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I hope the author continues the novel cuz it's really good the story development and the character design are amazing
all I need to know its the different rank, im about 400 chaps in but I still don't know which comes before others in the higher end it would be great if it could be put in the description of the novel
when will the second part will be updated?.....................The Novel is great...........................................................
Hey Author, I really enjoyed the Story, Overall This was a genuine surprise as I have read many Martial art style novels and they felt mostly unoriginal and pretty boring since its basically a repeat of other novels in the same genre but this novel it captivated me very quickly, The character building and martial arts described seemed to flow very naturally which is why it saddens me to know you are stopping after the last chapter but I understand your reasons and hope that someday you can come back to this with better writing skills and a healthier mindset though as I said before I though this was incredibly well done
i wont give this novel any rank coz when i started reading this i thought it is a finished work but it turned out to be a dumped one so it doesn't matter how good the novel is if there is no good ending.
Kurogami ichiro? Nahh, why not use Kurosaki Ichigo along the way? ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
4-5-3-1-5 Translation quality good for someone from Finland. 4 Update very good for part time job. 5 Story has great development but author need more time to think before writing story. 3 Only thing I hated about this is MC character design and for other side character quite nice. 1 World background very good because I like world focus martial art and beast like Novel or manga Global Martial Arts. 5 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Vcyufyfydtccuuvuvfuuffuyffjvjufhffhhfyfyffugjvjgjvjvjgjjgjvgjhfhfgjgjvjcjfjgjgjgjvjvjvjvjvjvjvjvjgjgjvjgkgkhkhkgkgkgkgkkgkggjgkjgjgigjgugugugugiggjgjgkhkgk
Loved this book read it from the time it was first released till the last chapter hopefully you won’t keep this on the back burner and pump out the next exciting arc all the best and thanks for what you have done so far [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
this is great to read but sadly author du...mped it ... i hope he will restart this.............................................................
I like how the story started with him growing in strength for the first few chapters and how there was an entire arc for him coming to terms with the fact that he didn't steal anyone's body, especially how he then became a teenager mentally only that he had memories and experiences from his past life. Cause in some novels in similar situations there is always that age barrier between the MC and their peers and rarely any character development to break through that barrier. So I'm happy with how the MC developed
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I really like this story. Of course, it has its problems and it's not perfect. Often forces illogical situations for the sake of action. However, it remains a good work, because it is very focused on fights and martial arts. Watching Ichigo grow was sensational. It is a pity that the work is ending like this, without a conclusion. I am sad that the author stopped feeling pleasure in writing the work. Unfortunately, this creates insecurity. Is it worth investing my time and money in a new novel by the same author, since he can give it up at any time? I was really disappointed, really, I really wanted to know how the work ends and how far Ichigo would go. Unfortunately, the author's other work is about video games and for me these works don't have much appeal, they don't bring me any emotion when reading. I'll wait for the author to publish other works to give it a chance again and maybe one day he'll decide to write Martial Arts System again.
I love they story so far bro, but it really suck because I don't have any money so I can't watch the rest of the chapter and I am stuck on 45. so I wish I did not have the system where you have to buy the chapters to read them.
It is an awesome piece of work. Do give it a go! It has all elements which makes a reader to not leave the novel, from Action to romance , slice of life and more.
Alekzi did good with this. Unlike White Online, Martial Arts System is more action packed and emotional. I absolutely adore the way he built Ichiro and the world he lives in.
the beginning can be a little difficult, but without a doubt from the second volume onwards it was very good! and now the story is amazing!!!! the author is very good doing the current fights and continuing the story, I highly recommend reading, don't leave at the beginning!
Great book just wish it had a better ending. The way it ended in a cliff hanger is a little disappointing but I always had a fun time reading the book.
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A good story with solid character and good development. needs to give updates on side character that were mentioned to impact the future but little is known of their current status. recommended the read
Very solid and quite entertaining world and story. Sad to see it go into a hiatus but understandable. Awaiting authors return to this novel. Hopefully one day...
Not bad. I enjoyed it a lot. Can’t wait to see what the future holds for this story. I guess we’ll to wait for that time to come. Thanks a lot 🙏
loving this book. everything seems to flow smoothly as it should. the characters are pretty original and their backgrounds are excellent and the plot captivating
So, this is my first review. First and foremost, the first half of the chapters when it comes to writing are dull at first, then at the second half, it gets better and so on. I wish someone will create a wiki for this novel because this novel is an amazing bunch!
Definitely 5 stars! I love the story and it keeps getting better and better. I love the new cover, too! The author updates the story daily with at least 2 chapters.
Author Alekzi made the best change by noting that he was doing something that didn't make much sense as Ichiro himself had already criticized harem works at the beginning and said he wanted to have a wife and children. I love the couple of Azura and Ichiro novel (my favorite author made all the novels) and I felt that grip in my heart, I was sad and thought a lot about stopping when I don't read a chapter because my favorite in the future of my favorite novel, I even did poorly on a college test because I was distracted, I only managed to improve when I saw a comment warning about the change. As for the change being made at the beginning of the novel, I think it was abrupt, as several authors made mistakes and followed with them even after the quality and even the logic of the new ones sometimes. Alekzy saw that and had the courage to make the author better it was better to change what I meant this is my favorite novel and Ichiro and Azura my favorite couple. It will only prove to be consistent so that a chapter becomes unique, one that will become unique and become better too, as this couple can better introduce themselves to their brother Aether and form Ariel to their brother Aether and form one more, as this couple her best friend different from the other characters to be interested in others who are not the protagonist and form other cool pairs. So, in order to keep a novel at the best quality with minimal errors, this small change for the better was both fair and necessary. (Translation done on Google because I'm kind of bad at English)
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i want to give this novel 5 star, but author really make me disappointed, why? simple, you know, the author decided to change the script in chapter 174, ariel should become his second women, but later he change it, making her to be only azura best friend, it doesnt sit well for me, if it from the start author write it like that, its fine, but changing it later, a big no for me, i dont care it have harem or not, doesnt matter for me, its normal for author make mistake, it will be good for author development in career and skill, but changing it like that, where would you learn from your mistake, making mistake will make you regret your decision,but, i belive it will make you try better
Spoiler enthüllen I am very grateful to the author for deciding to focus on Azura and Ichiro's relationship and change his mind about Ariel and the harem, when I read chapter 174 I was very desperate thinking that the romance I love would be broken and when the author changed his mind I felt such a relief that I can't explain it. This novel is my favorite right now and one of the things I love is the romance of Azura and Ichiro, no matter what people say Azura and Ichiro are my favorite couple and I'm really looking forward to seeing their development. Author, thank you for creating this work and this couple, thank you very much.
Until chapter 2, I can see the attempts in highlighting the character’s dissatisfaction for not being able to live to his fullest, which is shown through a monotone narrative. Though, too monotone that it feels bland through the forceful efforts in making it sound realistic. I don’t blame this, but to me, it’s a big turn-off, especially when he refers to the System without any hints of surprise or confusion, then he proceeds to be surprised that he is not in the same world. So far, it’s not too bad. I like the approach to the monotone narrative. It fits the character who is a middle-aged man, creating a feel of wisdom, which is also juxtaposed by his childish inner dialogues, showing how he might not be exactly reliable. But, who knows?
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I hope the author continues the novel cuz it's really good the story development and the character design are amazing
all I need to know its the different rank, im about 400 chaps in but I still don't know which comes before others in the higher end it would be great if it could be put in the description of the novel
when will the second part will be updated?.....................The Novel is great...........................................................
Hey Author, I really enjoyed the Story, Overall This was a genuine surprise as I have read many Martial art style novels and they felt mostly unoriginal and pretty boring since its basically a repeat of other novels in the same genre but this novel it captivated me very quickly, The character building and martial arts described seemed to flow very naturally which is why it saddens me to know you are stopping after the last chapter but I understand your reasons and hope that someday you can come back to this with better writing skills and a healthier mindset though as I said before I though this was incredibly well done
i wont give this novel any rank coz when i started reading this i thought it is a finished work but it turned out to be a dumped one so it doesn't matter how good the novel is if there is no good ending.
Kurogami ichiro? Nahh, why not use Kurosaki Ichigo along the way? ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
4-5-3-1-5 Translation quality good for someone from Finland. 4 Update very good for part time job. 5 Story has great development but author need more time to think before writing story. 3 Only thing I hated about this is MC character design and for other side character quite nice. 1 World background very good because I like world focus martial art and beast like Novel or manga Global Martial Arts. 5 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Vcyufyfydtccuuvuvfuuffuyffjvjufhffhhfyfyffugjvjgjvjvjgjjgjvgjhfhfgjgjvjcjfjgjgjgjvjvjvjvjvjvjvjvjgjgjvjgkgkhkhkgkgkgkgkkgkggjgkjgjgigjgugugugugiggjgjgkhkgk
Loved this book read it from the time it was first released till the last chapter hopefully you won’t keep this on the back burner and pump out the next exciting arc all the best and thanks for what you have done so far [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
this is great to read but sadly author du...mped it ... i hope he will restart this.............................................................
I like how the story started with him growing in strength for the first few chapters and how there was an entire arc for him coming to terms with the fact that he didn't steal anyone's body, especially how he then became a teenager mentally only that he had memories and experiences from his past life. Cause in some novels in similar situations there is always that age barrier between the MC and their peers and rarely any character development to break through that barrier. So I'm happy with how the MC developed
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I really like this story. Of course, it has its problems and it's not perfect. Often forces illogical situations for the sake of action. However, it remains a good work, because it is very focused on fights and martial arts. Watching Ichigo grow was sensational. It is a pity that the work is ending like this, without a conclusion. I am sad that the author stopped feeling pleasure in writing the work. Unfortunately, this creates insecurity. Is it worth investing my time and money in a new novel by the same author, since he can give it up at any time? I was really disappointed, really, I really wanted to know how the work ends and how far Ichigo would go. Unfortunately, the author's other work is about video games and for me these works don't have much appeal, they don't bring me any emotion when reading. I'll wait for the author to publish other works to give it a chance again and maybe one day he'll decide to write Martial Arts System again.
I love they story so far bro, but it really suck because I don't have any money so I can't watch the rest of the chapter and I am stuck on 45. so I wish I did not have the system where you have to buy the chapters to read them.
It is an awesome piece of work. Do give it a go! It has all elements which makes a reader to not leave the novel, from Action to romance , slice of life and more.
Alekzi did good with this. Unlike White Online, Martial Arts System is more action packed and emotional. I absolutely adore the way he built Ichiro and the world he lives in.
the beginning can be a little difficult, but without a doubt from the second volume onwards it was very good! and now the story is amazing!!!! the author is very good doing the current fights and continuing the story, I highly recommend reading, don't leave at the beginning!
Great book just wish it had a better ending. The way it ended in a cliff hanger is a little disappointing but I always had a fun time reading the book.
Spoiler enthüllen A good story with solid character and good development. needs to give updates on side character that were mentioned to impact the future but little is known of their current status. recommended the read
Very solid and quite entertaining world and story. Sad to see it go into a hiatus but understandable. Awaiting authors return to this novel. Hopefully one day...
Not bad. I enjoyed it a lot. Can’t wait to see what the future holds for this story. I guess we’ll to wait for that time to come. Thanks a lot 🙏
loving this book. everything seems to flow smoothly as it should. the characters are pretty original and their backgrounds are excellent and the plot captivating
So, this is my first review. First and foremost, the first half of the chapters when it comes to writing are dull at first, then at the second half, it gets better and so on. I wish someone will create a wiki for this novel because this novel is an amazing bunch!
Definitely 5 stars! I love the story and it keeps getting better and better. I love the new cover, too! The author updates the story daily with at least 2 chapters.
Author Alekzi made the best change by noting that he was doing something that didn't make much sense as Ichiro himself had already criticized harem works at the beginning and said he wanted to have a wife and children. I love the couple of Azura and Ichiro novel (my favorite author made all the novels) and I felt that grip in my heart, I was sad and thought a lot about stopping when I don't read a chapter because my favorite in the future of my favorite novel, I even did poorly on a college test because I was distracted, I only managed to improve when I saw a comment warning about the change. As for the change being made at the beginning of the novel, I think it was abrupt, as several authors made mistakes and followed with them even after the quality and even the logic of the new ones sometimes. Alekzy saw that and had the courage to make the author better it was better to change what I meant this is my favorite novel and Ichiro and Azura my favorite couple. It will only prove to be consistent so that a chapter becomes unique, one that will become unique and become better too, as this couple can better introduce themselves to their brother Aether and form Ariel to their brother Aether and form one more, as this couple her best friend different from the other characters to be interested in others who are not the protagonist and form other cool pairs. So, in order to keep a novel at the best quality with minimal errors, this small change for the better was both fair and necessary. (Translation done on Google because I'm kind of bad at English)
Spoiler enthüllen i want to give this novel 5 star, but author really make me disappointed, why? simple, you know, the author decided to change the script in chapter 174, ariel should become his second women, but later he change it, making her to be only azura best friend, it doesnt sit well for me, if it from the start author write it like that, its fine, but changing it later, a big no for me, i dont care it have harem or not, doesnt matter for me, its normal for author make mistake, it will be good for author development in career and skill, but changing it like that, where would you learn from your mistake, making mistake will make you regret your decision,but, i belive it will make you try better
Spoiler enthüllen I am very grateful to the author for deciding to focus on Azura and Ichiro's relationship and change his mind about Ariel and the harem, when I read chapter 174 I was very desperate thinking that the romance I love would be broken and when the author changed his mind I felt such a relief that I can't explain it. This novel is my favorite right now and one of the things I love is the romance of Azura and Ichiro, no matter what people say Azura and Ichiro are my favorite couple and I'm really looking forward to seeing their development. Author, thank you for creating this work and this couple, thank you very much.
Until chapter 2, I can see the attempts in highlighting the character’s dissatisfaction for not being able to live to his fullest, which is shown through a monotone narrative. Though, too monotone that it feels bland through the forceful efforts in making it sound realistic. I don’t blame this, but to me, it’s a big turn-off, especially when he refers to the System without any hints of surprise or confusion, then he proceeds to be surprised that he is not in the same world. So far, it’s not too bad. I like the approach to the monotone narrative. It fits the character who is a middle-aged man, creating a feel of wisdom, which is also juxtaposed by his childish inner dialogues, showing how he might not be exactly reliable. But, who knows?
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