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que manera de arruinar una buena historia, el inicio estuvo bien pero como que no supiste continuar, a mi criterio fue bueno. pero lo dejo por gustos personales
Honestly speaking, overall this is a bad piece of work. I would Any future reader would do well to start off at chapter 16 rather than chapter 1. But the thing is that the initial chapters were way way better than the recent ones. Imho, the recent ones have very little thought put into them and pretty much 99% movie in a writing format.
Writing Quality (3★), Updating Stability (5★), Story Development (2★), Character Design (3★), world background (1★). It's not a bad story, it's entertaining. The characters are sometimes funny. As of this writing, there are daily chapters. There are plot holes and situations that contradict past events. I was generous with the character design score. They're not flat for the most part and follow a reasonable logic (not always). As for the background of the world... I can only point out that in chapter 14, there's a reset that cancels out all the previous chapters. This last one bothered me so much that I'm going to give it some time to get more chapters out. And if it improves, I'll change my score. (Traductor)
It started pretty good, reads like AI but author claimed that was for grammar so meh. My problem is that he nerfed the main character and basically restarted the story (final 2 chapter as of this moment). So I am done was a great start, was excited then I got to the final two chapters and basically the author ruined it for me.
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Trash🥱🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🥱🤮🤮🤣🤣🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮.............................. .......................................................................................................................................................................................
Pretty low but the story just isnt good for real. Um its quick pace(funny) with little explanation as well as it being weird at times like the mc using sword and amor. It feels ai ish but it could simply be because its early. in I didnt read to the latest (15) but yeah.
I absolutely love it please continue👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 And don't drop this fantastic novel. :)
really good so far just hoping for Mc to gain a love interest maybe from cough dc universe cough raven also can you allow him to gain the same ability that superman has (sun absorption) so he doesn't rely on other energies to much or maybe creating his speed force to connect him to dc.
Haven't read it but the title remains me of 'Marvel: Silverfire' one of the overall best fanfiction I have every read, so I can only hope that you create a masterpiece like that, as it's only 50 chapters only and left me a little unfulfilled.
Are you going to write this cause from the title it seems pretty cool cause quicksilver had a lot of potential you know he jut wasted it. It’ a good idea Pls conti nue
Yay your writing this again..................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Pls continue..........................................................................................................................................................
Honestly, it's not as bad as the reviews suggest—I'm actually enjoying it so far. Then again, I'm more of a casual reader who doesn't mind the occasional plot hole. So, keep up the great work, author! I'm really enjoying the fanfic.
que manera de arruinar una buena historia, el inicio estuvo bien pero como que no supiste continuar, a mi criterio fue bueno. pero lo dejo por gustos personales
Honestly speaking, overall this is a bad piece of work. I would Any future reader would do well to start off at chapter 16 rather than chapter 1. But the thing is that the initial chapters were way way better than the recent ones. Imho, the recent ones have very little thought put into them and pretty much 99% movie in a writing format.
Writing Quality (3★), Updating Stability (5★), Story Development (2★), Character Design (3★), world background (1★). It's not a bad story, it's entertaining. The characters are sometimes funny. As of this writing, there are daily chapters. There are plot holes and situations that contradict past events. I was generous with the character design score. They're not flat for the most part and follow a reasonable logic (not always). As for the background of the world... I can only point out that in chapter 14, there's a reset that cancels out all the previous chapters. This last one bothered me so much that I'm going to give it some time to get more chapters out. And if it improves, I'll change my score. (Traductor)
It started pretty good, reads like AI but author claimed that was for grammar so meh. My problem is that he nerfed the main character and basically restarted the story (final 2 chapter as of this moment). So I am done was a great start, was excited then I got to the final two chapters and basically the author ruined it for me.
Spoiler enthüllen Trash🥱🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🥱🤮🤮🤣🤣🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮.............................. .......................................................................................................................................................................................
Pretty low but the story just isnt good for real. Um its quick pace(funny) with little explanation as well as it being weird at times like the mc using sword and amor. It feels ai ish but it could simply be because its early. in I didnt read to the latest (15) but yeah.
I absolutely love it please continue👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 And don't drop this fantastic novel. :)
really good so far just hoping for Mc to gain a love interest maybe from cough dc universe cough raven also can you allow him to gain the same ability that superman has (sun absorption) so he doesn't rely on other energies to much or maybe creating his speed force to connect him to dc.
Haven't read it but the title remains me of 'Marvel: Silverfire' one of the overall best fanfiction I have every read, so I can only hope that you create a masterpiece like that, as it's only 50 chapters only and left me a little unfulfilled.
Are you going to write this cause from the title it seems pretty cool cause quicksilver had a lot of potential you know he jut wasted it. It’ a good idea Pls conti nue
Yay your writing this again..................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Pls continue..........................................................................................................................................................
Honestly, it's not as bad as the reviews suggest—I'm actually enjoying it so far. Then again, I'm more of a casual reader who doesn't mind the occasional plot hole. So, keep up the great work, author! I'm really enjoying the fanfic.