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I'll be honest Author. This story is good and actually has good context and background, but I kinda feel its really fast and too detailed on the character dialogue. When there's conversation or inner thoughts happening it shouldn't feel forced. It needs improvement, but not bad I all honesty.
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I'll be honest Author. This story is good and actually has good context and background, but I kinda feel its really fast and too detailed on the character dialogue. When there's conversation or inner thoughts happening it shouldn't feel forced. It needs improvement, but not bad I all honesty.