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ignore this I'm trying to rate ok shoo shoo ....................................................................................... ......
Very good story, you explained everything precisely, the main couple is really good and the fights are quite fun. The best thing is how you explained the powers and the relationship he shares with his teachers is very nice, the MC is very op, but his enemy is also broken. I would recommend you put the tag of noharem, so maybe more people can see your novel. Entertaining novel, I look forward to more chapters.
if degenerates who think harem is alpha, and that no harem and true love is beta. Remember that the chaddest chad of chads, Guts only loves a single woman.
that's why if someone hates harems don't make a Fanfic where the world is a Harem story, the story just gets weird and forced normally. it's better for someone to make a fanfic in a world that contains men like kuroko no basketball so that the noharem tag becomes valid. I'll give e stars for now because it's still early for the story.
*Appears* Who has summoned me? Why are u 👇 🍆😩🤫 💪🤔🙏👁️🍆💪💪💪💪🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆 💢 💪💪 Manly eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Writing Quality (5 Stars): This is story is fairly well written, way above average of the other Webnovel fanfics. I haven't seen many grammar or spelling errors. Stability Updates (5 Stars): The author released 26 chapters in 6 days. Story Development (5 Stars): I have to say it, this story has a good development, to the point that i even forgot it was a fanfic when i was reading it. Character Design (5 Stars): I really like the mc of this fanfic, compared to all the psychos out of here, he is a normal person, with real emotions. I in particular like his kind personality and the fact that he wants to be a hero. Nowdays all the authors make their mc neutral or villain, this is to """differentiate""" them from the others. The bad thing is that now, almost all of them are neutral or anti-hero, so seeing a normal hero was like a breath of fresh air. World Background (4 Stars): This is the weak point of this story, not because is bad written, it's the opposite, the world is not bad, dark yes, but not bad written. The problem is that the mc is reincarnated in a mix of various h***ai worlds, the principal one is Kuroinu, that with the title made me avoid this story at the beginning. I started it only because i was waiting for other fanfics to update. If this story was about a normal anime/manga/novel world this story would have got much more attention. Total Score: 4.8
I would love to enjoy this story, while author made a revolutionary decision of a harem hater that everybody was asking for, this story was supposed to be the messiah for story lovers and harem haters cause its widely known that harems ruin story, but aside from all of that what we got was needless hype for something that should've been much more, harem ruins stories but this didnt need to have a harem to ruin the story, the story was already bad, the plot was there and the idea of the plot was there, but the story wasnt, the mc doesn't feel like a character, he just feels like a piece of text, plus the numerous wishes that are mostly useless if he actually wants to save the world as what he needed wasnt to be godly overpowered but to have people and followers to the cause, a cunning and smart lelouch like character would've been way better in this scenario, and not some generic mc and story, that's the problem with this novel, while it seemed promising at first, you could immediately tell the genricness of the novel in the first couple of chapters.
I'm sorry to say, but this story has to be a harem or harem-ish. I really see no way around it. Instead of helping the women your just going to put them throgh even more stress and sadness. The only way I see the mc solving this is... One: By killing 80 percent of the male population you can send the rest on an island where there restricted. And have to pay taxes through sperm, to keep the population up. Any males born would be educated and if they failed be sent to the island. Two: Make a hypnotic spell that puts all males and females in an trance where they take away males perverted tendencies and female hatred. Three: Mc marries all higher up females like queens, generals, Princess extra, to make a big alliance spaning continents. To make the men fear them in numbers.( but this could back fire and the males could do the same with someone powerful and charismatic.) Four: Make a male domesday device that makes all males impotent and to get the cure they have to bend the knee and submit by a soul contract and to behave by the rules or they die. Those are just a few ideas, but all of them need powerfull women in the world, or a harem to establish. Besides that I'm liking it so far.
its nice but i will wait for more chapter so i can speedrun this story and for me in this time being its lack of spicy? adrenaline? idk how the right word about it... i just read some good story(for me) one shot overlord X record of ragnarok and i feel exited and adrenaline rush
As a no-harem hater, Even if I created a story about harem... sorry I was forced to! .
moremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore
Ok, harem or no-harem in chapter 7, my subconscious screams that no-harem would be more enjoyable to write, but harem seems better for this fan-fic, i couldn't choose, so it is up to you guys! So go vote or whatever and I would like that you guys can write proper reasoning for it, and not spam HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM in paragraphs thanks.
Is this a harem or no harem?I want to know that before I begin reading it.I love Harem Novels and Fanfics but I like Romance ones as well.DO reply
i feel attacked lol i am a professional harem hater ................................................................................................................
Anyone remember this, I had it in my Read Later and forgot what this was. ❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❕❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔
ignore this I'm trying to rate ok shoo shoo ....................................................................................... ......
Very good story, you explained everything precisely, the main couple is really good and the fights are quite fun. The best thing is how you explained the powers and the relationship he shares with his teachers is very nice, the MC is very op, but his enemy is also broken. I would recommend you put the tag of noharem, so maybe more people can see your novel. Entertaining novel, I look forward to more chapters.
if degenerates who think harem is alpha, and that no harem and true love is beta. Remember that the chaddest chad of chads, Guts only loves a single woman.
that's why if someone hates harems don't make a Fanfic where the world is a Harem story, the story just gets weird and forced normally. it's better for someone to make a fanfic in a world that contains men like kuroko no basketball so that the noharem tag becomes valid. I'll give e stars for now because it's still early for the story.
*Appears* Who has summoned me? Why are u 👇 🍆😩🤫 💪🤔🙏👁️🍆💪💪💪💪🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆 💢 💪💪 Manly eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Writing Quality (5 Stars): This is story is fairly well written, way above average of the other Webnovel fanfics. I haven't seen many grammar or spelling errors. Stability Updates (5 Stars): The author released 26 chapters in 6 days. Story Development (5 Stars): I have to say it, this story has a good development, to the point that i even forgot it was a fanfic when i was reading it. Character Design (5 Stars): I really like the mc of this fanfic, compared to all the psychos out of here, he is a normal person, with real emotions. I in particular like his kind personality and the fact that he wants to be a hero. Nowdays all the authors make their mc neutral or villain, this is to """differentiate""" them from the others. The bad thing is that now, almost all of them are neutral or anti-hero, so seeing a normal hero was like a breath of fresh air. World Background (4 Stars): This is the weak point of this story, not because is bad written, it's the opposite, the world is not bad, dark yes, but not bad written. The problem is that the mc is reincarnated in a mix of various h***ai worlds, the principal one is Kuroinu, that with the title made me avoid this story at the beginning. I started it only because i was waiting for other fanfics to update. If this story was about a normal anime/manga/novel world this story would have got much more attention. Total Score: 4.8
I would love to enjoy this story, while author made a revolutionary decision of a harem hater that everybody was asking for, this story was supposed to be the messiah for story lovers and harem haters cause its widely known that harems ruin story, but aside from all of that what we got was needless hype for something that should've been much more, harem ruins stories but this didnt need to have a harem to ruin the story, the story was already bad, the plot was there and the idea of the plot was there, but the story wasnt, the mc doesn't feel like a character, he just feels like a piece of text, plus the numerous wishes that are mostly useless if he actually wants to save the world as what he needed wasnt to be godly overpowered but to have people and followers to the cause, a cunning and smart lelouch like character would've been way better in this scenario, and not some generic mc and story, that's the problem with this novel, while it seemed promising at first, you could immediately tell the genricness of the novel in the first couple of chapters.
I'm sorry to say, but this story has to be a harem or harem-ish. I really see no way around it. Instead of helping the women your just going to put them throgh even more stress and sadness. The only way I see the mc solving this is... One: By killing 80 percent of the male population you can send the rest on an island where there restricted. And have to pay taxes through sperm, to keep the population up. Any males born would be educated and if they failed be sent to the island. Two: Make a hypnotic spell that puts all males and females in an trance where they take away males perverted tendencies and female hatred. Three: Mc marries all higher up females like queens, generals, Princess extra, to make a big alliance spaning continents. To make the men fear them in numbers.( but this could back fire and the males could do the same with someone powerful and charismatic.) Four: Make a male domesday device that makes all males impotent and to get the cure they have to bend the knee and submit by a soul contract and to behave by the rules or they die. Those are just a few ideas, but all of them need powerfull women in the world, or a harem to establish. Besides that I'm liking it so far.
its nice but i will wait for more chapter so i can speedrun this story and for me in this time being its lack of spicy? adrenaline? idk how the right word about it... i just read some good story(for me) one shot overlord X record of ragnarok and i feel exited and adrenaline rush
As a no-harem hater, Even if I created a story about harem... sorry I was forced to! .
moremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore
Ok, harem or no-harem in chapter 7, my subconscious screams that no-harem would be more enjoyable to write, but harem seems better for this fan-fic, i couldn't choose, so it is up to you guys! So go vote or whatever and I would like that you guys can write proper reasoning for it, and not spam HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM in paragraphs thanks.
Is this a harem or no harem?I want to know that before I begin reading it.I love Harem Novels and Fanfics but I like Romance ones as well.DO reply
i feel attacked lol i am a professional harem hater ................................................................................................................
Anyone remember this, I had it in my Read Later and forgot what this was. ❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❕❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔❓❔