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This story progresses gradually. The author seemed to be revealing the plot in an intricate manner. I guess there are more to the plot than what was already revealed. Looking forward to more updates.
This is a cool nice read. I like the MC's character as well as Mr. Ashton Kempt. The author did well in making the character building. There's fun and at the same time some build up triggers and complications making the story more exciting. I have read 8 chapters without noticing, I've gone that far. I will sure continue reading but I have to leave a review first 'coz I'm just excited.
I am not really sure why I am reviewing my own book...[img=faceslap] hahaha. Maybe I just wanted to congratulate myself for being able to overcome all the hesitations and doubts and just go do what I have always dreamed of doing. Anyways, I really hope that you enjoy reading my work. Don't forget to leave some comments or reviews so that I know what to work on. Keep safe.
My favorite bits are the dialogues. The author is good in making sure that personalities aren't mixed up, and I get it who speaks like this and or like that. Looking forward for the plot.
The story is good so as the character presentation. The wall you built the story's world is also not that bad. The English is perfect and there is use of punctuations. Keep up the good work
so far the story is good like how characters are in similar age range (don't like ml to waay older ) characters are written well mc is just waay too broken and not letting of her super trashy past even though she has amazing family and friends (now) surrounding her.... just hate this guy named Aston (the summary kind of misleading it feels as is aston s good not saying he can't be but the way he treated he deserves someone with same mindset as hi) female lead shou definitely gain some confidence I don't know how she didn't went through some positive personality change like every other MC's here (only thing I like abt those ediotic hit and run romances like hidden Marriage) Jeff, bry and ed are supper well written the bad mc makes them shine even well
The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fsacinating escape from reality into another world. A great read
This is very well recommended to read. The author was best in making characters distinctively. The writing quality is good as well. I really like it. The MC is very adorable. Hopefully this story will go its way to popularity.
This story progresses gradually. The author seemed to be revealing the plot in an intricate manner. I guess there are more to the plot than what was already revealed. Looking forward to more updates.
This is a cool nice read. I like the MC's character as well as Mr. Ashton Kempt. The author did well in making the character building. There's fun and at the same time some build up triggers and complications making the story more exciting. I have read 8 chapters without noticing, I've gone that far. I will sure continue reading but I have to leave a review first 'coz I'm just excited.
I am not really sure why I am reviewing my own book...[img=faceslap] hahaha. Maybe I just wanted to congratulate myself for being able to overcome all the hesitations and doubts and just go do what I have always dreamed of doing. Anyways, I really hope that you enjoy reading my work. Don't forget to leave some comments or reviews so that I know what to work on. Keep safe.
My favorite bits are the dialogues. The author is good in making sure that personalities aren't mixed up, and I get it who speaks like this and or like that. Looking forward for the plot.
The story is good so as the character presentation. The wall you built the story's world is also not that bad. The English is perfect and there is use of punctuations. Keep up the good work
so far the story is good like how characters are in similar age range (don't like ml to waay older ) characters are written well mc is just waay too broken and not letting of her super trashy past even though she has amazing family and friends (now) surrounding her.... just hate this guy named Aston (the summary kind of misleading it feels as is aston s good not saying he can't be but the way he treated he deserves someone with same mindset as hi) female lead shou definitely gain some confidence I don't know how she didn't went through some positive personality change like every other MC's here (only thing I like abt those ediotic hit and run romances like hidden Marriage) Jeff, bry and ed are supper well written the bad mc makes them shine even well
The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fsacinating escape from reality into another world. A great read
This is very well recommended to read. The author was best in making characters distinctively. The writing quality is good as well. I really like it. The MC is very adorable. Hopefully this story will go its way to popularity.