you proofread and edit all the chapters you have released and proofread especially more on unreleased chapters. Other than that I like the way you add a lot of expression into the dialogue, as many stories fail in this department , the actual interactions are ok, I'm not super impressed. The thoughts and development of the emotions and feelings between the characters are pretty well done, overall the story is pretty good, areas of improvement (without changing the story) would be in word choice, pacing and fixing the abundant errors. I hope you will not be angry with this realistic review even if it isn't 5 stars, as I know I would appreciate something like this.
This story is distinct one in the werewolf genre. Evelyn, a strong female lead character gets involved with a werewolf, and sparks created between them. The events described in the story in a wonderful way with a nice pacing. In the latest chapters, I found the werewolf's character is shown and reading that it felt that he has hatred towards humans... maybe because of a dark past or something (Can't judge as the story is in its initial phase). I would like to see how the story will unfold; how the two will fall in love and what new events are coming in their way!! My best wishes for you in this Werewolf Contest. Please support the author with Power-stones and comments. Lots of Love, CS💜