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Really loved how you spliced both universes to gather. hope your next book is just as good
would you mind if somebody made it into an audiobook on YouTube or Google drive?
Love it. Love the seamless world build and how you incorporate different information with your own made-up factor. The Mc has no romance till chap 73, and Mc only likes girls, so petty good.
Would have been such a wonderful story but for the love of- The complete and utter feminization of the story is just... ugh! And then the demonization of male characters or reduction to side characters is just disgusting
If the mc were real she would kill the author. I feel like the author is intent on making the mc suffer and all happiness is short lived. It's so depressing that I stopped reading.
Dropped this as of ch. 70. Author constantly introduces irrelevant flashbacks and honestly the whole travel back in time 6000 years was a huge turn off for me. I could have accepted something like a decade or few, perhaps a century, but we have a MC that is thousands of years old, still acts like a young adult but it just unreasonably powerful. Canon events for both HP and MCU have lost all of their meanings; MC could power through everything by herself if she wasn’t acting like a supporting character in her own story (perhaps Thanos eith all stones could prove to be a small challenge). She refuses to get involved, then lamente slightly how things didn’t go exactly like planned, shrugs it off within the next sentence and continues her ways without any character development. We also heavily focus on the MC’s interractions with famous historical figures like founder from Hogwarts and Merlin, but they don’t really bring anything to the table. We already knew that she was a few millenia old, her leaving marks in history could have been briefly summarised and explained instead of dedicating several chapters for these encounters.
It is a good story, it has good writing, moves more or less quickly, the main character is a beauty, but I think I can't continue reading it, it is too tragic in my opinion. It made me cry for a long time and it's not even close to being over. So I'll come back when it's finished or I've calmed down enough to continue reading, because it's honestly a good story.
i just finished this story and all i have to say is that it was an incredible experience. It is so rare to have a good ending like this even more so for a fanfic i can just say good job author. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great story. Loved most of the arc. Also excited for your other stories. .... Great story. Loved most of the arc. Also excited for your other stories
Brilliant, this is my absolute favorite fan fiction for both Harry Potter and marvel. I am yet to finish the story but I couldn’t wait to leave a review. Thank you for the story, truly.
reading the first chapter till its end made me feel satisfied it draw a good conclusion to Jasmine's life great work author
i love you man, everything is so nice, i cant even- but seriously, i could kiss you for this. take all my power stones babe! you deserve them.
Can someone tell me who our female mc is romancing? I always tend to ask this before read.[img=recommend]
Every chapter I read makes me want to break the screen........................................................................................................
As much as I liked the idea for the plot, how it was developed turned to be confusing and horrible to read.
I've been reading this for a few months now, and I realized that I hadn't reviewed it... It's a very good fanfic... I especially love the mc... I wish it was a little more fast paced though...
Love the main Character in this and the story all together cannot wait to see what happens next. Hopefully we will get a new chapter in this story soon and excited to read more!!!
The story is slow paced and focuses more on character development. The author sure has done his research about the hp and mcu world. Overall good work. Keep up the good work❤️
We dont have enough female SI out there, yuri is a plus, at 300+ chapters, still updating, good premise... the frick you waiting for, go read!
I love the story, it mixes worlds and stories very well and although at first I started out seeing it as a Mary Stu the chapters I read as I went along showed me that is not exactly the case.
If you haven't started reading this, then don't start. After 100 chapters I can tell you this was one of the most painful reads I had. The author constantly contradicts themselves and the world he made. The is nothing natural about the development of the story, things just happen because the author says I does no matter how much it contradicts everything they has already been stated the power of PLOT will force it anyway. I'm sure if you started to read this at the beginning you haven't noticed how many contradictions there are but at this point it's just to painful to keep reading. That being said I can't really blame the author you CAN notice they get better but honestly the story was completely ruined with the flashbacks and the time travel, I'm pretty sure the author didn't realize how difficult it would be to keep track of them and by the time they did they were already way too deep and needed to keep them. At the end it was just one bad narrative decision that forced the plot and in order to correct it the story became forced. It had potential ad I'm sure it gets a lot better later on but if you are starting from the beginning the contradictions are just too much, but hey maybe you have more patience than I, I couldn't really get past the beginning so I have to stop, at this point the story just makes me frustrated. That's all.
lost me on the 4th chapter. built up Jasmine's character and background for three chapters, only to have it change into a transmigrated FMC.. it felt so "off" that i couldnt get past chapter 5. Honestly thought i could get past the FMC thing, but the change from Jasmine to this other person was just too weird for me.
Amazing story but does anyone remember what chapter did Jasmine met Wanda but in MoM version and she got like dusted because of going against time and space pls help...
story is enjoyable to read but side character's thoughts and personality will make you frustrated.
I am giving the story five stars because ... well everybody does it. I don't understand the ranking and power stuff on this website but whatever idc. I get inspired by a lot of fanfics that I only remember a few plot points from. The prologue is pretty much copied from "Rise of Arcane" from FF . net as a starting point. I adapted it for my use. If you catch any idea I used taken from another FF, tell me to properly give them credit. The plot is essentially already planned out. But I can make some modifications if I think I’ll need them. The story is about a girl who dies and is reborn as Jasmine Potter. She accidentally goes back in time and goes on adventures then. It’s gonna be a mix between the current plot (1990s) and the flashbacks. I got the idea from “A Long Way Home” also on FF. I'm doing this for fun and to improve my writing (speed and quality), if you don't like it just don't read it but try to be respectful please.
Really loved how you spliced both universes to gather. hope your next book is just as good
would you mind if somebody made it into an audiobook on YouTube or Google drive?
Love it. Love the seamless world build and how you incorporate different information with your own made-up factor. The Mc has no romance till chap 73, and Mc only likes girls, so petty good.
Would have been such a wonderful story but for the love of- The complete and utter feminization of the story is just... ugh! And then the demonization of male characters or reduction to side characters is just disgusting
If the mc were real she would kill the author. I feel like the author is intent on making the mc suffer and all happiness is short lived. It's so depressing that I stopped reading.
Dropped this as of ch. 70. Author constantly introduces irrelevant flashbacks and honestly the whole travel back in time 6000 years was a huge turn off for me. I could have accepted something like a decade or few, perhaps a century, but we have a MC that is thousands of years old, still acts like a young adult but it just unreasonably powerful. Canon events for both HP and MCU have lost all of their meanings; MC could power through everything by herself if she wasn’t acting like a supporting character in her own story (perhaps Thanos eith all stones could prove to be a small challenge). She refuses to get involved, then lamente slightly how things didn’t go exactly like planned, shrugs it off within the next sentence and continues her ways without any character development. We also heavily focus on the MC’s interractions with famous historical figures like founder from Hogwarts and Merlin, but they don’t really bring anything to the table. We already knew that she was a few millenia old, her leaving marks in history could have been briefly summarised and explained instead of dedicating several chapters for these encounters.
It is a good story, it has good writing, moves more or less quickly, the main character is a beauty, but I think I can't continue reading it, it is too tragic in my opinion. It made me cry for a long time and it's not even close to being over. So I'll come back when it's finished or I've calmed down enough to continue reading, because it's honestly a good story.
i just finished this story and all i have to say is that it was an incredible experience. It is so rare to have a good ending like this even more so for a fanfic i can just say good job author. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great story. Loved most of the arc. Also excited for your other stories. .... Great story. Loved most of the arc. Also excited for your other stories
Brilliant, this is my absolute favorite fan fiction for both Harry Potter and marvel. I am yet to finish the story but I couldn’t wait to leave a review. Thank you for the story, truly.
reading the first chapter till its end made me feel satisfied it draw a good conclusion to Jasmine's life great work author
i love you man, everything is so nice, i cant even- but seriously, i could kiss you for this. take all my power stones babe! you deserve them.
Can someone tell me who our female mc is romancing? I always tend to ask this before read.[img=recommend]
Every chapter I read makes me want to break the screen........................................................................................................
As much as I liked the idea for the plot, how it was developed turned to be confusing and horrible to read.
I've been reading this for a few months now, and I realized that I hadn't reviewed it... It's a very good fanfic... I especially love the mc... I wish it was a little more fast paced though...
Love the main Character in this and the story all together cannot wait to see what happens next. Hopefully we will get a new chapter in this story soon and excited to read more!!!
The story is slow paced and focuses more on character development. The author sure has done his research about the hp and mcu world. Overall good work. Keep up the good work❤️
We dont have enough female SI out there, yuri is a plus, at 300+ chapters, still updating, good premise... the frick you waiting for, go read!
I love the story, it mixes worlds and stories very well and although at first I started out seeing it as a Mary Stu the chapters I read as I went along showed me that is not exactly the case.
If you haven't started reading this, then don't start. After 100 chapters I can tell you this was one of the most painful reads I had. The author constantly contradicts themselves and the world he made. The is nothing natural about the development of the story, things just happen because the author says I does no matter how much it contradicts everything they has already been stated the power of PLOT will force it anyway. I'm sure if you started to read this at the beginning you haven't noticed how many contradictions there are but at this point it's just to painful to keep reading. That being said I can't really blame the author you CAN notice they get better but honestly the story was completely ruined with the flashbacks and the time travel, I'm pretty sure the author didn't realize how difficult it would be to keep track of them and by the time they did they were already way too deep and needed to keep them. At the end it was just one bad narrative decision that forced the plot and in order to correct it the story became forced. It had potential ad I'm sure it gets a lot better later on but if you are starting from the beginning the contradictions are just too much, but hey maybe you have more patience than I, I couldn't really get past the beginning so I have to stop, at this point the story just makes me frustrated. That's all.
lost me on the 4th chapter. built up Jasmine's character and background for three chapters, only to have it change into a transmigrated FMC.. it felt so "off" that i couldnt get past chapter 5. Honestly thought i could get past the FMC thing, but the change from Jasmine to this other person was just too weird for me.
Amazing story but does anyone remember what chapter did Jasmine met Wanda but in MoM version and she got like dusted because of going against time and space pls help...
story is enjoyable to read but side character's thoughts and personality will make you frustrated.
I am giving the story five stars because ... well everybody does it. I don't understand the ranking and power stuff on this website but whatever idc. I get inspired by a lot of fanfics that I only remember a few plot points from. The prologue is pretty much copied from "Rise of Arcane" from FF . net as a starting point. I adapted it for my use. If you catch any idea I used taken from another FF, tell me to properly give them credit. The plot is essentially already planned out. But I can make some modifications if I think I’ll need them. The story is about a girl who dies and is reborn as Jasmine Potter. She accidentally goes back in time and goes on adventures then. It’s gonna be a mix between the current plot (1990s) and the flashbacks. I got the idea from “A Long Way Home” also on FF. I'm doing this for fun and to improve my writing (speed and quality), if you don't like it just don't read it but try to be respectful please.