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Really enjoyed this, been coming back now and again hoping you'd carry on with the story, is there any chance you'll ever carry on with this, or is it just done ?
Although very rough at the start it was great to see the authors progression as a writer and the character progression. is the story perfect? No but that's what I like about it and with how well white online was done I hope the author revisits this series even if it need a rewrite of some sort because the development of the world and characters was still very engaging. The System could be utilised a bit more however maybe that would make the MC op and I honestly think that if the author felt that then just keep it as is.
I don’t know about the novel but the comments are top tier if anything I spent most of my time reading the comments😂
SPOILER: This is only part one of a novel that has yet to be fiinished. After reading the author's final comments at the end of the novel, I can now understand while it was lacking in many areas. I liked the MC who wasn't OP and lived the morally gray area. It think the MAS was extremely under utilized and, too me, barely mattered in the MC's journey unlike most related novels. The lack of closure is also disappointing but I underrstand the author's reason. For a 1st novel, it was a decent start. I definitely liked the author's White Online novel much better. I hope to see a continuation of this story in the future.
thoroughly enjoyed reading this despite the authors reluctance with the writing, hope you come back to continue.
this is a masterpiece and I hope author-nim lives a happy life and continues to grow
My only problem is the FPP. IDK if this is going to be a good novel. but I must say.. I quit because of the FPP. If it's the TPP, I might try to read this. FPP is best for games. not for novels. (For me at least)🤣🤣🤣
It's really a tremendous novel, the techniques, the story...I really wish you would continue soon...expectations on his transformation and rank❤️
quite disappointed in the author he doesn't even have the guts to write what he wanted......changing the story midway because of a suggestion quite a good story though...but the author👎 nothing serious tho
Amazing story with great characters but sadly the auther stopped making chapters but hopefully they will return 🙏
Great book can’t wait for the next part hope you can find your spark again for this masterpiece
I loved this, it was super funny to me and was overall an amazing read. Im so sad that the author didn’t finish it but I cannot be helped. 20/10 I definitely recommend as it is one of my top favorites.
I understand the author didn't like working on this story, but i prefer this one over white online 100%. Never got bored reading this, even though there were some grammar issues.
What happened to the book? It was honestly quite fun even though it had some rough moments. hope you continue it later on, will check out your other works though.
Still in my heart number 1 don't care what people say. hope you return soon. .....................................................................
The aspects of fighting are well written, like for example from where to where the punch or kick is going or added rotation movement to strike faster or more poverful. (If u like this kind of thing in novel, u know what to do) Also the story alone is not like typical “power up the Mc novel” there are moments when u can be surprised by the plot. The world itself has some mystery, like “continent” (u will know if u read 😉) or the „power” that fill the world. Find yourself what it is or just wait like me to find a full answers😅😊
well, unhappy with the story, and then dropped out the story. I think the story was quite interesting, but well, if the author was not happy then its also pointless to continue the story.
A great novel that was given up on too early. It seemed like the author listened to readers comments a bit too much and went back and rewrote chapters which changed future paths he had already visualized. While it's good to learn from mistakes and try to make fans happy, don't ever let them change your novel midway through. This will change the way the author writes the rest of the novel even if it's subconsciously, which in this case seemed to wilt his enthusiasm for this one, which ended up causing it to get dropped suddenly. Don't get me wrong, I enjoy White Online, but my personal opinion and a few of my buddies who've read both agree that Martial Arts Master was overall a better read and had even greater potential if it wasn't dropped. I hope that someday in the future the author either continues on, or rewrites the novel and does what he imagines without other's changing his views. Either way, I'm enjoying the reread I'm doing.
I really enjoyed reading the book, even if the author makes many grammatical and wording errors. The world has a lot of potential and I really hope there will be a book 2!
We need continuation, presumably when he reached divinity he would be kidnapped by Father-in-law for a new challenge in the celestial realm “Trainng”.
is there alot of comedy or is it a comedy novel cause i like serious novels i dont like comedy novels so i wonder if anyone can tell me if this is my cup of tea
I don't read books on this platform for their professional quality. This is definitely not one of them. However, the book has all the core pieces to draw you in. It's strengths make it easy to ignore the weak parts. I'd love to see more when the author decides to continue the story.
One of the best novels I have read despite the urge to drop it in the first 40 chapters. They were rough to read but somehow quite entertaining. I’m glad I continued reading and saw not only the characters growth but also the author’s. It saddened me to get to the end and find out that is only part one-indefinitely- of this amazing series bc like I WANT MORE but I understand, hope the author is able to come back sometime soon to this story
Copying my post from ch 12: Ayo, I really tried guys but the grammar is so bad I find myself putting together the sentences in my head. Great story premise, bad construction. Also, you can’t have the MC talking about leaving no witnesses then leaving witnesses. Show us he’s the smart, hardworking, cold blooded assassin you introduced him as instead of restating it every chapter. It makes it less believable. Wanted to leave this constructive criticism before I left the novel. Keep grinding Mr. Author! My summary of thoughts of the past 12 chapters: I think its possible to do cliche isekai stories well, which is why i still read them. I really wanted so badly for this to be one of those but there are a few glaring weaknesses Character design: It is reiterated that Ichiro was a man who devoted his entire life to martial arts, and was a contracted assassin for the government. That's it, no real fleshing out of his personality, except for stereotypical "smart, cold blooded, mature MC" He also has this strange hero complex where he acknowledges he's a killer, yet when he is forced to kill for the first time in this world he for some reason denies that he's a murderer? It doesn't make sense. When introducing side characters there's a way to introduce them to make the reader care about them. I don't care about any of these characters, nor does it seem like the author does either. We spend one chapter on his new family and besides his sister, i don't remember the parents. I mean, the father was introduced at the end of his school day and he was introduced like an afterthought "Oh yeah, I met my father for the first time and he felt like my father" And then we move on with the story. The world was also introduced like an afterthought. We get introduced to the setting during his history class, and the info dump is done in run on sentences. We also get no info on the school:is this the best one in the country? Why, if the world needs more martial artists is it that instead of being a martial arts school, the discipline is relegated to an afterschool club? Is there a reason behind this or was the school designed just to satisfy the obligatory academy arc in each novel? Story Development: More of the same from world background, it all felt kind of rushed and i feel like the author could've taken his time writing out the academy, his family, giving the reader a sense of Ichiros personality, and the introduction of the 'system'. In these kinds of stories, there always ends up being a reason behind the system being given:Do other people have it? Can Ichiro ask about that? We don't even know if his classmates can use it, it seems like we're supposed to infer that they can't Writing Quality: I could've looked past the rest of these issues if the grammar was at least passable but too many run on sentences, too much reiteration, and clunky sentences. All in all, this has potential, and i'd like it to reach that to it's fullest
It was a very good book so far I hope he continues it in the futur I enjoyed every seconde
Really enjoyed this, been coming back now and again hoping you'd carry on with the story, is there any chance you'll ever carry on with this, or is it just done ?
Although very rough at the start it was great to see the authors progression as a writer and the character progression. is the story perfect? No but that's what I like about it and with how well white online was done I hope the author revisits this series even if it need a rewrite of some sort because the development of the world and characters was still very engaging. The System could be utilised a bit more however maybe that would make the MC op and I honestly think that if the author felt that then just keep it as is.
I don’t know about the novel but the comments are top tier if anything I spent most of my time reading the comments😂
SPOILER: This is only part one of a novel that has yet to be fiinished. After reading the author's final comments at the end of the novel, I can now understand while it was lacking in many areas. I liked the MC who wasn't OP and lived the morally gray area. It think the MAS was extremely under utilized and, too me, barely mattered in the MC's journey unlike most related novels. The lack of closure is also disappointing but I underrstand the author's reason. For a 1st novel, it was a decent start. I definitely liked the author's White Online novel much better. I hope to see a continuation of this story in the future.
thoroughly enjoyed reading this despite the authors reluctance with the writing, hope you come back to continue.
this is a masterpiece and I hope author-nim lives a happy life and continues to grow
My only problem is the FPP. IDK if this is going to be a good novel. but I must say.. I quit because of the FPP. If it's the TPP, I might try to read this. FPP is best for games. not for novels. (For me at least)🤣🤣🤣
It's really a tremendous novel, the techniques, the story...I really wish you would continue soon...expectations on his transformation and rank❤️
quite disappointed in the author he doesn't even have the guts to write what he wanted......changing the story midway because of a suggestion quite a good story though...but the author👎 nothing serious tho
Amazing story with great characters but sadly the auther stopped making chapters but hopefully they will return 🙏
Great book can’t wait for the next part hope you can find your spark again for this masterpiece
I loved this, it was super funny to me and was overall an amazing read. Im so sad that the author didn’t finish it but I cannot be helped. 20/10 I definitely recommend as it is one of my top favorites.
I understand the author didn't like working on this story, but i prefer this one over white online 100%. Never got bored reading this, even though there were some grammar issues.
What happened to the book? It was honestly quite fun even though it had some rough moments. hope you continue it later on, will check out your other works though.
Still in my heart number 1 don't care what people say. hope you return soon. .....................................................................
The aspects of fighting are well written, like for example from where to where the punch or kick is going or added rotation movement to strike faster or more poverful. (If u like this kind of thing in novel, u know what to do) Also the story alone is not like typical “power up the Mc novel” there are moments when u can be surprised by the plot. The world itself has some mystery, like “continent” (u will know if u read 😉) or the „power” that fill the world. Find yourself what it is or just wait like me to find a full answers😅😊
well, unhappy with the story, and then dropped out the story. I think the story was quite interesting, but well, if the author was not happy then its also pointless to continue the story.
A great novel that was given up on too early. It seemed like the author listened to readers comments a bit too much and went back and rewrote chapters which changed future paths he had already visualized. While it's good to learn from mistakes and try to make fans happy, don't ever let them change your novel midway through. This will change the way the author writes the rest of the novel even if it's subconsciously, which in this case seemed to wilt his enthusiasm for this one, which ended up causing it to get dropped suddenly. Don't get me wrong, I enjoy White Online, but my personal opinion and a few of my buddies who've read both agree that Martial Arts Master was overall a better read and had even greater potential if it wasn't dropped. I hope that someday in the future the author either continues on, or rewrites the novel and does what he imagines without other's changing his views. Either way, I'm enjoying the reread I'm doing.
I really enjoyed reading the book, even if the author makes many grammatical and wording errors. The world has a lot of potential and I really hope there will be a book 2!
We need continuation, presumably when he reached divinity he would be kidnapped by Father-in-law for a new challenge in the celestial realm “Trainng”.
is there alot of comedy or is it a comedy novel cause i like serious novels i dont like comedy novels so i wonder if anyone can tell me if this is my cup of tea
I don't read books on this platform for their professional quality. This is definitely not one of them. However, the book has all the core pieces to draw you in. It's strengths make it easy to ignore the weak parts. I'd love to see more when the author decides to continue the story.
One of the best novels I have read despite the urge to drop it in the first 40 chapters. They were rough to read but somehow quite entertaining. I’m glad I continued reading and saw not only the characters growth but also the author’s. It saddened me to get to the end and find out that is only part one-indefinitely- of this amazing series bc like I WANT MORE but I understand, hope the author is able to come back sometime soon to this story
Copying my post from ch 12: Ayo, I really tried guys but the grammar is so bad I find myself putting together the sentences in my head. Great story premise, bad construction. Also, you can’t have the MC talking about leaving no witnesses then leaving witnesses. Show us he’s the smart, hardworking, cold blooded assassin you introduced him as instead of restating it every chapter. It makes it less believable. Wanted to leave this constructive criticism before I left the novel. Keep grinding Mr. Author! My summary of thoughts of the past 12 chapters: I think its possible to do cliche isekai stories well, which is why i still read them. I really wanted so badly for this to be one of those but there are a few glaring weaknesses Character design: It is reiterated that Ichiro was a man who devoted his entire life to martial arts, and was a contracted assassin for the government. That's it, no real fleshing out of his personality, except for stereotypical "smart, cold blooded, mature MC" He also has this strange hero complex where he acknowledges he's a killer, yet when he is forced to kill for the first time in this world he for some reason denies that he's a murderer? It doesn't make sense. When introducing side characters there's a way to introduce them to make the reader care about them. I don't care about any of these characters, nor does it seem like the author does either. We spend one chapter on his new family and besides his sister, i don't remember the parents. I mean, the father was introduced at the end of his school day and he was introduced like an afterthought "Oh yeah, I met my father for the first time and he felt like my father" And then we move on with the story. The world was also introduced like an afterthought. We get introduced to the setting during his history class, and the info dump is done in run on sentences. We also get no info on the school:is this the best one in the country? Why, if the world needs more martial artists is it that instead of being a martial arts school, the discipline is relegated to an afterschool club? Is there a reason behind this or was the school designed just to satisfy the obligatory academy arc in each novel? Story Development: More of the same from world background, it all felt kind of rushed and i feel like the author could've taken his time writing out the academy, his family, giving the reader a sense of Ichiros personality, and the introduction of the 'system'. In these kinds of stories, there always ends up being a reason behind the system being given:Do other people have it? Can Ichiro ask about that? We don't even know if his classmates can use it, it seems like we're supposed to infer that they can't Writing Quality: I could've looked past the rest of these issues if the grammar was at least passable but too many run on sentences, too much reiteration, and clunky sentences. All in all, this has potential, and i'd like it to reach that to it's fullest
It was a very good book so far I hope he continues it in the futur I enjoyed every seconde