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Writing quality is bad, mc is really creepy, in his previous life he was 18 and now he's 10 and is falling in love with 10/9 yo girls. On the other hand adults act really weird (like letting 10yo kids go hunting in the forest), maybe we should just be like "eh it's eroge game world logic" but for me there is no logic in this novel. I got only up to chapter 10, think what you want.
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if you can make it past chapter 10 you are a better(?) man than I. it is super cringe and turned me off for the whole story. good luck to you.
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everything was fine before the author changed the system to a familiar and unreasonable system points income after that a lot of silly things happened Byee Drop
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Esta es mi opiniΓ³n sobre esta novela. comenzΓ³ bien, la construcciΓ³n del personaje no fue muy mala, y la construcciΓ³n del mundo tambiΓ©n fue buena y disfrutΓ© el comienzo. Pero luego el MC se volviΓ³ "Bipolar" lo que hace y lo que dice, sigue saltando por todos lados. A veces ni siquiera tiene sentido y las parodias de comedia se vuelven vergonzosas. Quiero decir, si tienes 10 aΓ±os, puede que te guste... lo cual no es realista, ya que es una novela para mayores de 18 aΓ±os, pero a mΓ, como adulto, no puedo. AsΓ que la gran pregunta es, ΒΏquiΓ©n es el pΓΊblico objetivo de esta novela?.
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Muy buena novela autor el toque harem le queda bien aunque el MC es aΓΊn dΓ©bil pero se avecina de seguro eventos deliciosos jejeje bueno realmente vale la pena decir que no abandones esta novela es buena
The book started out decently and just got worse and worse as it went along. The relationships and the comedy just feel forced. The mc waisted all his time during a six year time skip resulting in no progression. The mc also doesnβt use his points properly making it quite frustrating
please don't drop this it's just starting to get goodπ₯²................................................................................................................
its star good but after chapter 28 the story become trash,,mc got anoying system and become retard, 5 year time skip and get him nowhere forced comedy forced nerfed,,what a wasted of potential
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Read till cp 50,man I can understand you don't want the mc to be op but still you have to give him some abilities. Until now all he have is a chain which he can't use to it's full power, a skill that have a lewd side effect. He have mana but how much idk there no physical stat nor magical stat even though it's a system novle, give him some magic skill or branch skills to his innate skill his not evolving at all nor is his becoming versatile. And give him a specific class or path to walk to become stronger not just finding a ruins in hopes for treasure that he doesn't even know will be useful to him. And mc is a bit coward, he needs to kill strong monstars to become strong but he runs away when encounter a bit strong monstar . All in all it can be fixed inthe future and I hope further chapters are improved
Buena novela enserio lo digo ahora un fantasma de waifu serΓa bueno ya que el MC deberΓa despertarla osea ayudarla ah que se quede espero los otros capitulos con ansias autor feliz navidad
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Hey author in the latest chapters, you said that Rey will travel to the future, so what will happen to the present time girls ? a) Will he take them with him b) Will he return back from the future after completing the third game c) Will he just leave them and live in the future ? If it is the third option then I will be sad.
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when will more chapters come out I'm dying to read this is one of the better novels I'm reading [img=recommend]please continue this novel I've seen a lot of writers drop good novelsπ
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Writing quality is bad, mc is really creepy, in his previous life he was 18 and now he's 10 and is falling in love with 10/9 yo girls. On the other hand adults act really weird (like letting 10yo kids go hunting in the forest), maybe we should just be like "eh it's eroge game world logic" but for me there is no logic in this novel. I got only up to chapter 10, think what you want.
Mmmm no mmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm
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if you can make it past chapter 10 you are a better(?) man than I. it is super cringe and turned me off for the whole story. good luck to you.
enjoy someπππ§ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ§ππ§π§ππππππππππππππππππππππΊππππππππΊπΊπΊπΊπ
everything was fine before the author changed the system to a familiar and unreasonable system points income after that a lot of silly things happened Byee Drop
Awesome Story, Thanks for the hard work. π β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦..
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Esta es mi opiniΓ³n sobre esta novela. comenzΓ³ bien, la construcciΓ³n del personaje no fue muy mala, y la construcciΓ³n del mundo tambiΓ©n fue buena y disfrutΓ© el comienzo. Pero luego el MC se volviΓ³ "Bipolar" lo que hace y lo que dice, sigue saltando por todos lados. A veces ni siquiera tiene sentido y las parodias de comedia se vuelven vergonzosas. Quiero decir, si tienes 10 aΓ±os, puede que te guste... lo cual no es realista, ya que es una novela para mayores de 18 aΓ±os, pero a mΓ, como adulto, no puedo. AsΓ que la gran pregunta es, ΒΏquiΓ©n es el pΓΊblico objetivo de esta novela?.
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Muy buena novela autor el toque harem le queda bien aunque el MC es aΓΊn dΓ©bil pero se avecina de seguro eventos deliciosos jejeje bueno realmente vale la pena decir que no abandones esta novela es buena
The book started out decently and just got worse and worse as it went along. The relationships and the comedy just feel forced. The mc waisted all his time during a six year time skip resulting in no progression. The mc also doesnβt use his points properly making it quite frustrating
please don't drop this it's just starting to get goodπ₯²................................................................................................................
its star good but after chapter 28 the story become trash,,mc got anoying system and become retard, 5 year time skip and get him nowhere forced comedy forced nerfed,,what a wasted of potential
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Read till cp 50,man I can understand you don't want the mc to be op but still you have to give him some abilities. Until now all he have is a chain which he can't use to it's full power, a skill that have a lewd side effect. He have mana but how much idk there no physical stat nor magical stat even though it's a system novle, give him some magic skill or branch skills to his innate skill his not evolving at all nor is his becoming versatile. And give him a specific class or path to walk to become stronger not just finding a ruins in hopes for treasure that he doesn't even know will be useful to him. And mc is a bit coward, he needs to kill strong monstars to become strong but he runs away when encounter a bit strong monstar . All in all it can be fixed inthe future and I hope further chapters are improved
Buena novela enserio lo digo ahora un fantasma de waifu serΓa bueno ya que el MC deberΓa despertarla osea ayudarla ah que se quede espero los otros capitulos con ansias autor feliz navidad
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Spoiler enthΓΌllenλΆμ°κ²½λ§μΆλ§ν # μ°λ¦¬κ²½λ§ men78λ·μ»΄ μΉ΄ν‘γ wori111ν λ @wori222 κ²½λ§μ보 # μ°λ¦¬κ²½λ§ men54μ©μ»΄ μΉ΄ν‘οΌ wori111 ν λ @wori222 #μμ ν κ²½λ§μ¬μ΄νΈ #μΌλ³Έκ²½λ§ μ€μκ° #μ¨λΌμΈ κ²½λ§ μν #μ¨λΌμΈμ€ν¬λ¦°κ²½λ§ #μΌλ³Έ μ¨λΌμΈκ²½λ§#μΌλ³Έκ²½λ§ μ€κ³ #μΌλ³Έκ²½λ§λ°°ν #κ²½λ§μ΄νλͺ¨μ§ #μΌλ³Έκ²½λ§ νλλ²
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Hey author in the latest chapters, you said that Rey will travel to the future, so what will happen to the present time girls ? a) Will he take them with him b) Will he return back from the future after completing the third game c) Will he just leave them and live in the future ? If it is the third option then I will be sad.
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when will more chapters come out I'm dying to read this is one of the better novels I'm reading [img=recommend]please continue this novel I've seen a lot of writers drop good novelsπ
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Anyone know what the discord link is? This is just to reach the word count. dhtejdudbdjchdudjfhuxejjfidhricododofo39e9 re ciifkd0