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Disgusting story, apparently some people think abuse is entertaining and "character building" this story makes me want to vomit.
Good novel! I like the way the story unfolds. Some chapters at the beginning I think they need a bit of editing, but in general it is a novel that I am enjoying. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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The first few chapters are kinda random, I'm not gonna lie. But I really enjoyed the character development to and the big fight in the beginning, even though it wasn't explained how it happened? Or at least I wasn't paying attention? But I'd really hope to see more of the adventure part to this novel and who am I kidding, I'd love to see more incubism and ecchi in this too. So keep up the good work!
Great book! Well done author. I will keep it in my library and read all the updates. Please update soon and dont make me wait too long! A true gem!
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Incubism hmm…. omoshiroi… i shall start thee novel since i thou desire ecchi and plot.…,,,,,,,,,….,,….,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,….,,,,,,,,,….,,,,,
Wait you already started!!! ok ok ok ok, I'm going to start now, today begins out war! But I have do have to admit you're doing good for a newbie, zero, but it'll take more than this to beat me muahaha...
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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Disgusting story, apparently some people think abuse is entertaining and "character building" this story makes me want to vomit.
Good novel! I like the way the story unfolds. Some chapters at the beginning I think they need a bit of editing, but in general it is a novel that I am enjoying. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
well everything is all over the place........................................................................................................
The first few chapters are kinda random, I'm not gonna lie. But I really enjoyed the character development to and the big fight in the beginning, even though it wasn't explained how it happened? Or at least I wasn't paying attention? But I'd really hope to see more of the adventure part to this novel and who am I kidding, I'd love to see more incubism and ecchi in this too. So keep up the good work!
Great book! Well done author. I will keep it in my library and read all the updates. Please update soon and dont make me wait too long! A true gem!
Wow-what a synopsis this is amazing after reading the synopsis I started reading the chapters and man!! this is amazing , I highly recommend this book please keep writing [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins]
Incubism hmm…. omoshiroi… i shall start thee novel since i thou desire ecchi and plot.…,,,,,,,,,….,,….,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,….,,,,,,,,,….,,,,,
Wait you already started!!! ok ok ok ok, I'm going to start now, today begins out war! But I have do have to admit you're doing good for a newbie, zero, but it'll take more than this to beat me muahaha...
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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