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Omoshiroi~ ...................................................................................................................................................
just here because I saw the cover of uraraka smiling and pointing a gun.... great............ ...... .....................................................................
So read upto 10 chapters and i can't bring myself to read more. Basically, MC was arrogant in his school, no mention of him being the bully so just arrogant. And kids in his school didn't like it so they decided to kill him and his family. See how stupid this sounds and all his classmates knew about the plan the girls didn't like the plan but they sat on the sidelines and did nothing. Only two boys were against it but again nothing no idea if they were threatened or not but as you guessed it the plan went through and the kids brunt his house down along with his parents. MC survived due to his quirk but his parents were not so lucky. So anyways he gets temporarily adopted by mirko goes back to school breaks couple of bones of student there and is ploting revenge and i don't know how he'll avoid being the prime suspect and i don't wanna find out. So yeah i find it too stupid to read more.
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I don't understand. Where is this fan fiction good? ................................................................. .................................ΰ² _ΰ²
My only problem with this story is that Erin and Jess seem WAY to forced. Not to mention Erin is overly psychotic and stalkerish. Jess seems slightly mentally unstable and not in a way that u would normally be for someone in her situation. Also the hero name and Vigi name are both just needlessly bad. Great story and ideas. But it feels like your way too forceful in implementing your OCs. Also Kaite was just thrown in and just NEW everything with little explanation.
good book. rough beginning but your improvement is noticed. and like always love all your work <3
I donβt understand where this fanfic gets such ratings from, the ability is interesting, the story is weak. The unknown things in the first 10 chapters completely discourage the desire to read further, because it seems that they take me for an idiot who is forced to believe what is happening there, and that everything gets away with mΡ
why does everything have to be a harem, Like come on it's overused at this point and really doesn't add anything. it's everywhere on this site.
HorrΓvel, o autor tentou criar uma histΓ³ria trΓ‘gica pra criar um protagonista Dark, mas Γ© simplesmente ridΓculo e sem sentido, o protagonista parece um deficiente mental, todo mundo parece um deficiente mental. A ideia do quirk Γ© atΓ© interessante, mas todo o desenvolvimento Γ© impossΓvel de ler
well... seems fine. grammar is not good but not terrible. it can be read. also is mc powers from darwin x-men from the comics or the nerfed version of the movie?
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I Really Like The Development So Far I'm Only Confused About His Quirk Can He Make Sub-Quirks By Just Reading The Things He Wants? I Like The FF [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
your avatar fic is much more interesting than this one but nonetheless this one have some great characters interaction. One of the best mha fic I have read in a while
Oh, another story about a kind, slowpokeπ hero who will help people?Thank you for writing this, don't try to write books anymore, it's not yours.
Keep up the good work I really liked the story interesting I look forward to continuing ................................................ ...............................................
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Really good base idea for a novel so far so many possibilities for future development so little time........................................
Descent enough. I have always been interested in characters with adapting/evolving skills! Unfortunately, chapters are very short. (English is not my first language, sorry for any mistakes!)
only just started but I hope the author continues to update as the story does have lot of potential, though I would like to see how the mcs quirk develops and if it would be similar to the powers of Darwin from x-men first class
It started decently: nice Quirk, good start except for MC SUDDENDLY knowing exactly how to harm another person just enough to cripple them forever (taking into account their Quirks but forgetting about possible healing Quirks, so yeah, faulty), nice plot device to connect MC to Mirko as her disciple/successor Then... well, like in many other fics, the OC started devouring the fanfiction. I mean, an interesting OC actually doing anything other than having a 'hole' or being a rescue target is great, which isn't the case for this. Then there's the new and even more dumb/silly OC villains related to them... Finally, by chapter 30~, the story all but focuses on the OCs to the point of the author even forgetting to describe or work the characters of the actual fic world, leaving even the MC to the side. Combined with the changes that I didn't like in the general plot, like the I-Island arc all but disappearing thanks to an OC's actions FAR before the actual occurring of the arc and the seemly dead update of the story: I don't recommend this one.
Omoshiroi~ ...................................................................................................................................................
just here because I saw the cover of uraraka smiling and pointing a gun.... great............ ...... .....................................................................
So read upto 10 chapters and i can't bring myself to read more. Basically, MC was arrogant in his school, no mention of him being the bully so just arrogant. And kids in his school didn't like it so they decided to kill him and his family. See how stupid this sounds and all his classmates knew about the plan the girls didn't like the plan but they sat on the sidelines and did nothing. Only two boys were against it but again nothing no idea if they were threatened or not but as you guessed it the plan went through and the kids brunt his house down along with his parents. MC survived due to his quirk but his parents were not so lucky. So anyways he gets temporarily adopted by mirko goes back to school breaks couple of bones of student there and is ploting revenge and i don't know how he'll avoid being the prime suspect and i don't wanna find out. So yeah i find it too stupid to read more.
Spoiler enthΓΌllen I don't understand. Where is this fan fiction good? ................................................................. .................................ΰ² _ΰ²
My only problem with this story is that Erin and Jess seem WAY to forced. Not to mention Erin is overly psychotic and stalkerish. Jess seems slightly mentally unstable and not in a way that u would normally be for someone in her situation. Also the hero name and Vigi name are both just needlessly bad. Great story and ideas. But it feels like your way too forceful in implementing your OCs. Also Kaite was just thrown in and just NEW everything with little explanation.
good book. rough beginning but your improvement is noticed. and like always love all your work <3
I donβt understand where this fanfic gets such ratings from, the ability is interesting, the story is weak. The unknown things in the first 10 chapters completely discourage the desire to read further, because it seems that they take me for an idiot who is forced to believe what is happening there, and that everything gets away with mΡ
why does everything have to be a harem, Like come on it's overused at this point and really doesn't add anything. it's everywhere on this site.
HorrΓvel, o autor tentou criar uma histΓ³ria trΓ‘gica pra criar um protagonista Dark, mas Γ© simplesmente ridΓculo e sem sentido, o protagonista parece um deficiente mental, todo mundo parece um deficiente mental. A ideia do quirk Γ© atΓ© interessante, mas todo o desenvolvimento Γ© impossΓvel de ler
well... seems fine. grammar is not good but not terrible. it can be read. also is mc powers from darwin x-men from the comics or the nerfed version of the movie?
ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ€πππ€π€πππππππππππππππππππππ
I Really Like The Development So Far I'm Only Confused About His Quirk Can He Make Sub-Quirks By Just Reading The Things He Wants? I Like The FF [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
your avatar fic is much more interesting than this one but nonetheless this one have some great characters interaction. One of the best mha fic I have read in a while
Oh, another story about a kind, slowpokeπ hero who will help people?Thank you for writing this, don't try to write books anymore, it's not yours.
Keep up the good work I really liked the story interesting I look forward to continuing ................................................ ...............................................
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Really good base idea for a novel so far so many possibilities for future development so little time........................................
Descent enough. I have always been interested in characters with adapting/evolving skills! Unfortunately, chapters are very short. (English is not my first language, sorry for any mistakes!)
only just started but I hope the author continues to update as the story does have lot of potential, though I would like to see how the mcs quirk develops and if it would be similar to the powers of Darwin from x-men first class
It started decently: nice Quirk, good start except for MC SUDDENDLY knowing exactly how to harm another person just enough to cripple them forever (taking into account their Quirks but forgetting about possible healing Quirks, so yeah, faulty), nice plot device to connect MC to Mirko as her disciple/successor Then... well, like in many other fics, the OC started devouring the fanfiction. I mean, an interesting OC actually doing anything other than having a 'hole' or being a rescue target is great, which isn't the case for this. Then there's the new and even more dumb/silly OC villains related to them... Finally, by chapter 30~, the story all but focuses on the OCs to the point of the author even forgetting to describe or work the characters of the actual fic world, leaving even the MC to the side. Combined with the changes that I didn't like in the general plot, like the I-Island arc all but disappearing thanks to an OC's actions FAR before the actual occurring of the arc and the seemly dead update of the story: I don't recommend this one.