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The time is impossible to understand. Trying to follow the story gives me headaches. There is practically no mention that the MC is in UA at all and the only real hint he is Nejire mentioning that something happened to class 1-A. it jumps around way too much. The underground fighting ring came out of no where and is honestly kind of boring. The character interactions are fine, but it feels like the rest of the world is ignored completely.
bit.ly/3lyrf1n ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ร a segunda vez que venho aqui porque da primeira vez eu tinha esquecido de dar 1 estrela, aรญ tive que ver de novo essa merda, mas nรฃo vou essa uma segunda vez
Just started this ff today and I'm not gonna lie, I liked it until episode 46... what's the point of the ntr? I expected a lot but ntr? and worse still against a married couple with a grandkids... that's low man, very low
Can you remove the ntr part author, replace it with somethibg else or just remove yoshi something character. Its just that ntr part is my breaking point in your story. after countless plot hole, unconditional pacing, and many selfish action with full plot armor, it ended at ntr, i mean if you had kept ntr tag before writing 42 page chapter solely on ntr action and the next chapter on breaking a good realtion, while not even writing the whole consequence scene separate, you just mix it up with happy daily life. If you could not understand what i mean above, here a short summary. A good story with plot holes and some ok mistakes. but change to ntr story, as one of the main foundation for a female lead. so recommend adding warning like. ntr, dark mc, selfish, manipulative, ruthless, Harem.
Good writing quality, in comparison to other works where people mess up with gender of characters or smth like that, here everything is decent. Unfortunately, plot is a little lacking, probably it is very difficult to write something interesting about OP guy, but later it was said that his speedforce is incomplete etc etc etc. However, he becomes even more powerful, why are u strengthening him, if u already cannot pull something interesting with his level of power to happen. MC could be interesting if not for his limited brain capacity. He really doesn't need to hide or have double identity, no need to be hero, love interests doesn't suit his character at all. Author tried to make him caring and loving for his people, but cold and ruthless for enemy or others, but that doesn't work. In the end he become clichรฉ protag of many harem novels where everything is covered by his hypocrisy. Update rate is good, it is where u get full 5 mark, but I wish u spend more time to analyze, what do u want to do with your main hero. I better read less chapters with interesting plot than a lot of chapters that doesn't make a sense or move the plot. And I am disappointed by passive attitude of mc. World BG could be 3 stars cause some goddes is too obsessed with our protag for no reason. Literally 0 reasons to interfere or interact with MC after his reincarnation. In addition, speedforce theme is not well described, speedforce is one of the pillars that make DC multiverse in equal footing with emotional spectre or life force or gods sphere. So, if speedster is moved from DC to another univers, he losses his speedforce abilities, and if he doesn't, which means that this universe also has it. So, how quirks limit the speedforce and force it to work? U can't just make it like that without any explanation when MC can ask these questions from goddes directly.
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Too much detail about useless stuff. Like the explanation of how the restaurant look like or what flavour of the coffee is, are much more detailed than what happened in the 3-year time skip. Soooo confusing. Also the Harem. It's horrible. Personally, i like harem but this is pure cheating and MC is a scum. Gonna drop this, man.
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it uses the accursed style for dialogue meaning it is TRASHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Amazing book however the gender errors make it quite had to read at times. The execution of the powers and such are nice and the MC is not a *edgy bugger* All in all it is a good read
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i think this story as of my current reading status (chapter 49) is pretty good. Cant say I love everything specially or basically the only thing is extra pieces of speed force thing . I can see it was added to power up the character since he didn't get full unlimited amount I guess or maybe different type of speed force access? but I just don't get it anyway so I will omit lowering the score to 0 just because of one thing when others are good.
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The MC gains full control over his speed force (Flash powers) after a time skip in the first few chapters, but it is done well. The novel is not centered around the main cast or plot of MHA, but they are still present in the background and are occasionally relevant.
I love it I started reading it this morning can't believe I've gotten to the last chapter you posted feeling little bit empty right now but other than that it's a beautiful novel can't wait to see your storyline
the development of the story is a nice mix between slow and a fast paced story, because you can tell that the author is trying to develop the characters in a slow pace that would make sense if the author is trying to have us have a sense of connection to them, and it is fast by trying to get through all of the action in 1 chapter. I also like the fact that the story doesn't really care about the actual MHA universe which is basically just Easter eggs at this point. the author makes me realize that to create what I consider a good fan fic is to use whatever story your basing it off of as a template not a storyboard.
tch mc bad cringed,dont make sense why underground fighting againg for money? tch he can just stole it from street thugs that cant see you or go to other country you can run through the ocean steal money there then
just not good wasted 4 hrs trying see if it was any good. trash trash trash ๐ trash trash trash ๐ trash trash trash trash trash trash trash
i just feel betrayed after seeing the title then i saw the quirk name, its just not for me i guess so yeah sorry for the review, and i think thats it
The story is very good, its spelling is excellent and I like the idea of โโother reincarnations and it is that not many reincarnation stories in the are stupidly OP thanks to no effort at all and that basically they are very dominated and although until now we have seen the mc What did I achieve through hard training (dragon ball style) and the question of the multiverse? I love it. I hope that at some point I get to DC and that I can interact with other speedsters since, as has been seen, although they are faster, Blake has much more dominance. about his power to the point that he can use his lightning at will something that at least I have not seen used in the comics or in the series of course apart from the lightning attack But well the story itself is very good I really recommend it
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it's good. while in MHA, Mc was less included in storyline. And the drama was quite good. I could see Blake as someone who is rational and true neutral character.
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Everything fine but just problems with the time skips and stuff like that but what hurts me truly is how he treats nejire you might at first think oh what do you mean he is kind and loving and such but it just bugs me that he cheats on her with rumi and if i had to guess probably spends more time with rumi than her and after that near death incident he tells her that he wants a harem just after she survived and probably wants the comfort of him and he wants all this just because of a desire which seems to be stronger than his love for her so it gets all confusing with how much it is shown that he 'Loves' her so this is what kinda ruined the whole thing for me and it shows later on he will become more selfish and it kinda runis the whole romance part which puts me off this story but if i am wrong about this since i just got up to chapter 29 and stop there just tell me if its worth reading more
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Terrible. I advise against reading it until some additional edits are don't to the chapters. Randomly out of no where he happens to be in UA as a third year when no such thing was mentioned to even insinuate he was in UA. MC decides to tell his girlfriend he wants a harem right after almost dieing because the mc entered the underground world of quirks. His quirk was explained as to trade vitality for power but somewhere to seems to have changed into a (return to 0) type of power when once you reach human limitations he can make that his base strength and start working out all over again. Just so many things that don't add up whatsoever. I sometimes feels like chapters are just missing with how much the author just expects us to know.
The MC gains full control over his speed force (Flash powers) after a time skip in the first few chapters, but it is done well. The novel is not centered around the main cast or plot of MHA, but they are still present in the background and are occasionally relevant. The overall writing quality and story are good, with the only problem being somewhat frequent mixups of the words 'he' and 'she'.
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Honestly, I like where this story is heading and have been here since when you first published the storyโฆ even after the rewrite. Very descriptive and detailed. The author doesnโt just sudden introduce new characters, leading to a more structured and flowing storyline/plot. I really feel like this story should be more popular than it currently is. Probably just need to add more tags to the story to bring in new readers. Other than that canโt wait to see how the story progresses.
I didn't want to write but I got to chapter 38 and this thing still won't open. So I'm going to be a little brazen and try to unlock this thing by giving it 5 stars.
Maravilhoso!! A melhor fanfic envolvendo a forรงa de 'velocidade' e uma das melhores envolvendo o crescimento dos personagens!!
The time is impossible to understand. Trying to follow the story gives me headaches. There is practically no mention that the MC is in UA at all and the only real hint he is Nejire mentioning that something happened to class 1-A. it jumps around way too much. The underground fighting ring came out of no where and is honestly kind of boring. The character interactions are fine, but it feels like the rest of the world is ignored completely.
bit.ly/3lyrf1n ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ร a segunda vez que venho aqui porque da primeira vez eu tinha esquecido de dar 1 estrela, aรญ tive que ver de novo essa merda, mas nรฃo vou essa uma segunda vez
Just started this ff today and I'm not gonna lie, I liked it until episode 46... what's the point of the ntr? I expected a lot but ntr? and worse still against a married couple with a grandkids... that's low man, very low
Can you remove the ntr part author, replace it with somethibg else or just remove yoshi something character. Its just that ntr part is my breaking point in your story. after countless plot hole, unconditional pacing, and many selfish action with full plot armor, it ended at ntr, i mean if you had kept ntr tag before writing 42 page chapter solely on ntr action and the next chapter on breaking a good realtion, while not even writing the whole consequence scene separate, you just mix it up with happy daily life. If you could not understand what i mean above, here a short summary. A good story with plot holes and some ok mistakes. but change to ntr story, as one of the main foundation for a female lead. so recommend adding warning like. ntr, dark mc, selfish, manipulative, ruthless, Harem.
Good writing quality, in comparison to other works where people mess up with gender of characters or smth like that, here everything is decent. Unfortunately, plot is a little lacking, probably it is very difficult to write something interesting about OP guy, but later it was said that his speedforce is incomplete etc etc etc. However, he becomes even more powerful, why are u strengthening him, if u already cannot pull something interesting with his level of power to happen. MC could be interesting if not for his limited brain capacity. He really doesn't need to hide or have double identity, no need to be hero, love interests doesn't suit his character at all. Author tried to make him caring and loving for his people, but cold and ruthless for enemy or others, but that doesn't work. In the end he become clichรฉ protag of many harem novels where everything is covered by his hypocrisy. Update rate is good, it is where u get full 5 mark, but I wish u spend more time to analyze, what do u want to do with your main hero. I better read less chapters with interesting plot than a lot of chapters that doesn't make a sense or move the plot. And I am disappointed by passive attitude of mc. World BG could be 3 stars cause some goddes is too obsessed with our protag for no reason. Literally 0 reasons to interfere or interact with MC after his reincarnation. In addition, speedforce theme is not well described, speedforce is one of the pillars that make DC multiverse in equal footing with emotional spectre or life force or gods sphere. So, if speedster is moved from DC to another univers, he losses his speedforce abilities, and if he doesn't, which means that this universe also has it. So, how quirks limit the speedforce and force it to work? U can't just make it like that without any explanation when MC can ask these questions from goddes directly.
Spoiler enthรผllen Too much detail about useless stuff. Like the explanation of how the restaurant look like or what flavour of the coffee is, are much more detailed than what happened in the 3-year time skip. Soooo confusing. Also the Harem. It's horrible. Personally, i like harem but this is pure cheating and MC is a scum. Gonna drop this, man.
Spoiler enthรผllen it uses the accursed style for dialogue meaning it is TRASHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
ะััะพั ะดะฐะถะต ะพะฑัััะฝััั ะฝะต ะฑัะดั!๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Amazing book however the gender errors make it quite had to read at times. The execution of the powers and such are nice and the MC is not a *edgy bugger* All in all it is a good read
Spoiler enthรผllen i think this story as of my current reading status (chapter 49) is pretty good. Cant say I love everything specially or basically the only thing is extra pieces of speed force thing . I can see it was added to power up the character since he didn't get full unlimited amount I guess or maybe different type of speed force access? but I just don't get it anyway so I will omit lowering the score to 0 just because of one thing when others are good.
Spoiler enthรผllen The MC gains full control over his speed force (Flash powers) after a time skip in the first few chapters, but it is done well. The novel is not centered around the main cast or plot of MHA, but they are still present in the background and are occasionally relevant.
I love it I started reading it this morning can't believe I've gotten to the last chapter you posted feeling little bit empty right now but other than that it's a beautiful novel can't wait to see your storyline
the development of the story is a nice mix between slow and a fast paced story, because you can tell that the author is trying to develop the characters in a slow pace that would make sense if the author is trying to have us have a sense of connection to them, and it is fast by trying to get through all of the action in 1 chapter. I also like the fact that the story doesn't really care about the actual MHA universe which is basically just Easter eggs at this point. the author makes me realize that to create what I consider a good fan fic is to use whatever story your basing it off of as a template not a storyboard.
tch mc bad cringed,dont make sense why underground fighting againg for money? tch he can just stole it from street thugs that cant see you or go to other country you can run through the ocean steal money there then
just not good wasted 4 hrs trying see if it was any good. trash trash trash ๐ trash trash trash ๐ trash trash trash trash trash trash trash
i just feel betrayed after seeing the title then i saw the quirk name, its just not for me i guess so yeah sorry for the review, and i think thats it
The story is very good, its spelling is excellent and I like the idea of โโother reincarnations and it is that not many reincarnation stories in the are stupidly OP thanks to no effort at all and that basically they are very dominated and although until now we have seen the mc What did I achieve through hard training (dragon ball style) and the question of the multiverse? I love it. I hope that at some point I get to DC and that I can interact with other speedsters since, as has been seen, although they are faster, Blake has much more dominance. about his power to the point that he can use his lightning at will something that at least I have not seen used in the comics or in the series of course apart from the lightning attack But well the story itself is very good I really recommend it
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it's good. while in MHA, Mc was less included in storyline. And the drama was quite good. I could see Blake as someone who is rational and true neutral character.
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Everything fine but just problems with the time skips and stuff like that but what hurts me truly is how he treats nejire you might at first think oh what do you mean he is kind and loving and such but it just bugs me that he cheats on her with rumi and if i had to guess probably spends more time with rumi than her and after that near death incident he tells her that he wants a harem just after she survived and probably wants the comfort of him and he wants all this just because of a desire which seems to be stronger than his love for her so it gets all confusing with how much it is shown that he 'Loves' her so this is what kinda ruined the whole thing for me and it shows later on he will become more selfish and it kinda runis the whole romance part which puts me off this story but if i am wrong about this since i just got up to chapter 29 and stop there just tell me if its worth reading more
Spoiler enthรผllen Terrible. I advise against reading it until some additional edits are don't to the chapters. Randomly out of no where he happens to be in UA as a third year when no such thing was mentioned to even insinuate he was in UA. MC decides to tell his girlfriend he wants a harem right after almost dieing because the mc entered the underground world of quirks. His quirk was explained as to trade vitality for power but somewhere to seems to have changed into a (return to 0) type of power when once you reach human limitations he can make that his base strength and start working out all over again. Just so many things that don't add up whatsoever. I sometimes feels like chapters are just missing with how much the author just expects us to know.
The MC gains full control over his speed force (Flash powers) after a time skip in the first few chapters, but it is done well. The novel is not centered around the main cast or plot of MHA, but they are still present in the background and are occasionally relevant. The overall writing quality and story are good, with the only problem being somewhat frequent mixups of the words 'he' and 'she'.
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Honestly, I like where this story is heading and have been here since when you first published the storyโฆ even after the rewrite. Very descriptive and detailed. The author doesnโt just sudden introduce new characters, leading to a more structured and flowing storyline/plot. I really feel like this story should be more popular than it currently is. Probably just need to add more tags to the story to bring in new readers. Other than that canโt wait to see how the story progresses.
I didn't want to write but I got to chapter 38 and this thing still won't open. So I'm going to be a little brazen and try to unlock this thing by giving it 5 stars.
Maravilhoso!! A melhor fanfic envolvendo a forรงa de 'velocidade' e uma das melhores envolvendo o crescimento dos personagens!!