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Very well done by the author, shame that it seems to be dropped. Anyways, the only issue one might have with this story is that it is leaning towards harem. Other than that, everything about it is pretty solid. Writing quality and Character Development are both great as far as I could tell. Story Development started getting a bit slow for me personally due to the whole 'Ancient Dragon City' arc but it seems to mostly be there just to awaken some sort of dragon bloodline or something in the MC so I see that it might be a necessary evil. World background is pretty good, though I can't tell if the author just doesn't know what soul force levels are equivalent to ranks or if he DOES know and is simply creating his own numbers for the physical power of fighters. It is pretty confusing really and I see many people have commented on it but that was basically the only major issue I noticed. Story didn't seem very interesting at first but it does have some interesting and unique ideas, like the prison training arc for getting a normal person accustomed to killing. That was new for me in TDG fics. Also, author did an AMAZING job with how he explained the personality change after transmigrating into a 13 year old (I plan on personally using this idea myself in my writing now since it is very good). Overall, it was a pretty good read, if a bit short. 4.6*
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Happened in the first timeline meaning nie li isnt reincarnated and its good,his "cheat" powers are knowing every language and some minor powers,we still have to see if he got other cheats very recommended
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cool though there's quite a plothole on the last chapter, how come the dragon trial is not known when it has been ransacked already many times and im sure there are not the only one with a dragon soul form
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I like your mc, Powerful but not overpowered and doesnt rely on system and is very likeable and i like What you did with The romance it is not forceful and also there is no stupid nie li hehehehe. Thanks for the story author sama
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very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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I realy like this one. Its on par with my previously favoirtite TdG ff. Can't say which one I like more yet. Anyways the mc is a battle maniac which is apreciated and he also takes some new routes I haven't seen in ff yet
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Very well done by the author, shame that it seems to be dropped. Anyways, the only issue one might have with this story is that it is leaning towards harem. Other than that, everything about it is pretty solid. Writing quality and Character Development are both great as far as I could tell. Story Development started getting a bit slow for me personally due to the whole 'Ancient Dragon City' arc but it seems to mostly be there just to awaken some sort of dragon bloodline or something in the MC so I see that it might be a necessary evil. World background is pretty good, though I can't tell if the author just doesn't know what soul force levels are equivalent to ranks or if he DOES know and is simply creating his own numbers for the physical power of fighters. It is pretty confusing really and I see many people have commented on it but that was basically the only major issue I noticed. Story didn't seem very interesting at first but it does have some interesting and unique ideas, like the prison training arc for getting a normal person accustomed to killing. That was new for me in TDG fics. Also, author did an AMAZING job with how he explained the personality change after transmigrating into a 13 year old (I plan on personally using this idea myself in my writing now since it is very good). Overall, it was a pretty good read, if a bit short. 4.6*
Spoiler enthΓΌllen Happened in the first timeline meaning nie li isnt reincarnated and its good,his "cheat" powers are knowing every language and some minor powers,we still have to see if he got other cheats very recommended
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cool though there's quite a plothole on the last chapter, how come the dragon trial is not known when it has been ransacked already many times and im sure there are not the only one with a dragon soul form
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I like your mc, Powerful but not overpowered and doesnt rely on system and is very likeable and i like What you did with The romance it is not forceful and also there is no stupid nie li hehehehe. Thanks for the story author sama
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Spoiler enthΓΌllen very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
ΠΡΠΎ ΠΎΡΠ΅Π½Ρ ΠΈΠ½ΡΠ΅ΡΠ΅ΡΠ½ΠΎ, Π² Π½Π°ΡΠ°Π»Π΅ Π²ΡΠ΅ Π±ΡΠ»ΠΎ ΡΠ°ΠΊ, ΠΊΠ°ΠΊ Ρ Π΄ΡΡΠ³ΠΈΡ Π°Π²ΡΠΎΡΠΎΠ² ΡΠ°Π½ΡΠΈΠΊΠ° ΠΏΡΠΎ ΡΡΠΎΡ ΡΡΠ½Π΄ΠΎΠΌ, Π½ΠΎ Π²ΡΡ Π½Π°ΡΠΈΠ½Π°Π΅ΡΡΡ ΠΌΠ΅Π½ΡΡΡΡΡ, ΡΠ±ΠΈΠΉΡΡΠ²ΠΎ, ΠΊΡ ΠΌ ΡΡΠ΅Π½ΠΈΡΠΎΠ²ΠΊΠ° Π½Π° ΠΏΡΠ΅ΡΡΡΠΏΠ½ΠΈΠΊΠ°Ρ , Π½ΠΎΠ²ΠΎΠ½ ΠΈΡΠΏΡΡΠ°Π½ΠΈΠ΅ ΠΈ ΠΊΠΎΠ½Π΅ΡΠ½ΠΎ ΠΆΠ΅ ΠΌΡΡΠ»ΠΈ ΠΈΡΠΏΠΎΠ»ΡΠ·ΠΎΠ²Π°ΡΡ ΠΠ΅ΠΌΠΎΠ½Π° Π’Π΅Π½ΠΈ Π² ΠΠΎΡΡΠΊΠ΅ ΡΠ΅Π³ΠΎ-ΡΠΎ ΡΠ°ΠΌ, Π·Π°Π±ΡΠ»). ΠΠ·Π²ΠΈΠ½ΠΈΡΠ΅ Π·Π° ΡΠΏΠΎΠΉΠ»Π΅Ρ... Π‘ΠΏΠ°ΡΠΈΠ±ΠΎ Π·Π° Ρ ΠΎΡΠΎΡΡΡ ΠΊΠ½ΠΈΠ³Ρ.
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I realy like this one. Its on par with my previously favoirtite TdG ff. Can't say which one I like more yet. Anyways the mc is a battle maniac which is apreciated and he also takes some new routes I haven't seen in ff yet
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