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Good job bro. The main character is not stupid, it pleases. A possible harem is also pleasing, the female characters in the story are too pretty to be neglected, as in the original story. Don't quit writing, you're good at it.
Alright, it's about time I gave a review on this fanfic(What I observed up to chapter 20).Firstly, the grammar. It's good, there are only a few incorrect ones. The story seems to be following the canon but I like how you're changing and adding stuff to make it not a carbon copy of the original with slight changes. The mc uses other moves from different animes such as demon slayer. I have a question though. How do you plan on doing the harem? Will you go about the cliché "we talked about it and considered sharing?" Hopefully you make it realistic with a few drama there but not too much. Overall 8/10 for me.
For me until now it's pretty much the same story just with the MC that knows the future but doesn't do much with it. I understand its the time where he must grow so you follow the best road but its just boring. Sorry I stop here i will try to come back in some time to see what you did and update my review.
ok I'm back and I have read your book theres nothing wrong with it and the grammar is great but as I said I dont like fanfics where the mc takes over the OMC body I like oc Mcs and I too hate when the oc mc becomes a lap dog to the OMC I understand what you mean that was what happened in the other BATE fanfic on this app but what I'm looking for is a mc with a original journey we have already seen arts journey I just want a new mc journey which is why I dont have that much confidence reading this because this is just the original arts journey but better or the a few decision changes because the mc knows the future but what I'm looking for is a new journey in the BATE world with a new mc and his story not arts story ,not arts story but better ,his story well it's good but it's not my cup of tea but keep up the good work I hope your book does well peace
Grammar and story development have been very good in my opinion,update stability is good so far(1 Chap per day), mc is making the best use of his knowledge to become stronger and his personality is quite likeable. There isn’t much to write about as there is only 5 chapters out atm but i can say for sure that this has become one of my favorite ffs and i would highly recommend giving it a try.
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Good job bro. The main character is not stupid, it pleases. A possible harem is also pleasing, the female characters in the story are too pretty to be neglected, as in the original story. Don't quit writing, you're good at it.
Alright, it's about time I gave a review on this fanfic(What I observed up to chapter 20).Firstly, the grammar. It's good, there are only a few incorrect ones. The story seems to be following the canon but I like how you're changing and adding stuff to make it not a carbon copy of the original with slight changes. The mc uses other moves from different animes such as demon slayer. I have a question though. How do you plan on doing the harem? Will you go about the cliché "we talked about it and considered sharing?" Hopefully you make it realistic with a few drama there but not too much. Overall 8/10 for me.
For me until now it's pretty much the same story just with the MC that knows the future but doesn't do much with it. I understand its the time where he must grow so you follow the best road but its just boring. Sorry I stop here i will try to come back in some time to see what you did and update my review.
ok I'm back and I have read your book theres nothing wrong with it and the grammar is great but as I said I dont like fanfics where the mc takes over the OMC body I like oc Mcs and I too hate when the oc mc becomes a lap dog to the OMC I understand what you mean that was what happened in the other BATE fanfic on this app but what I'm looking for is a mc with a original journey we have already seen arts journey I just want a new mc journey which is why I dont have that much confidence reading this because this is just the original arts journey but better or the a few decision changes because the mc knows the future but what I'm looking for is a new journey in the BATE world with a new mc and his story not arts story ,not arts story but better ,his story well it's good but it's not my cup of tea but keep up the good work I hope your book does well peace
Grammar and story development have been very good in my opinion,update stability is good so far(1 Chap per day), mc is making the best use of his knowledge to become stronger and his personality is quite likeable. There isn’t much to write about as there is only 5 chapters out atm but i can say for sure that this has become one of my favorite ffs and i would highly recommend giving it a try.
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