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Автор полных лох не умеющий понять что принуждение самый худший способов начать фанфик. Зачем давать предыстория если воспоминания будет стерты ? Смысл в этом в чем? Короче фанфик полное дерьмо !
Spoiler enthülleni have not read whole thing but all i can say is Mc is brainless idi**. who the **** likes to read story with mc likes this and even wolrd background is ruined
Fue mi buen fanfic si fuera posible me gustaría que isieras más como este de verdad fue de mi agrado y pienso que tienes mucho talento ,gracias por entretenerme en mi aburrimiento un abrazo por favor continua
The real rating is one star, I had to summon strength to finish the first chapter, the second chapter made me swear I would drop it if the third wasn't even slightly better, I refused to read the third chapter properly, I skipped several insignificant paragraphs and I dropped it in the fourth chapter.
It was a story that I enjoyed reading, there were some details regarding the chronology and the powers of some characters, but in general I enjoyed this story in my free time, and I think it fulfilled its purpose, so thank you author-san.
Good novel...................................................................................... .. .....................................................................................................
Thank you for giving me a part in this Journey 🎉❤️🎉 llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
No puedo decir que sea el mejor fanfic, pero es una historia para recomendar [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend], el mc por lo menos no era tonto, y es una lástima que no explotaste más la historia de escanor, me hizo reír al principio, pero quedó bastante bien, le hubieras agregado más participación o algo por el estilo.
I found this fanfic by accident and I am incredibly happy to have found it. It is a great story and if you like fairytail you will like the fanfic
2nd review after the completion of the novel. It's amazing, well written and a great story. With a lovely ending. I recommend this to anyone who wants to read this. No spoilers from me so just go and read it!
MINABLE [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The author's writing is vile. His writing style is one of the worst I've ever seen. This FanFiction was killed by the author's writing style. The updates are completely random by the way. And the protagonist gives the vibes of a Chinese protagonist who shows up all the time.
Completed it. It was a great journey, and I kinda feel like you've improved a lot, and the next ff, if you'll do another or wait until after your one piece fic will be a hit. Kinda want you to do a danmachi fic where he's a blacksmith like "inspired enchanter". I can see you doing well with that story.
Author began really good but farther in to the story then worse. MC got strong in good pace and slowly became OP but each time Author find some way to nerf him and after chapter 89 i had enough of that and stopped reading. Beacause if you plan to make MC strong and OP what's the point in nerfing him/her?? Just make him grow in slower Tempo and not finding later how to make him weaker in one or other way. So sorry but that's MY reasons for low rate of this story.
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For a while it was pretty decent but now the chapters don't matter anymore, it's just filler. Ben doesn't seem to have much to accomplish anymore, he's already incredibly strong and apart from Zeref and Acnologia, no one seems to be able to take him on. Result: while waiting to fight against them, there is no longer any challenge, and the chapters on the other characters with the tournament and such are boring. It's only my opinion but it would be better to go towards the end of the story rather than degrade it by trying to make it last longer.
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Автор полных лох не умеющий понять что принуждение самый худший способов начать фанфик. Зачем давать предыстория если воспоминания будет стерты ? Смысл в этом в чем? Короче фанфик полное дерьмо !
Spoiler enthülleni have not read whole thing but all i can say is Mc is brainless idi**. who the **** likes to read story with mc likes this and even wolrd background is ruined
Fue mi buen fanfic si fuera posible me gustaría que isieras más como este de verdad fue de mi agrado y pienso que tienes mucho talento ,gracias por entretenerme en mi aburrimiento un abrazo por favor continua
The real rating is one star, I had to summon strength to finish the first chapter, the second chapter made me swear I would drop it if the third wasn't even slightly better, I refused to read the third chapter properly, I skipped several insignificant paragraphs and I dropped it in the fourth chapter.
It was a story that I enjoyed reading, there were some details regarding the chronology and the powers of some characters, but in general I enjoyed this story in my free time, and I think it fulfilled its purpose, so thank you author-san.
Good novel...................................................................................... .. .....................................................................................................
Thank you for giving me a part in this Journey 🎉❤️🎉 llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
No puedo decir que sea el mejor fanfic, pero es una historia para recomendar [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend], el mc por lo menos no era tonto, y es una lástima que no explotaste más la historia de escanor, me hizo reír al principio, pero quedó bastante bien, le hubieras agregado más participación o algo por el estilo.
I found this fanfic by accident and I am incredibly happy to have found it. It is a great story and if you like fairytail you will like the fanfic
2nd review after the completion of the novel. It's amazing, well written and a great story. With a lovely ending. I recommend this to anyone who wants to read this. No spoilers from me so just go and read it!
MINABLE [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The author's writing is vile. His writing style is one of the worst I've ever seen. This FanFiction was killed by the author's writing style. The updates are completely random by the way. And the protagonist gives the vibes of a Chinese protagonist who shows up all the time.
Completed it. It was a great journey, and I kinda feel like you've improved a lot, and the next ff, if you'll do another or wait until after your one piece fic will be a hit. Kinda want you to do a danmachi fic where he's a blacksmith like "inspired enchanter". I can see you doing well with that story.
Author began really good but farther in to the story then worse. MC got strong in good pace and slowly became OP but each time Author find some way to nerf him and after chapter 89 i had enough of that and stopped reading. Beacause if you plan to make MC strong and OP what's the point in nerfing him/her?? Just make him grow in slower Tempo and not finding later how to make him weaker in one or other way. So sorry but that's MY reasons for low rate of this story.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️😱😱😱😱😱👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜........🙏🙏🙏🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😜😅😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😵😵😵😵😵😵😢😢😢😢😢😜😜😢😔🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤚⭐️
For a while it was pretty decent but now the chapters don't matter anymore, it's just filler. Ben doesn't seem to have much to accomplish anymore, he's already incredibly strong and apart from Zeref and Acnologia, no one seems to be able to take him on. Result: while waiting to fight against them, there is no longer any challenge, and the chapters on the other characters with the tournament and such are boring. It's only my opinion but it would be better to go towards the end of the story rather than degrade it by trying to make it last longer.
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