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Not that interesting, pretty mindless. Dialogue isn't great Will say not many misspelled words, so 2 stars on quality but the dialogue (especially when him and Nami meet) is hard to get through without cringing. Not for me, but thanks anyway.
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jordino comes up with great novels if only he would finish one of them 🤣🤣🐧
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Genial la novela fanfic. Me gusta que el protagonista de esta novela no sea un asiático. Los protagonista asiáticos en novelas, mangas y animes (asiáticas) son tan extraños, patéticos y psicópatas, en especial los chinos, esos son los peores; no todos pero el 99.9% lo son.
Hello thare JordinoI wanted to ask you if thare will be Lemons in this story? or they will be only on Patreon.?
Quite unconventional, I like it. I also want to know if the work will be connected to the multiverse or if this is a one-time event. (If he ended up in the world of One Piece, does that mean there are others?)
so I've read a few of jordino fics even he has never really COMPLETED ANY, he still is a good writer so for my review here we go so.. - writing quality so far has been good with basically zero grammatical errors and probably one or two spelling mistakes of there is ANY and the story so far is really understandable. -story development have been amazing with our mc so far being one that i kind like and though his power hasn't really been revealed yet since I'm not counting that Walmart gamer system as a golden finger anyways i like how the mc hasn't just been handed powers like candy just because and instead realistically looked at all the options and realized that even with foreknowledge of the plot it won't be easy to just grab powerful fruits or learn the best techniques's but has to work to earn his place in this universe and I really like that. -Character design is good since not many people have been introduced due to not having enough chapters yet but the few introduced are good enough. -updating stability is where jordino an I are REALLY GOING TO HAVE PROBLEMS -world background well it's one piece an already pre-existing universe so not much to really build but the author really understands the in universe law so overall it's a pretty good read and you should give it a try though if the author does eff up I'll let you guys know and I'll drop a review peace out
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The story is good, but what I want to know is it abandoned or is it on hiatus? Seriously, hurt me with truths, but don't deceive me with lies.
You know the deal, Jordinio writes, we read.... The only sad thing is that he cannot clone himself and write all his stories at the same time. Personally, the ones i like best are Rosario Vampire and Dragonball Z
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dont drop this like you do with all your other amazing pieces of art it hurts to get invested in stuff and just have it taken from you . . . .
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Great story, good mc, I like the stories of this author. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Please continue this book I will give u my stones everyday for the rest of my life if u do ................. .. ....................
Not that interesting, pretty mindless. Dialogue isn't great Will say not many misspelled words, so 2 stars on quality but the dialogue (especially when him and Nami meet) is hard to get through without cringing. Not for me, but thanks anyway.
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jordino comes up with great novels if only he would finish one of them 🤣🤣🐧
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
Genial la novela fanfic. Me gusta que el protagonista de esta novela no sea un asiático. Los protagonista asiáticos en novelas, mangas y animes (asiáticas) son tan extraños, patéticos y psicópatas, en especial los chinos, esos son los peores; no todos pero el 99.9% lo son.
Hello thare JordinoI wanted to ask you if thare will be Lemons in this story? or they will be only on Patreon.?
Quite unconventional, I like it. I also want to know if the work will be connected to the multiverse or if this is a one-time event. (If he ended up in the world of One Piece, does that mean there are others?)
so I've read a few of jordino fics even he has never really COMPLETED ANY, he still is a good writer so for my review here we go so.. - writing quality so far has been good with basically zero grammatical errors and probably one or two spelling mistakes of there is ANY and the story so far is really understandable. -story development have been amazing with our mc so far being one that i kind like and though his power hasn't really been revealed yet since I'm not counting that Walmart gamer system as a golden finger anyways i like how the mc hasn't just been handed powers like candy just because and instead realistically looked at all the options and realized that even with foreknowledge of the plot it won't be easy to just grab powerful fruits or learn the best techniques's but has to work to earn his place in this universe and I really like that. -Character design is good since not many people have been introduced due to not having enough chapters yet but the few introduced are good enough. -updating stability is where jordino an I are REALLY GOING TO HAVE PROBLEMS -world background well it's one piece an already pre-existing universe so not much to really build but the author really understands the in universe law so overall it's a pretty good read and you should give it a try though if the author does eff up I'll let you guys know and I'll drop a review peace out
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The story is good, but what I want to know is it abandoned or is it on hiatus? Seriously, hurt me with truths, but don't deceive me with lies.
You know the deal, Jordinio writes, we read.... The only sad thing is that he cannot clone himself and write all his stories at the same time. Personally, the ones i like best are Rosario Vampire and Dragonball Z
Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update
dont drop this like you do with all your other amazing pieces of art it hurts to get invested in stuff and just have it taken from you . . . .
Good gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Great story, good mc, I like the stories of this author. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Great story, good mc, and good powers. I read some of your other stories. ......................................................................................................................................................
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Please continue this book I will give u my stones everyday for the rest of my life if u do ................. .. ....................