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ONE PIECE :TALE OF AN UNPARALLELED LEGEND
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This tale is about a boy that was abandoned and left to the mercy of the seas ,while he was in the sea a figure saw him and saved him ,raised him and made him a powerful figure on par with the strongest people to ever live ,join our protagonist EDWARD LINCOLN on his way to unparalleled strength and authority.
first fanfic ,my English grammar isn't very good but I'll try my best .
leave your suggestions in the comments .
I'll try to update as fast as I can but sometimes I won't be able to post for an interval of time due to my preparation for entrance examinations
some future plans
I plan on introducing some characters from other stories and stuff . so y'all can anticipate some crossovers . and seeing the concept on ki ,yes I have used some inspiration from manhwas and the dragon Ball series .and I will have some crazy concepts of power and I don't want my MC to be downgraded by anyone so he will be kinda op
One piece belongs to eichiiro oda ,the only thing mine are the OCS I made and some extra islands I tuned to fit in the world
I had the same story in the novel section so this is the copy of that
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The story is quite interesting, a few thing that i think that you can improve is the uppercase letter, the punctuation and don't make the paragraph to long, the character development should be explored a bit more too in my opinion. Sorry if its a bit weird, i'm not good at english. Thanks for the story by the way, keep up the good work 😁👍
AMAZING!! AMAZING!! AMAZING!! A very very very well developed story. The world background is phenomenal, it has so many elements that makes it really different from your typical fanfic's. Grammar wise.....it's okay at least it's readable. The author can improve by making paragraphs shorter, this will help us in reading more comfortably. Altogether it has great potential to be an even greater story. So go and try it or you will regret for the rest of your life.
good story so far could use some grammar correction and some correct spelling but, other than that pretty good .
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well... nothing good, nothing bad, would say its below average still... hate the spacing and some other stuff tho... ......................
Volumen 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Volumen 1 : EDWARD LINCOLN AND THE ROCKS PIRATES
- 1 CHAPTER 1 EDWARD NEWAGTE AND THE ABANDONED CHILD 3 years ago
- 2 CHAPTER 2 TIMESKIP AND THE ROCKS PIRATES 3 years ago
- 3 CHAPTER 3 GARP AND SENGOKU VS THE ROCKS PIRATES 3 years ago
- 4 CHAPTER 4 ROGER PIRATES AND THE 5 EMPERORS 3 years ago
- 5 CHAPTER 5 LINCOLN VS SHIKI ,JOHN AND WANG ZHI 3 years ago
- 6 CHAPTER 6 ROCKS PIRATES VS FLAMBOYANT PIRATES 3 years ago
- 7 CHAPTER 7 3 years ago
- 8 CHAPTER 8 BREAKTHROUGH 3 years ago
- 9 CHAPTER 9 ROCKS PIRATES VS BATTERY PIRATES 3 years ago
- 10 CHAPTER 10 DEADLY MOON SAM 3 years ago
- 11 CHAPTER 11 MOON PIRATES VS ROCKS PIRATES AND CELEBRATION 3 years ago
- 12 CHAPTER 12 RAYLEIGH AND GABAN VS LINCOLN 3 years ago
- 13 CHAPTER 13 HISTORY OF THE KEMETISM PIRATES AND COMMANDERS 3 years ago
- 14 CHAPTER 14 KEMETISM PIRATES 3 years ago
- 15 CHAPTER 15 TUTANK AMUN VS XEBEC 3 years ago
- 16 CHAPTER 16 LINCOLN VS COMMANDERS 3 years ago
- 17 CHAPTER 17 MARINES PLANNING 3 years ago
- 18 CHAPTER 18 A FUTURE THREAT 3 years ago
- 19 CHAPTER 19 XEBECS REASON AND PAST 3 years ago
- 20 CHAPTER 20 FILTH OF THE WORLD AND LINCOLNS RAGE 3 years ago
- 21 CHAPTER 21 THE MARINES ARE ALWAYS RIGHT 3 years ago
- 22 CHAPTER 22 TRAINING 3 years ago
- 23 CHAPTER 23 A LOOK INTO THE PERSON BEHIND THE CURTAINS 3 years ago
- 24 CHAPTER 24 YAMI YAMI NO MI AND TIMESKIP 3 years ago
- 25 CHAPTER 25 THE THREE BENEVOLENT MONKS amhitabul 3 years ago
- 26 CHAPTER 25 THE THREE BENEVOLENT MONKS amhitabul 3 years ago
- 27 CHAPTER 26 THE PREPARATION FOR WAR AND HISTORY OF THE GODS VALLEY 3 years ago
- 28 CHAPTER 27 MARINES VS ROCKS PIRATES (1) BETRAYAL 3 years ago
- 29 CHAPTER 28 MARINES VS ROCKS PIRATES (2) FIGHTS THAT QUAKED THE SEA 3 years ago
- 30 CHAPTER 29 MARINES VS ROCKS PIRATES (3) MERCILESS SLAUGHTER 3 years ago
- 31 CHAPTER 30 MARINES VS ROCKS PIRATES (4) ONE MAN AGAINST THE WORLD 3 years ago
- 32 bonus chapter 3 years ago
- 33 CHAPTER 31 MARINES VS ROCKS PIRATES (4) THE END 3 years ago
- 34 CHAPTER 32 AFTERMATH 3 years ago
Volumen 2 : FORMATION OF THE WHITEBEARD PIRATES
- 35 CHAPTER 33 THE WHITEBEARD PIRATES 3 years ago
- 36 CHAPTER 34 SAILING THE SEAS AGAIN 3 years ago
- 37 CHAPTER 34 DIAMOND JOZU 3 years ago
- 38 CHAPTER 36 DEMON KNIFE THATCH & ALTERCATION WITH FRANCIS .D. JOSEPH HENRY 3 years ago
- 39 CHAPTER 37 ICE QUEEN WHITEY BAY AND THE CORNELIUS PIRATES 3 years ago
- 40 CHAPTER 38 REBELS ISLAND OF FELORA AND GARPS GRIEF 3 years ago
- 41 CHAPTER 39 POCKET MAN BLAMECO AND ROGER'S APOLOGY 3 years ago
- 42 CHAPTER. 40 RAKUYO ANS HIS MIRACLE WEAPON 3 years ago
- 43 CHAPTER 41 TRAINING THE CREW AND BONDING 3 years ago
- 44 CHAPTER 42 NAMUR THE FISHMAN AND MOBY DICK 3 years ago
- 45 CHAPTER 43 MAKING THE WORLD KNOW FEAR AND GOL.D.ROGER 3 years ago
- 46 CHAPTER 44 MARINES VS WHITEBEARD AND ROGER ALLIANCE 3 years ago
- 47 CHAPTER 45 MARINES VS WHITEBEARD AND ROGER ALLIANCE (2) WHITEBEARD VS ALLEN AND HOLY KNIGHTS 3 years ago
- 48 CHAPTER 46 MARINES VS WHITEBEARD AND ROGER ALLIANCE (3) ROGER VS ADMIRALS 3 years ago
- 49 CHAPTER 47 MARINES VS WHITEBEARD AND ROGER ALLIANCE [4] LINCOLN VS CLARO BLACK NCE 3 years ago
- 50 CHAPTER 48 MARINES VS WHITEBEARD AND ROGER ALLIANCE (5) END OF A LEGEND 3 years ago
- 51 break 3 years ago
- 52 CHAPTER 49 AFTERMATH AND BLENHEIM 3 years ago
- 53 CHAPTER 50 CURIEL THE BAZOOKA MAN 3 years ago
- 54 CHAPTER 51 TWIN GAUNTLET KINGDEW 3 years ago
- 55 CHAPTER 52 THE WATER TRIBE , CHINJAO FAMILY , BIG MOM AND THE WHITEBEARD PIRATES 3 years ago
- 56 CHAPTER 53 BIG MOM PIRATES AFTERMATH AND KAIDOS TAUNT 3 years ago
- 57 CHAPTER 54 COCKY KAIDO +IRRITATED LINCOLN = BEATDOWN 3 years ago
- 58 CHAPTER 55 THE MARK OF PRIDE 3 years ago
- 59 Poll 3 years ago
- 60 CHAPTER 56 - ONE OF THE SPACE EMPERORS , BLACK MATTER PIRATES 3 years ago
- 61 CHAPTER 57 -SPACE EMPEROR (II) 3 years ago
- 62 chapter 58(|||) 3 years ago
- 63 notice 3 years ago
The story is quite interesting, a few thing that i think that you can improve is the uppercase letter, the punctuation and don't make the paragraph to long, the character development should be explored a bit more too in my opinion. Sorry if its a bit weird, i'm not good at english. Thanks for the story by the way, keep up the good work 😁👍