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Great job. At the time of the last chapter, the story remains interesting, although it follows the canon! One of the best books I've ever read. I hope the author will not give up writing!
Reading 3 chapters destroyed my neurons. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Hello there lovely author - kun I am away a of Food wars a perfect shonen anime I fasinated about being *Cough* being son restaurant owner in dam lock down. please my heartly request please don't drop it update in stable time and be regular I don't care about grammar that much read to fun
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Soma-bashing novel. why would you do this? the the girls all suddenly falls in love with MC. Can i pursue you? YES. i dropped this. dsdASDADA
Where's the AU Shokugeki No Souma Tag? Came for Shokugeki No Souma but all I got was every personality of SGS taken away [OOC]............
A very good food wars fanfic.ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
sentencing structure is terrible, storyline even though AU sucks, and the way the character acts is so cringe that if I could, the vote would be in the negatives rather then a VERY generous vote of 2.
The setting is in Food wars and the MC is adopted by a food god. Nothing wrong there. However, the novel is very cliche and includes many moments that induce cringe in readers. Elements such as a elderly person harassed by a gang, followed by typical wuxia drama speech, then beat down. Followed by potential female partners surrounded by another gang. Overall, there isn't much to hate in this novel other than the cringe and cliche, but there's also nothing to like in the MC. There isn't an element that makes it worth withstanding the cliche moments of this novel.
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i read first 10 chaps then dropped no character development, girls just suddenly falls in love with mc, the just literally just met a second ago and mc goes "will you give me the permission to pursue you" the girls says yes. no story development, the reincarnation process was more fleshed than other chapters, like 1 chapter where the mc reincarnates and the ending of the chap was mc being breast fed the next chap was mc in toutsuki for entrance exam(for 1st year highschool) no backstory whatsoever. author was like playing a Visual Novel he finished and plays again for the other route(where you usually fastforward or skip everything just to reach the turning point) PS Nakiri Erina was de aged from 15 to 13, guess author was a pedo or lolicon
Why is your story so clichΓ©? There you use the same situation twice in quick succession with the response of the saved character being very cringe.
Sigh, His training and other things are always timeskipped, his meeting with rindo was cliche but ur heavily altering the characters. I mean i understand that they are in AU SGS but whats the point of it if every girl turns into a blushing stuttering mess. It's idiotic and boring. You've already made them his future girlfriends on their first meeting. The girls are just empty husks. 1st impressions are important and I couldn't read past ch 6.
I like it it's very interesting and the story sounds like its gonna be fun so I'll give 5stars I hope u continue and don't mind if there any negative comments in the future as they don't know how hard it is tO come up with an idea but great story so far
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I hadn't read it yet I will wait for it to have more chapters to read. it look really interesting. keep going even though nobody read (i will be back)to read OK
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I give it 5β for the interesting first few chapters..keep it up author [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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A little improvement in grammar but still an interesting fic, keep up the good work author san. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
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ΠΡΡΠΎΡΠΈΡ ΠΏΠΎΠ»Π½ΡΠΉ ΠΌΡΡΠΎΡ, Π½Π°ΡΠ°Π»ΠΎ Π±ΡΠΊΠ²Π°Π»ΡΠ½ΠΎ: Ρ ΡΠΎΠ΄ΠΈΠ»ΡΡ> Ρ ΡΡΠΏΠ΅Ρ ΡΠ°ΡΠ½, Π³Π΄Π΅ ΡΠ°Π·Π²ΠΈΡΠΈΠ΅ ΠΏΠ΅ΡΡΠΎΠ½Π°ΠΆΠ°? ΠΠ° ΠΈ ΠΌΠΈΡ Π°Π²ΡΠΎΡΠΎΠΌ ΠΈΠ·ΠΌΠ΅Π½Π΅Π½ Π² ΡΠ³ΠΎΠ΄Ρ Π΅Π³ΠΎ ΠΏΠ΅ΡΡΠΎΠ½Π°ΠΆΡ, Π½Π΅ΡΡ ΡΠΌΡΡΠ»Π° ΡΡΠΎ ΡΠΈΡΠ°ΡΡ
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Great job. At the time of the last chapter, the story remains interesting, although it follows the canon! One of the best books I've ever read. I hope the author will not give up writing!
Reading 3 chapters destroyed my neurons. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Hello there lovely author - kun I am away a of Food wars a perfect shonen anime I fasinated about being *Cough* being son restaurant owner in dam lock down. please my heartly request please don't drop it update in stable time and be regular I don't care about grammar that much read to fun
[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] Zero plot uwuwuwuw
Spoiler enthΓΌllen Soma-bashing novel. why would you do this? the the girls all suddenly falls in love with MC. Can i pursue you? YES. i dropped this. dsdASDADA
Where's the AU Shokugeki No Souma Tag? Came for Shokugeki No Souma but all I got was every personality of SGS taken away [OOC]............
A very good food wars fanfic.ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
sentencing structure is terrible, storyline even though AU sucks, and the way the character acts is so cringe that if I could, the vote would be in the negatives rather then a VERY generous vote of 2.
The setting is in Food wars and the MC is adopted by a food god. Nothing wrong there. However, the novel is very cliche and includes many moments that induce cringe in readers. Elements such as a elderly person harassed by a gang, followed by typical wuxia drama speech, then beat down. Followed by potential female partners surrounded by another gang. Overall, there isn't much to hate in this novel other than the cringe and cliche, but there's also nothing to like in the MC. There isn't an element that makes it worth withstanding the cliche moments of this novel.
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i read first 10 chaps then dropped no character development, girls just suddenly falls in love with mc, the just literally just met a second ago and mc goes "will you give me the permission to pursue you" the girls says yes. no story development, the reincarnation process was more fleshed than other chapters, like 1 chapter where the mc reincarnates and the ending of the chap was mc being breast fed the next chap was mc in toutsuki for entrance exam(for 1st year highschool) no backstory whatsoever. author was like playing a Visual Novel he finished and plays again for the other route(where you usually fastforward or skip everything just to reach the turning point) PS Nakiri Erina was de aged from 15 to 13, guess author was a pedo or lolicon
Why is your story so clichΓ©? There you use the same situation twice in quick succession with the response of the saved character being very cringe.
Sigh, His training and other things are always timeskipped, his meeting with rindo was cliche but ur heavily altering the characters. I mean i understand that they are in AU SGS but whats the point of it if every girl turns into a blushing stuttering mess. It's idiotic and boring. You've already made them his future girlfriends on their first meeting. The girls are just empty husks. 1st impressions are important and I couldn't read past ch 6.
I like it it's very interesting and the story sounds like its gonna be fun so I'll give 5stars I hope u continue and don't mind if there any negative comments in the future as they don't know how hard it is tO come up with an idea but great story so far
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I hadn't read it yet I will wait for it to have more chapters to read. it look really interesting. keep going even though nobody read (i will be back)to read OK
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I give it 5β for the interesting first few chapters..keep it up author [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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A little improvement in grammar but still an interesting fic, keep up the good work author san. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]