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Amons
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Haven't enjoyed a novel as much as this one! Plot is basically trying to get revenge and destroying the world, but it's still very exciting since there's really no guarantee that Void Jesus will actually be able to do so. The characters are very distinct from each other, they've got personalities that stand out from other "similar" novels. Void Jesus does things for his benefit, he doesn't hesitate to kill or maim others. His actions don't stray from how the author wants to portray him as (very cool because that takes a whole lot of skill). So far, the events aren't boring or expected. Characters are very dynamic and consistent. Story is definitely worth the try! :D

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3yr
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TimVic
LV 15 Badge

This is a solid 5/5. I love the way the storyline began. Although I'm not a fan of POV styled stories, this one got me pulled in. Hexarion is an interesting MC. Quite meticulous as well. This is worth reading, I recommend.

3yr
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Magecrafter

Alright! I'm back after so long. This book is over 200 chapters long now, so it deserves a new review. I'd say it's still a stellar story, just not for everyone. Our Mc is depicted to be an evil person, but just a chapter later he saves someone. Some might drop the book because of that, but if advise you to read on. Also, he sometimes acts or thinks in a weirdly immature or petty way—at least in the beginning chapters. Many would also drop because of this. I'd advise you to keep going, though. Why? Because it's a good story! As you progress further in, you'll realize that the novel is golden. You might have some issues with the MC, Hexarion, but those issues become less glaring at some point. You might even love him eventually. So, yes. This book is still a Five Stars in my book! Thanks for picking up this book, and I hope you have a good read.

2yr
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Lunarclock

i enjoyed reading this as well, definitely a 5/5 review from me

1yr
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Daoist481530

Where is the system I don’ see it anyw heret

1yr
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Lemonbunzz

Simply, I like it!! I love well-written novels with god/s as protagonist/s. Of course, it's not just that but I'm really bad at explaining. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
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DevilWhoLovesLying

When does this novel resume. I just want to know before I continue reading

2yr
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Daoist3mzl2b

İs Droped ???[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2yr
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Sage_X
LV 13 Badge

I'm waiting patiently for the next chapter, please MagCrafter do well to release another chapter. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
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DidYouReadMyName

Okay so I'm only about halfway through what is available to read right now ( chap. 156ish) at this point in the story I have to say it has been very well thought out. No glaring plot holes or inconsistencies. The plot flows from one scenario to another smoothly. Not many grammar errors. So the Mc is a powerful primordial God of destruction who begins to question his and the other gods origins. He decides to destroy the world that he and his family of primordial gods have made to their outrage. He loses the fight to be reborn on the very planet he wanted to destroy and is on a journey to rebuild his strength and have his revenge. If you are down for a dark MC who is meticulous, cunning, ruthless, and merciless this is your novel. The mc has been shown to have a very deep grasp of most situations allowing for a near perfect idea of what would play out allowing him to manipulate most situations to his absolute favor. He also is showing signs of maybe growing as well. Perhaps his time on the world he and his family made will change his outlook a little... or not we shall see .

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2yr
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RealmWriter

Read it, like it , but just not my cup of tea~ Lemme explain. Even though the writing, world background, etc are good, the idea isn't really sticking with me. But I qould really recommend it! BTW, want a can of cola... :(

2yr
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2yr
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Kill_Baby

This novel has one of the best starting and the pacing of the story is not too fast nor too slow. If you love an overpowered mc this one is for you.

2yr
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Universal_Monarch

DAYUM its only been like a few months and there is already over 200 chapters noice i left at 67 and I'm gonna give it a go again, As far as i have read, it was good the mc is likable except some cliche situations that are not used a lot, he is overpowered too, i forgot about the development of the world but im guessing it was fine as i have read far

2yr
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BRAGO
LV 1 Badge

perfect book if you are bored of harem and love stories written by single authors than yes this is for you mc is overpowered , evil and definitely going to harvest a lot of souls 👍👍👍

2yr
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TheTrickster12

I was expectant really expectant from reading the reviews and seeing that it has no harem however I was disappointed the mc feels childish in fact most of the characters feels childish just waiting to benefit the mc even the mc himself feels childish why destroy the world when you can rule it? his plots are cliche and he even talks about his plans and how it came to be like a stereotypical villain the fights have too much dialogue it's just a mess.

2yr
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Magecrafter

I have been receiving a lot of complaint concerning the nature of the novel, as to whether it has Harem or not. I'll be honest with all of you, it doesn't follow the strict logic of 'Harem'. Yes, the mc becomes surrounded by beautiful women at a point, but his team consists of a fair deal of men. Also, these women are not the major focus of the story, so it's safe to say that we won't be having any of the cliche and overused Harem tropes. Hexarion portrays a certain kind of evil... He's brutal, selfish, and scheming. Not a quality for a harem lord. 😈😈😈

2yr
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Ashton_A

I hope talia dies painfully and is unable to be ressurected and no I will never enjoy her presence. However, everything else about the novel is great.

2yr
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Perverted_Fella

Lol😁😁😁😁 the gibberish language of those soldiers made me excited, imma add it to my reading list.................................................

3yr
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ib_z
LV 15 Badge

Love this story. Mc is op & evil and just isn’t like those other mcs who just say I’m evil then go save every single person they see this one is just pure evil. I also like how author replies to every single comment throughout the story I haven’t seen any comment author didn’t reply to and he replied to all my comments as well.

3yr
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Carefreedude

really love it, gets better and better as you read more. I say give it a try till 60 chapters, u wud get to see what mc has to offer by then and if you still don't like it then maybe not for you

3yr
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ZelanLykus

Basically a hidden gem people!! It's good, so good that you'll hate it at first but gradually get more open to it. The story itself is mystery that you'll have to continue reading just to understand

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3yr
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Ace6
LV 2 Badge

This has been one of the best books I've read in a while. The author writes the protagonist in he very compelling nature, he is said to be evil but possess some seemingly good traits. I love the relationship dynamic he has with his side characters the way he would kind of care for them but also let them know he won't hesitate to blip them out of existence. He's a smart character who thinks about the bigger picture every step of the way. I would love to see where the author takes us on this adventure. They are doing a really great job.

3yr
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Optigon

To be honest I haven't been reading that long so I can't entirely vouch for the stability of updates but other than that I think that the writing is very good on the whole. There are occasionally a few errors but you can still understand the idea. Story development, so far the progression has been consistent and steady so that the readers can understand the setting but it also moves fast enough that we get to see exciting moments relatively frequently. Character design/World Background (They kind of tie into each other), the characters are well thought out and you can see that they do have emotions (side characters included) and also the main character has his own personal ties to the world and the existences within it making the story feel personal. Not sure if I phrased this all correctly or if this came out weirdly but I hope I got my point across.

3yr
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Memexico19

Don't keep me hanging; I need an unstoppable update. Guys try this book; it's my second best in all the novel I've read on Webnovel so far.

3yr
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Master_Of_gu

The novel is dropped in chapter 6, the cruel hero and villain that's what the writer is trying to show, he saves the poor fairy from death and tries to justify himself that it's only for the eyes or that it's interesting and not because he's a perverted hero, obvious hypocrisy, no need to lie and justifications just save her without a play

3yr
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Robogod
LV 15 Badge

Loving the story so far.. and the readable writing quality. No MTL or unreadable english. Hoping you don't drop it. Would love to see how this story continues to develop, love the OP MC vibe.

3yr
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Magecrafter

Hello Readers, or potential ones. I want to mention the fact that the Mc is evil, or more accurately, does very evil things for the sake of his goals. That doesn't mean he doesn't do good things if he feels like it, so long as it doesn't really bother him. However, some have mentioned that my mc is too soft, but if you're patient enough to read to chapter 9-10, you'll find out he's actually very cruel. If you're still not convinced, be patient and read up to chapter 30. That will clear all the doubts you have. It's a wonderful story and I've gotten a lot of wonderful and positive feedbacks more than negative. I just want you to have this in mind before diving in. You're in for a treat, trust me. PS. From the start he is shown to be evil, however do not be surprised if he does some seemingly good acts. You'll soon find that everything revolves around him.

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3yr
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WhiteVest

lol, I can finally see what all this greek mythology is about. poor thur. This book is super well written and very dialogue-heavy which I love. added it to a library, will be reading till I get caught up.

3yr
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Magecrafter

Thank you all for your support readers. We won the Bronze Prize for the WPC. I'll be resuming my chapter publishing on the 7th of next month. Once it begins, we'll be going on a wild ride. I welcome comments, reviews and even criticisms, no matter how harsh. I also welcome encouragements. Once again, let's have a wonderful and dark read... It is about an Evil Protagonist after all.

3yr
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Amons
LV 4 Badge

Haven't enjoyed a novel as much as this one! Plot is basically trying to get revenge and destroying the world, but it's still very exciting since there's really no guarantee that Void Jesus will actually be able to do so. The characters are very distinct from each other, they've got personalities that stand out from other "similar" novels. Void Jesus does things for his benefit, he doesn't hesitate to kill or maim others. His actions don't stray from how the author wants to portray him as (very cool because that takes a whole lot of skill). So far, the events aren't boring or expected. Characters are very dynamic and consistent. Story is definitely worth the try! :D

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3yr
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TimVic
LV 15 Badge

This is a solid 5/5. I love the way the storyline began. Although I'm not a fan of POV styled stories, this one got me pulled in. Hexarion is an interesting MC. Quite meticulous as well. This is worth reading, I recommend.

3yr
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Magecrafter

Alright! I'm back after so long. This book is over 200 chapters long now, so it deserves a new review. I'd say it's still a stellar story, just not for everyone. Our Mc is depicted to be an evil person, but just a chapter later he saves someone. Some might drop the book because of that, but if advise you to read on. Also, he sometimes acts or thinks in a weirdly immature or petty way—at least in the beginning chapters. Many would also drop because of this. I'd advise you to keep going, though. Why? Because it's a good story! As you progress further in, you'll realize that the novel is golden. You might have some issues with the MC, Hexarion, but those issues become less glaring at some point. You might even love him eventually. So, yes. This book is still a Five Stars in my book! Thanks for picking up this book, and I hope you have a good read.

2yr
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Lunarclock

i enjoyed reading this as well, definitely a 5/5 review from me

1yr
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Daoist481530

Where is the system I don’ see it anyw heret

1yr
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Lemonbunzz

Simply, I like it!! I love well-written novels with god/s as protagonist/s. Of course, it's not just that but I'm really bad at explaining. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
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DevilWhoLovesLying

When does this novel resume. I just want to know before I continue reading

2yr
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Daoist3mzl2b

İs Droped ???[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2yr
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Sage_X
LV 13 Badge

I'm waiting patiently for the next chapter, please MagCrafter do well to release another chapter. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
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DidYouReadMyName

Okay so I'm only about halfway through what is available to read right now ( chap. 156ish) at this point in the story I have to say it has been very well thought out. No glaring plot holes or inconsistencies. The plot flows from one scenario to another smoothly. Not many grammar errors. So the Mc is a powerful primordial God of destruction who begins to question his and the other gods origins. He decides to destroy the world that he and his family of primordial gods have made to their outrage. He loses the fight to be reborn on the very planet he wanted to destroy and is on a journey to rebuild his strength and have his revenge. If you are down for a dark MC who is meticulous, cunning, ruthless, and merciless this is your novel. The mc has been shown to have a very deep grasp of most situations allowing for a near perfect idea of what would play out allowing him to manipulate most situations to his absolute favor. He also is showing signs of maybe growing as well. Perhaps his time on the world he and his family made will change his outlook a little... or not we shall see .

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2yr
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RealmWriter

Read it, like it , but just not my cup of tea~ Lemme explain. Even though the writing, world background, etc are good, the idea isn't really sticking with me. But I qould really recommend it! BTW, want a can of cola... :(

2yr
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AXO_IRAQ

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2yr
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Kill_Baby

This novel has one of the best starting and the pacing of the story is not too fast nor too slow. If you love an overpowered mc this one is for you.

2yr
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Universal_Monarch

DAYUM its only been like a few months and there is already over 200 chapters noice i left at 67 and I'm gonna give it a go again, As far as i have read, it was good the mc is likable except some cliche situations that are not used a lot, he is overpowered too, i forgot about the development of the world but im guessing it was fine as i have read far

2yr
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BRAGO
LV 1 Badge

perfect book if you are bored of harem and love stories written by single authors than yes this is for you mc is overpowered , evil and definitely going to harvest a lot of souls 👍👍👍

2yr
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TheTrickster12

I was expectant really expectant from reading the reviews and seeing that it has no harem however I was disappointed the mc feels childish in fact most of the characters feels childish just waiting to benefit the mc even the mc himself feels childish why destroy the world when you can rule it? his plots are cliche and he even talks about his plans and how it came to be like a stereotypical villain the fights have too much dialogue it's just a mess.

2yr
2 Antworten anzeigen
Magecrafter

I have been receiving a lot of complaint concerning the nature of the novel, as to whether it has Harem or not. I'll be honest with all of you, it doesn't follow the strict logic of 'Harem'. Yes, the mc becomes surrounded by beautiful women at a point, but his team consists of a fair deal of men. Also, these women are not the major focus of the story, so it's safe to say that we won't be having any of the cliche and overused Harem tropes. Hexarion portrays a certain kind of evil... He's brutal, selfish, and scheming. Not a quality for a harem lord. 😈😈😈

2yr
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Ashton_A

I hope talia dies painfully and is unable to be ressurected and no I will never enjoy her presence. However, everything else about the novel is great.

2yr
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Perverted_Fella

Lol😁😁😁😁 the gibberish language of those soldiers made me excited, imma add it to my reading list.................................................

3yr
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ib_z
LV 15 Badge

Love this story. Mc is op & evil and just isn’t like those other mcs who just say I’m evil then go save every single person they see this one is just pure evil. I also like how author replies to every single comment throughout the story I haven’t seen any comment author didn’t reply to and he replied to all my comments as well.

3yr
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Carefreedude

really love it, gets better and better as you read more. I say give it a try till 60 chapters, u wud get to see what mc has to offer by then and if you still don't like it then maybe not for you

3yr
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ZelanLykus

Basically a hidden gem people!! It's good, so good that you'll hate it at first but gradually get more open to it. The story itself is mystery that you'll have to continue reading just to understand

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3yr
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Ace6
LV 2 Badge

This has been one of the best books I've read in a while. The author writes the protagonist in he very compelling nature, he is said to be evil but possess some seemingly good traits. I love the relationship dynamic he has with his side characters the way he would kind of care for them but also let them know he won't hesitate to blip them out of existence. He's a smart character who thinks about the bigger picture every step of the way. I would love to see where the author takes us on this adventure. They are doing a really great job.

3yr
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Optigon

To be honest I haven't been reading that long so I can't entirely vouch for the stability of updates but other than that I think that the writing is very good on the whole. There are occasionally a few errors but you can still understand the idea. Story development, so far the progression has been consistent and steady so that the readers can understand the setting but it also moves fast enough that we get to see exciting moments relatively frequently. Character design/World Background (They kind of tie into each other), the characters are well thought out and you can see that they do have emotions (side characters included) and also the main character has his own personal ties to the world and the existences within it making the story feel personal. Not sure if I phrased this all correctly or if this came out weirdly but I hope I got my point across.

3yr
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Memexico19

Don't keep me hanging; I need an unstoppable update. Guys try this book; it's my second best in all the novel I've read on Webnovel so far.

3yr
2 Antworten anzeigen
Master_Of_gu

The novel is dropped in chapter 6, the cruel hero and villain that's what the writer is trying to show, he saves the poor fairy from death and tries to justify himself that it's only for the eyes or that it's interesting and not because he's a perverted hero, obvious hypocrisy, no need to lie and justifications just save her without a play

3yr
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Robogod
LV 15 Badge

Loving the story so far.. and the readable writing quality. No MTL or unreadable english. Hoping you don't drop it. Would love to see how this story continues to develop, love the OP MC vibe.

3yr
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Magecrafter

Hello Readers, or potential ones. I want to mention the fact that the Mc is evil, or more accurately, does very evil things for the sake of his goals. That doesn't mean he doesn't do good things if he feels like it, so long as it doesn't really bother him. However, some have mentioned that my mc is too soft, but if you're patient enough to read to chapter 9-10, you'll find out he's actually very cruel. If you're still not convinced, be patient and read up to chapter 30. That will clear all the doubts you have. It's a wonderful story and I've gotten a lot of wonderful and positive feedbacks more than negative. I just want you to have this in mind before diving in. You're in for a treat, trust me. PS. From the start he is shown to be evil, however do not be surprised if he does some seemingly good acts. You'll soon find that everything revolves around him.

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3yr
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WhiteVest

lol, I can finally see what all this greek mythology is about. poor thur. This book is super well written and very dialogue-heavy which I love. added it to a library, will be reading till I get caught up.

3yr
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Magecrafter

Thank you all for your support readers. We won the Bronze Prize for the WPC. I'll be resuming my chapter publishing on the 7th of next month. Once it begins, we'll be going on a wild ride. I welcome comments, reviews and even criticisms, no matter how harsh. I also welcome encouragements. Once again, let's have a wonderful and dark read... It is about an Evil Protagonist after all.

3yr
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