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I cannot go to school today" Said little Peggy Ann McKay. "I have the measles and the mumps, A gash, a rash and purple bumps. My mouth is wet, my throat is dry. I'm going blind in my right eye. My tonsils are as big as rocks, I've counted sixteen chicken pox. And there's one more - that's seventeen, And don't you think my face looks green? My leg is cut, my eyes are blue, It might be the instamatic flu. I cough and sneeze and gasp and choke, I'm sure that my left leg is broke. My hip hurts when I move my chin, My belly button's caving in. My back is wrenched, my ankle's sprained, My 'pendix pains each time it rains. My toes are cold, my toes are numb, I have a sliver in my thumb. My neck is stiff, my voice is weak, I hardly whisper when I speak. My tongue is filling up my mouth, I think my hair is falling out. My elbow's bent, my spine ain't straight, My temperature is one-o-eight. My brain is shrunk, I cannot hear, There's a hole inside my ear. I have a hangnail, and my heart is ... What? What's that? What's that you say? You say today is .............. Saturday? G'bye, I'm going out to play!
A meh novel which could be good but with a shzt author writing it made it trash ... a retar*d mc ... braindead plot plan... and shzt story placement... it's certainly good than other things but still a trash... I mean a better trash than others...
I like the story it as the same with other ร rewards but this one have good plots and funny too which makes it more like it. The mc good and funny. Hope it picked
it's a new kind of a novel and the description seems really interesting and I hope so will be the novel.๐๐๐๐๐๐....................................
I liked what I read on this site, so I went for the raws. Unfortunately, I found the novel just does not live up to it's potential. I'd say that after a certain chapter, the novel becomes 70%+ about the interaction between the MC and his wife and them just making everyone around them jealous. Also, the MC becomes a hopeless simp. For a while the whole relationship is cute and a welcome change to other novels, but then the balance breaks and it becomes the driving force of the novel. Anyways, if you prefer a slice of lice novel with some cultivation and comedy, you could do worse than this one.
great story, love it so much. writing quality is good, story development is great, character is likeable, more update please, world background is very interesting. I really hope to read more of it. thank you author, keep it up.
overall the story is good. the funny plot not so forced and not lame at all. the interesting part is about the cultivation itself. but the story need more details about the world and surrounding environtment so the imagination of the reader can be perfect when reading it. overal it's good novel and worth to spend your coins on it. i hope i can read next chapter....
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need more chapters A.S.A.P ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
one of the best, great job author. keep it up, need more chapter a.s.a.p ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Raw : ๅ จ็ไฟฎไปๆถไปฃ๏ผๆๆ็พๅๅฅๅฑ - ่ตท็นไธญๆ็ฝ. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
It was better than most of these multiplier novels up until actual battles started happening. Author has this weird idea that adding comedy to a scene where people are being burned to death somehow makes good story. MC is also completely r'tarded, this being part of the brand of "comedy". 23 chapters and then it went from fine to dogsh't within a span of 2 chapters....
(fully caught up on raws) This is the best of this genre that's not a premium exclusive. The main pairing is awesome and the girl is not a prop. The comedy relief is 10/10. So far, the story is not repetitive. The main arc that connects all worlds is super interesting and will absolutely suck you into the plot. One of best offers in a long while, recommend voting for it.
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for the mean time it's good I dunno what would happen for the next chapters but if they keep with the same pace then I think this would be very interesting, I'm fond for MC and FMC I hope they won't ruin their characters
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usually I only read few chapters In these types 100x or 10000x.. novels..afterthat I feel bored and quit reading.but I read whole 20 released chapters now.its s entertaining book until now.dont know about future chapters
Okay, so this book doesnโt have an original premise at all. BUT it is very, very well written using that premise. Also his to-be gf and him are so cute, I just love this book
Es disfrutable asรญ que si van a elegir algo que sea esto.............................. . . . . . . Kzkzkskskxjzjskd d dnkdldl l k kxlflww Zjkskwlwldlxkxkekd. Dndlelslsรฑslsldkkd
As long as it's no Harem.... I'm starting to doubt these type of Titles in CNs now. Dunno we will see I guess!!
It is my firm belief that this sucks. There's recently been this trend of I have thousand/hundred times talent/rewards/enhancements etc. and I just hope that it stops. That's all.
I cannot go to school today" Said little Peggy Ann McKay. "I have the measles and the mumps, A gash, a rash and purple bumps. My mouth is wet, my throat is dry. I'm going blind in my right eye. My tonsils are as big as rocks, I've counted sixteen chicken pox. And there's one more - that's seventeen, And don't you think my face looks green? My leg is cut, my eyes are blue, It might be the instamatic flu. I cough and sneeze and gasp and choke, I'm sure that my left leg is broke. My hip hurts when I move my chin, My belly button's caving in. My back is wrenched, my ankle's sprained, My 'pendix pains each time it rains. My toes are cold, my toes are numb, I have a sliver in my thumb. My neck is stiff, my voice is weak, I hardly whisper when I speak. My tongue is filling up my mouth, I think my hair is falling out. My elbow's bent, my spine ain't straight, My temperature is one-o-eight. My brain is shrunk, I cannot hear, There's a hole inside my ear. I have a hangnail, and my heart is ... What? What's that? What's that you say? You say today is .............. Saturday? G'bye, I'm going out to play!
A meh novel which could be good but with a shzt author writing it made it trash ... a retar*d mc ... braindead plot plan... and shzt story placement... it's certainly good than other things but still a trash... I mean a better trash than others...
I like the story it as the same with other ร rewards but this one have good plots and funny too which makes it more like it. The mc good and funny. Hope it picked
it's a new kind of a novel and the description seems really interesting and I hope so will be the novel.๐๐๐๐๐๐....................................
I liked what I read on this site, so I went for the raws. Unfortunately, I found the novel just does not live up to it's potential. I'd say that after a certain chapter, the novel becomes 70%+ about the interaction between the MC and his wife and them just making everyone around them jealous. Also, the MC becomes a hopeless simp. For a while the whole relationship is cute and a welcome change to other novels, but then the balance breaks and it becomes the driving force of the novel. Anyways, if you prefer a slice of lice novel with some cultivation and comedy, you could do worse than this one.
great story, love it so much. writing quality is good, story development is great, character is likeable, more update please, world background is very interesting. I really hope to read more of it. thank you author, keep it up.
overall the story is good. the funny plot not so forced and not lame at all. the interesting part is about the cultivation itself. but the story need more details about the world and surrounding environtment so the imagination of the reader can be perfect when reading it. overal it's good novel and worth to spend your coins on it. i hope i can read next chapter....
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need more chapters A.S.A.P ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
one of the best, great job author. keep it up, need more chapter a.s.a.p ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Spoiler enthรผllen Raw : ๅ จ็ไฟฎไปๆถไปฃ๏ผๆๆ็พๅๅฅๅฑ - ่ตท็นไธญๆ็ฝ. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
It was better than most of these multiplier novels up until actual battles started happening. Author has this weird idea that adding comedy to a scene where people are being burned to death somehow makes good story. MC is also completely r'tarded, this being part of the brand of "comedy". 23 chapters and then it went from fine to dogsh't within a span of 2 chapters....
(fully caught up on raws) This is the best of this genre that's not a premium exclusive. The main pairing is awesome and the girl is not a prop. The comedy relief is 10/10. So far, the story is not repetitive. The main arc that connects all worlds is super interesting and will absolutely suck you into the plot. One of best offers in a long while, recommend voting for it.
๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ๐คท๐ปโโ๏ธ
Really cool novel. Please support Please support Please support Please support Please support Please support Please support Please support Please support
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for the mean time it's good I dunno what would happen for the next chapters but if they keep with the same pace then I think this would be very interesting, I'm fond for MC and FMC I hope they won't ruin their characters
Okay okay. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
usually I only read few chapters In these types 100x or 10000x.. novels..afterthat I feel bored and quit reading.but I read whole 20 released chapters now.its s entertaining book until now.dont know about future chapters
Okay, so this book doesnโt have an original premise at all. BUT it is very, very well written using that premise. Also his to-be gf and him are so cute, I just love this book
Es disfrutable asรญ que si van a elegir algo que sea esto.............................. . . . . . . Kzkzkskskxjzjskd d dnkdldl l k kxlflww Zjkskwlwldlxkxkekd. Dndlelslsรฑslsldkkd
As long as it's no Harem.... I'm starting to doubt these type of Titles in CNs now. Dunno we will see I guess!!
It is my firm belief that this sucks. There's recently been this trend of I have thousand/hundred times talent/rewards/enhancements etc. and I just hope that it stops. That's all.
I enjoyed it.