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I like the powers of sunspost......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Great novel so far though wish the mc had more than 2 characters in his harem
so far the story is going great. i felt that there were fillers here and there, but I hope that'll be reduced in future chapters. keep it up.
Excellent novel I like it very much Mc personality is great i also like the author previous work definitely recommend
Am from reading the story and it's not half as bad as I was expecting but now we come to your poor as 💩 schedule.
Evaluation: Above Average Potential: Gem Current Chapter: 21 WQ (4/5): There are multiple grammar inconsistency which are manageable and doesn't affect the FF itself too much but better resolve it via proof reading or ai script corrections. SD (5/5): With an average to fast pace developme nts without affecting the story & MC progression. CD (5/5): MC is an SI 'sunspot' not that OP as he also uses his foreknowledge plus his high intelect and out of the box strats' which help him overcome the schemes and plot of MarvelVerse. Has a chaotic-neutral temperament which is a plus and on the antihero alignment (punisher/Deadpool type) which is apt for his survivability. US (3/5): Author-san must've encountered the well known disease of a mental/writer's block. A snail-pace approach when it comes to updates availability. WB (4/5): The FF is still in its development phase and we haven't noticed any other branch of MCU or marvel stories yet. Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD
I like the powers of sunspost......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Great novel so far though wish the mc had more than 2 characters in his harem
so far the story is going great. i felt that there were fillers here and there, but I hope that'll be reduced in future chapters. keep it up.
Excellent novel I like it very much Mc personality is great i also like the author previous work definitely recommend
Am from reading the story and it's not half as bad as I was expecting but now we come to your poor as 💩 schedule.
Evaluation: Above Average Potential: Gem Current Chapter: 21 WQ (4/5): There are multiple grammar inconsistency which are manageable and doesn't affect the FF itself too much but better resolve it via proof reading or ai script corrections. SD (5/5): With an average to fast pace developme nts without affecting the story & MC progression. CD (5/5): MC is an SI 'sunspot' not that OP as he also uses his foreknowledge plus his high intelect and out of the box strats' which help him overcome the schemes and plot of MarvelVerse. Has a chaotic-neutral temperament which is a plus and on the antihero alignment (punisher/Deadpool type) which is apt for his survivability. US (3/5): Author-san must've encountered the well known disease of a mental/writer's block. A snail-pace approach when it comes to updates availability. WB (4/5): The FF is still in its development phase and we haven't noticed any other branch of MCU or marvel stories yet. Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD