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I kinda had fun reading it lol I don't know if I'll get back to it at some point, but I'll keep it in mind. Well done OP! Don't stop writing, that's the only key to success ;)
Nice premise. Female assassin's stories are pretty rare but they have a good following. Fix the grammar and on the blurb, story. Upload a cover and you will be good to go. It was interesting. I enjoyed it.
I've read 10 chapters so far and I like everything that is going on so far. The story is fast paced, the FL is a strong character and the writing style is good. There are some typos but nothing major. I'll probably binge read this once it has more chapters😂
This is a good novel. The FL is very interesting, with a killer back story and a commendable personality. The story development is engaging and the pace is fast and efficient, keeping the action intact. The world building was also well-written. Overall, great work, Author!
The story is very promising and I always prefer the female lead, so this is the perfect novel for me to read. The writing is very good, You will need to check your spelling though, there are several spelling mistakes, I have made a few points out and change the cover if you need more attraction for your Novel. Good luck.
Ah so she's messed up huh? Interesting premise and character. A setting that'd remind me of youkyoku no Moriarty maybe a little more modern. Count me intrigued. I'm looking forward to future developments!
Powerful Female Lead with a backstory full of tragedy. Although some things doesn't make that much sense, this story has a good potential if written well
Truly amazing story!!🤩 There are many interesting things going on. I also feel sad for Sapphire...😔but I am the loving her character design👍. I am sure that something out of the unexpected will happen next 🤩. Keep updating author!!
Ever since I watched Elektra, I've been in love with female assassins. The story is definitely great so far. There are a few grammatical errors, but it's nothing too big so that can be fixed. Keep up the good work👌
I actually really like this story. The description is solid (still would like a bit more but it's acceptable), the characters are cool, it's a smooth easy read, and the grammar is legit. Well done writer, please remind me so I can keep reading your story.
An extremely powerful story! This theme, which has implications far beyond the obvious racial parallel, is skillfully handled. The incidents of the story are wholly absorbing. Parts of this experience may have been told before, but never with such freshness, intensity and power!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This is my kind of forte of writing a novel trope! I know that this kind of novel seems like it's not a cup of coffee for everyone here at Webnovel but for me, I love this kind of novel as I have tons of novels about Mafia, Assassins and Gangsters trope on my draft but I won't publish it here. For the story, I love how you execute your flow of the story and I hope to have more chapters for this novel. Just a piece of advice as I can see that there are some paragraphs that are too long for me, I guess, and might as well if you cut down some of them so that there would be a pause whenever someone reading your novel. I hope you might get what I mean ^_^ As for the book cover, you might find some temporary photos on Pinterest or might as well used some copyright-free images like in Unsplash, pexels but it would be better if you used an animated style cover since that is... what should I say, like a trend here in Webnovel so that you can gain more readers. ^_^ As for the synopsis, might as well expand it a bit more, and put some an excerpt for a little trailer so that the audience would get interested into diving your novel to read. Always remember that unique book covers and good synopsis are the ways to get your novel to get more readers ^_^ I hope my advice might help you in your career as an author and keep on writing! ^_^ P.S. I'll put this on my lib to way for more chapters. ^_^
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Definitely loved this book!!🤩 Fl is strong and brilliant. Loved that she has supper powers and is rich. Character design is great!!👌👌 Can't wait to find out what happens next!!👍 Keep updating!!
I am currently on ch 21...Such a cool story👍 filled with assassins and hackers..👌 there's tragedy and action..and a super cool FL..🤩 I so want to read more..
I kinda had fun reading it lol I don't know if I'll get back to it at some point, but I'll keep it in mind. Well done OP! Don't stop writing, that's the only key to success ;)
Nice premise. Female assassin's stories are pretty rare but they have a good following. Fix the grammar and on the blurb, story. Upload a cover and you will be good to go. It was interesting. I enjoyed it.
I've read 10 chapters so far and I like everything that is going on so far. The story is fast paced, the FL is a strong character and the writing style is good. There are some typos but nothing major. I'll probably binge read this once it has more chapters😂
This is a good novel. The FL is very interesting, with a killer back story and a commendable personality. The story development is engaging and the pace is fast and efficient, keeping the action intact. The world building was also well-written. Overall, great work, Author!
The story is very promising and I always prefer the female lead, so this is the perfect novel for me to read. The writing is very good, You will need to check your spelling though, there are several spelling mistakes, I have made a few points out and change the cover if you need more attraction for your Novel. Good luck.
Ah so she's messed up huh? Interesting premise and character. A setting that'd remind me of youkyoku no Moriarty maybe a little more modern. Count me intrigued. I'm looking forward to future developments!
Powerful Female Lead with a backstory full of tragedy. Although some things doesn't make that much sense, this story has a good potential if written well
Truly amazing story!!🤩 There are many interesting things going on. I also feel sad for Sapphire...😔but I am the loving her character design👍. I am sure that something out of the unexpected will happen next 🤩. Keep updating author!!
Ever since I watched Elektra, I've been in love with female assassins. The story is definitely great so far. There are a few grammatical errors, but it's nothing too big so that can be fixed. Keep up the good work👌
I actually really like this story. The description is solid (still would like a bit more but it's acceptable), the characters are cool, it's a smooth easy read, and the grammar is legit. Well done writer, please remind me so I can keep reading your story.
An extremely powerful story! This theme, which has implications far beyond the obvious racial parallel, is skillfully handled. The incidents of the story are wholly absorbing. Parts of this experience may have been told before, but never with such freshness, intensity and power!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This is my kind of forte of writing a novel trope! I know that this kind of novel seems like it's not a cup of coffee for everyone here at Webnovel but for me, I love this kind of novel as I have tons of novels about Mafia, Assassins and Gangsters trope on my draft but I won't publish it here. For the story, I love how you execute your flow of the story and I hope to have more chapters for this novel. Just a piece of advice as I can see that there are some paragraphs that are too long for me, I guess, and might as well if you cut down some of them so that there would be a pause whenever someone reading your novel. I hope you might get what I mean ^_^ As for the book cover, you might find some temporary photos on Pinterest or might as well used some copyright-free images like in Unsplash, pexels but it would be better if you used an animated style cover since that is... what should I say, like a trend here in Webnovel so that you can gain more readers. ^_^ As for the synopsis, might as well expand it a bit more, and put some an excerpt for a little trailer so that the audience would get interested into diving your novel to read. Always remember that unique book covers and good synopsis are the ways to get your novel to get more readers ^_^ I hope my advice might help you in your career as an author and keep on writing! ^_^ P.S. I'll put this on my lib to way for more chapters. ^_^
Spoiler enthüllen Definitely loved this book!!🤩 Fl is strong and brilliant. Loved that she has supper powers and is rich. Character design is great!!👌👌 Can't wait to find out what happens next!!👍 Keep updating!!
I am currently on ch 21...Such a cool story👍 filled with assassins and hackers..👌 there's tragedy and action..and a super cool FL..🤩 I so want to read more..