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You are not making a ff story its just you describe them please in next novel you plan to make avoit it i am waiting .......................
demon lucifer humbled himself by having a female partner and 3rd grade, meh, should only be yuna,erga,sekria,muzaka a worthy partner in nobility but the writer acts like a street guy who is even interested in the second hand of some random guy,lol.
Um, it could be better, but yeah, it's alright. Uh huh, good start, ok, that's fine. Oh my, just wha–nevermind. Sure, what th–sigh, just sigh...
.. ... .... .. .. ... .. . ......... .. ... . ... .. ... .. ... .... . . . ... ....... ..... ... ... .... .... .. .... ... . . ........ .. .. . Quick question, do you prefer the first picture for my novel or do you think this one is cooler.
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Spoiler enthüllen You are not making a ff story its just you describe them please in next novel you plan to make avoit it i am waiting .......................
demon lucifer humbled himself by having a female partner and 3rd grade, meh, should only be yuna,erga,sekria,muzaka a worthy partner in nobility but the writer acts like a street guy who is even interested in the second hand of some random guy,lol.
Um, it could be better, but yeah, it's alright. Uh huh, good start, ok, that's fine. Oh my, just wha–nevermind. Sure, what th–sigh, just sigh...
.. ... .... .. .. ... .. . ......... .. ... . ... .. ... .. ... .... . . . ... ....... ..... ... ... .... .... .. .... ... . . ........ .. .. . Quick question, do you prefer the first picture for my novel or do you think this one is cooler.