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I am disappointed this fic got deleted, didn't get notice till chapters were already removed
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Sube más de esta teoría me gusta muchooooooo jjjjejejdjdjdjdjdjdjd porf[img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]a
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dont wanna criticize a novel that is written purely for leisure reading pleasure..just know that if u want to read this,convert ur thinking with ur upper head to ur lower head while taking everything that happens here as a matter of fact and don't expect any logical reasoning, u can have fun here then👍..well, and cope with the low writing quality..
In the beginning, the author wrote his wishes, nothing with nothing. Over time, he began to respond to reader requests, adding stories. And because of that, I'm writing my first comment. Author, you not only saved Yoshida Saki, but you also saved Sakuragi Otome. I just don't give more than five stars, because there's no way. Thank you and keep up the good work.
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Grammer wise it could get better. Story wise its ok. You may be left unsatified by how the auther reaches closure with certain characters. 🤷♂️
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Retarted mc with the hero complex. I was already disgusted by some choices of author. Like when he make one of the girls friend with benefits and then make girl have smex wihh other guy. You know what happens next? The mc proclaim his love and become couple with this cheap harlot. If you thinking was there any romance between them or was u too harsh on calling girl harlot - she literally with mc because of his "blade" and that's why she have smex with oga, just for fun. Are you sure you hate ntr? Doesn't seems like it. But yeah, in the latest chapters guy who kill and torture bad people (they are bad so he have a perfect reason, right) go out of his way to be a hero. And help ntr pair. Woah. Are you like morally Retarted or something. I am pretty sure killing and torturing people even bad ones, is pretty evil. But that's not a point. He just give away girls because he is a nice guy. In a harem novel without even being friends with either of them. Conclusions ; soyboy trash novel.
Good novel 😍 🖎🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒
if you are bored you can read this to pass time.............................................................................................
Me agrada cómo va la historia y la creatividad que le da en cuanto a los personajes y el modo en que conoce a las protagonistas. Además, me ha interesado mucho como se desase de los antagonistas. Espero que sigas publicado más capitulos como estos👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍
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man, sadly you deleted this fix but I respect your choice. want to ask the question this is about this guy right? cause I forget about what this story is about and I remember I have read such a fix as this guy as the protagonist
I am disappointed this fic got deleted, didn't get notice till chapters were already removed
por favor broa vuele subí es una gran historia[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][i
this is a great injustice a story this good shouldn't be erased brings back the story even if you don't keep posting new chapters[img=update]
Muito bommm[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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Spoiler enthüllen Sube más de esta teoría me gusta muchooooooo jjjjejejdjdjdjdjdjdjd porf[img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]a
Spoiler enthüllen dont wanna criticize a novel that is written purely for leisure reading pleasure..just know that if u want to read this,convert ur thinking with ur upper head to ur lower head while taking everything that happens here as a matter of fact and don't expect any logical reasoning, u can have fun here then👍..well, and cope with the low writing quality..
In the beginning, the author wrote his wishes, nothing with nothing. Over time, he began to respond to reader requests, adding stories. And because of that, I'm writing my first comment. Author, you not only saved Yoshida Saki, but you also saved Sakuragi Otome. I just don't give more than five stars, because there's no way. Thank you and keep up the good work.
very goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood...............................................................................................................
👌😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏
Grammer wise it could get better. Story wise its ok. You may be left unsatified by how the auther reaches closure with certain characters. 🤷♂️
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Spoiler enthüllen Retarted mc with the hero complex. I was already disgusted by some choices of author. Like when he make one of the girls friend with benefits and then make girl have smex wihh other guy. You know what happens next? The mc proclaim his love and become couple with this cheap harlot. If you thinking was there any romance between them or was u too harsh on calling girl harlot - she literally with mc because of his "blade" and that's why she have smex with oga, just for fun. Are you sure you hate ntr? Doesn't seems like it. But yeah, in the latest chapters guy who kill and torture bad people (they are bad so he have a perfect reason, right) go out of his way to be a hero. And help ntr pair. Woah. Are you like morally Retarted or something. I am pretty sure killing and torturing people even bad ones, is pretty evil. But that's not a point. He just give away girls because he is a nice guy. In a harem novel without even being friends with either of them. Conclusions ; soyboy trash novel.
Good novel 😍 🖎🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒🖒
if you are bored you can read this to pass time.............................................................................................
Me agrada cómo va la historia y la creatividad que le da en cuanto a los personajes y el modo en que conoce a las protagonistas. Además, me ha interesado mucho como se desase de los antagonistas. Espero que sigas publicado más capitulos como estos👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Great........ ... . ......................ohxyixyxuxgxyxohxyixoyxyoxyoxihxlhyoxouxupcpuxoyxruztkxtizuñxtizhlzutzitxoyxlyxojxlhxñjcpucpupucuc
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this is GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!! .......................................................................................................................................................................................
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
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man, sadly you deleted this fix but I respect your choice. want to ask the question this is about this guy right? cause I forget about what this story is about and I remember I have read such a fix as this guy as the protagonist