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4.45

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AkshatArpit

Author here! Now that the contest is over and I didn't win (bummer) I wanted to make a few things clear. 1. I'm not dropping the story. So don't worry about it. 2. The story will be free to read till November so feel free to vote for it till then. 3. Now coming back to the story. The start of the story is slow-paced. Maybe too slow-paced for a few people. 4. Since I focused more on world-building more, the system only appears in chapter 18. If you have questions feel free to drop them as a reply to this review. And lastly, Thanks for reading!

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Thunder_XTEH

πŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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teenera

really gooooooood, just that the problem lie with the author inability to finish this marvelous work,which was a bad ideas since it got me drooling over for more chapters for a very longggggggggggggg time🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐

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Daoist0HrvWK

The novel started good. The beginning and the synopsis seemed like it would be a cliche but it turned out alright Last stopped at chapter 46 The novel went alright but what can a system novel be without females around the MC. The random cave female. She just happened to go to or be in the cave that just opened Less than an hour ago. And it opened in the same region the MC just happened to be the only one training in. Mind you, she is weak and is a burden In the cave that they were in, Thwy just so happened to meet a strong female spirit that is much stronger than the MC but has no evil motives. At the same time, She happens to know the Mc system. Sure it can be explained with prophecy. But then that would mean that the priestess of his own tribe would know about it as well. And as he was walking deeper into the cave. He already mentioned that monsters don’t usually go in. And the monsters deeper inside won’t go out of the cave. So it stands to reason that the first cave should be quite safe. But shocker that isn’t a shocker, He brings the deadweight with him and lo & behold, she gets blessed by the super strong female so she isn’t a total deadweight only a simple deadweight. I just stopped around there. Feels like

2yr
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Yamwel_San_Antonio

Exp ................................................................................................................................

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lucifer117

Another story from my brother (Not by blood haha). Either way, I have only read up to chap 45, and so far, it is one of the best pieces I have ever read from him (Apart from the rise of a porter). I hope he finds even more success than he has before. Al the best brother!

3yr
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Darky09

I remember the Rise of the porter, during that time Author was still new, but after reading this, author level has gone from lvl 6 to lv10 (max). He has grown so much. This novel is a hidden gem

3yr
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Lee_Sparrow

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

3yr
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m2goeas
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Need more. Enjoying the character and story development. Please and thank you! Great story thus far. As someone of indigenous descent. Overly happy to see a story that is more ''native'' based.

3yr
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I_am_fucked

I am the bone of my exp, Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood, I've created over thousand useless reviews, Unknown to death, nor known to life, Have withstood my pain to write many comments, Yet those hands will never hold anything, Thus, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works

3yr
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ShadowDragoon

I love how its playing out so far as well as the development of the character and the people around them. Its alos extraordinary how it play out with how he is seen or treated by those around him and how the outside world and sub character background. βŠ‚_ヽ γ€€ οΌΌοΌΌ γ€€γ€€ οΌΌ( Ν‘Β° ΝœΚ– Ν‘Β°) γ€€γ€€γ€€ >γ€€βŒ’γƒ½ γ€€γ€€γ€€/γ€€ へ\ γ€€γ€€ /γ€€γ€€/γ€€οΌΌοΌΌ γ€€γ€€ οΎšγ€€γƒŽγ€€γ€€ ヽ_぀ γ€€γ€€/γ€€/ γ€€ /γ€€/| γ€€(γ€€(ヽ γ€€|γ€€|、\ γ€€| δΈΏ οΌΌ βŒ’) γ€€| |γ€€γ€€) / γƒŽ )γ€€γ€€LοΎ‰ (_/

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Skaar
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This novel has a lot of potential. I hope you don't give it up.update it more often.[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

3yr
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AkshatArpit

Author here! Now that the contest is over and I didn't win (bummer) I wanted to make a few things clear. 1. I'm not dropping the story. So don't worry about it. 2. The story will be free to read till November so feel free to vote for it till then. 3. Now coming back to the story. The start of the story is slow-paced. Maybe too slow-paced for a few people. 4. Since I focused more on world-building more, the system only appears in chapter 18. If you have questions feel free to drop them as a reply to this review. And lastly, Thanks for reading!

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3yr
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Thunder_XTEH

πŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘ŽπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

2yr
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teenera

really gooooooood, just that the problem lie with the author inability to finish this marvelous work,which was a bad ideas since it got me drooling over for more chapters for a very longggggggggggggg time🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐

2yr
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Daoist0HrvWK

The novel started good. The beginning and the synopsis seemed like it would be a cliche but it turned out alright Last stopped at chapter 46 The novel went alright but what can a system novel be without females around the MC. The random cave female. She just happened to go to or be in the cave that just opened Less than an hour ago. And it opened in the same region the MC just happened to be the only one training in. Mind you, she is weak and is a burden In the cave that they were in, Thwy just so happened to meet a strong female spirit that is much stronger than the MC but has no evil motives. At the same time, She happens to know the Mc system. Sure it can be explained with prophecy. But then that would mean that the priestess of his own tribe would know about it as well. And as he was walking deeper into the cave. He already mentioned that monsters don’t usually go in. And the monsters deeper inside won’t go out of the cave. So it stands to reason that the first cave should be quite safe. But shocker that isn’t a shocker, He brings the deadweight with him and lo & behold, she gets blessed by the super strong female so she isn’t a total deadweight only a simple deadweight. I just stopped around there. Feels like

2yr
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Yamwel_San_Antonio

Exp ................................................................................................................................

3yr
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lucifer117

Another story from my brother (Not by blood haha). Either way, I have only read up to chap 45, and so far, it is one of the best pieces I have ever read from him (Apart from the rise of a porter). I hope he finds even more success than he has before. Al the best brother!

3yr
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Darky09

I remember the Rise of the porter, during that time Author was still new, but after reading this, author level has gone from lvl 6 to lv10 (max). He has grown so much. This novel is a hidden gem

3yr
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Lee_Sparrow

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

3yr
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m2goeas
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Need more. Enjoying the character and story development. Please and thank you! Great story thus far. As someone of indigenous descent. Overly happy to see a story that is more ''native'' based.

3yr
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I_am_fucked

I am the bone of my exp, Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood, I've created over thousand useless reviews, Unknown to death, nor known to life, Have withstood my pain to write many comments, Yet those hands will never hold anything, Thus, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works

3yr
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ShadowDragoon

I love how its playing out so far as well as the development of the character and the people around them. Its alos extraordinary how it play out with how he is seen or treated by those around him and how the outside world and sub character background. βŠ‚_ヽ γ€€ οΌΌοΌΌ γ€€γ€€ οΌΌ( Ν‘Β° ΝœΚ– Ν‘Β°) γ€€γ€€γ€€ >γ€€βŒ’γƒ½ γ€€γ€€γ€€/γ€€ へ\ γ€€γ€€ /γ€€γ€€/γ€€οΌΌοΌΌ γ€€γ€€ οΎšγ€€γƒŽγ€€γ€€ ヽ_぀ γ€€γ€€/γ€€/ γ€€ /γ€€/| γ€€(γ€€(ヽ γ€€|γ€€|、\ γ€€| δΈΏ οΌΌ βŒ’) γ€€| |γ€€γ€€) / γƒŽ )γ€€γ€€LοΎ‰ (_/

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Skaar
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This novel has a lot of potential. I hope you don't give it up.update it more often.[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

3yr
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