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I'm not gonna lie, having izuku with an established character act out of it, in the weirdest way mind you, us really weird, sometimes even annoying, yes I can understand him acting awkwardly and all but not to that degree, it feels like you took the senpai from nagatoro and took izuku, removed most of izuku's development and gave him the senpai personality (unless be is in battle). all the nagatoro moments at the beginning (I didn't finish reading yet) feels like I'm watching the anime or reading the manga, but because if the different stories mixed with this and the action and all, it's giving the biggest whiplash I have ever felt reading a webnovel. also returning to the nagatoro parts, it feels like you are basically writing and echii lightnovel which doesn't fell good reading it, me personally I find it annoying, but I'm sure most people that are reading this like it. outside of that I really like this and I hope you continue writing it, the way YOU want of course
The start was just "meh" but if you give it a try its a good and relaxing read[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Al principio dudaba de la historia pero en realidad es bastante interesante, hasta el momento a resultado ser bastante entretenido y me ah gustado el desarrollo de la historia hasta ahora. Estaré esperando próximos capítulos, gracias por el trabajo.........
love this fanfic please don't drop this fanfic please don't drop this fanfic please don't drop this fanfic please don't drop this fanfic please don't drop this fanfic😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Its a really good book . The story is interesting , the world building is also good. The writing is also veey well executed. Its easy to understand and the story is addictive as well.
Its basicaly a shot for shot remake of dont bully me nagatoro deku says the same stuff the original mc of the show says and so does nagatoro. the grammer is alright, but it needs some work. I recommend just reading dont bully my nagatoro its basically the same thing only better.
Very good, cool and funny. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
AMAZING MOVEL KEEP IT UP. AMAZING NOVEL KEEP IT UP. AMAZING MOVEL KEEP IT UP. AMAZING NOVEL KEEP IT UP. AMAZING MOVEL KEEP IT UP. AMAZING NOVEL KEEP IT UP.
Very great and funny[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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plus change this book's pic. what is that abomination of a face. I feel like I'm going to have nightmare .............,..........,,.,.......
this is the true embodiment of Beta MC with great hidden power. If you want Alpha MC novels, this is not the right novel for you. ................................ ................................
Hi, this is my first fanfiction. Hope you enjoy it snd,um, peace out ✌️.🦊🙄👮♂️🎁🙄🥳🎁😂🥲🥳🐐🦮🙄🥳🤷♂️👾☺️🙃😇😋🤨😋🥰😚🙃🤬😡🤬 😥🤫😶🤔🤗😥🤬
It's so good.. . .. . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . . .. . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . .. .. . . . .. . . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. .. . . .. . .. . . . .. . . . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. .. . . .. . . . .. . .. . .. . . .. . . ..
I like the concept. I like the execution. I LOVE how this exists. The MC is similar enough to canon that it's almost like they're the same person, but different enough that it leaves one feeling satisfied at how the story is being expanded upon and twists the original source material.
Good book, I like it very much. I really look forward to continuing. ...................................................................................................................................................................................................
Good job! Continue in the same spirit. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
I'm not gonna lie, having izuku with an established character act out of it, in the weirdest way mind you, us really weird, sometimes even annoying, yes I can understand him acting awkwardly and all but not to that degree, it feels like you took the senpai from nagatoro and took izuku, removed most of izuku's development and gave him the senpai personality (unless be is in battle). all the nagatoro moments at the beginning (I didn't finish reading yet) feels like I'm watching the anime or reading the manga, but because if the different stories mixed with this and the action and all, it's giving the biggest whiplash I have ever felt reading a webnovel. also returning to the nagatoro parts, it feels like you are basically writing and echii lightnovel which doesn't fell good reading it, me personally I find it annoying, but I'm sure most people that are reading this like it. outside of that I really like this and I hope you continue writing it, the way YOU want of course
The start was just "meh" but if you give it a try its a good and relaxing read[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Al principio dudaba de la historia pero en realidad es bastante interesante, hasta el momento a resultado ser bastante entretenido y me ah gustado el desarrollo de la historia hasta ahora. Estaré esperando próximos capítulos, gracias por el trabajo.........
love this fanfic please don't drop this fanfic please don't drop this fanfic please don't drop this fanfic please don't drop this fanfic please don't drop this fanfic😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Its a really good book . The story is interesting , the world building is also good. The writing is also veey well executed. Its easy to understand and the story is addictive as well.
Its basicaly a shot for shot remake of dont bully me nagatoro deku says the same stuff the original mc of the show says and so does nagatoro. the grammer is alright, but it needs some work. I recommend just reading dont bully my nagatoro its basically the same thing only better.
Very good, cool and funny. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
AMAZING MOVEL KEEP IT UP. AMAZING NOVEL KEEP IT UP. AMAZING MOVEL KEEP IT UP. AMAZING NOVEL KEEP IT UP. AMAZING MOVEL KEEP IT UP. AMAZING NOVEL KEEP IT UP.
Very great and funny[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
👌.............................................................................................................................................
plus change this book's pic. what is that abomination of a face. I feel like I'm going to have nightmare .............,..........,,.,.......
this is the true embodiment of Beta MC with great hidden power. If you want Alpha MC novels, this is not the right novel for you. ................................ ................................
Hi, this is my first fanfiction. Hope you enjoy it snd,um, peace out ✌️.🦊🙄👮♂️🎁🙄🥳🎁😂🥲🥳🐐🦮🙄🥳🤷♂️👾☺️🙃😇😋🤨😋🥰😚🙃🤬😡🤬 😥🤫😶🤔🤗😥🤬
It's so good.. . .. . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . . .. . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . . .. .. . . . .. . . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. .. . . .. . .. . . . .. . . . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. .. . . .. . . . .. . .. . .. . . .. . . ..
I like the concept. I like the execution. I LOVE how this exists. The MC is similar enough to canon that it's almost like they're the same person, but different enough that it leaves one feeling satisfied at how the story is being expanded upon and twists the original source material.
Good book, I like it very much. I really look forward to continuing. ...................................................................................................................................................................................................