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Huh One of the Characteristics of Your Created Fanfic !! (Indian MC, Promote Hindu Gods, Indifferent To Non Indians, Naive And Stupid MC, Have No Ambition) !! MC Character Development When In The New World Becomes (God, Witch, Celestial, Alien) And MC Has Lived 100-Million Years Remains Indian Mentality. Are You Stupid And Stupid Don't Need To Tell Your Suffering And Indian Culture Which Is Not Relating To The Story In Every Fanfiction!!!
I really loved this story, it is a shame that the end was a summery and not finished. I think this is one of the only stories where the mc goes to the past, in which I didn't skip it.
Hello to the author from Russia, I read all your fanfiction through Google translator, as well as the message that I am writing to you, I also write through it, why am I, because despite the incomprehensible text in places, I, like other readers, fell in love with this fanfic and your author's work, I will hope that you will not give up this business and continue to delight all readers, good luck.
Overall it's good, I don't like the whole idea of going to the past.....if he just develops in his time it would be better... There are so many things in marvel to explore...you can even try different gods of other beliefs
Well written well worth a look it's a light novel so don't expect Tolkien but that said I enjoyed it for what it is ....................................................................................................................................
Thank You ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~
very good, read it, i recommend it . intelligent, some what OP MC.... amazing partner for MC, excellent plot.
Boring that's all I wish to say. I have been using this story to help me with my sleep problems. I'm still figuring out how it has 4 stars.
One of the best fan fictions I have ever read. Normally with this sort of thing mc gets op way to quick or suddenly gets unstoppable but that dosnt happen here while he is op it is gradual and he dosnt suddenly become a god.
the author likes to nerf the character to create new scenes, when the character is powerful enough the author makes him lose to a random mage who isn't even strong
The story is not the problem itself, the problem is that the author subliminally promotes the international LGTB agenda. Homosexuality is one of the ingredients in this story. I am NOT critical of anyone's taste or sexual preference, but the least I could do is add warnings and labels. It's already infuriating that Hollywood, Netflix and other media outlets force the LGBT agenda down their throats.
Howard Rosier on Frederick Seidel’s Selected Poems (Poetry Foundation) Rosier does a great job bringing paratext to bear on the text itself, in this case interviews and Seidel’s other work. “For a poet as revered as Seidel, there are scant mentions of turns of phrase being Seidelian, few poetic narratives or structures construed as Seidelesque. Chalk it up to the oddity of a formalist disassociating form from content; Seidel uses form like a hypnotist to mesmerize readers so that they are sedated, or at the very least put at ease, in spite of his content.”
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Well written, with a pretty good setup. Any plotholes made by time nonsense is just time nonsense. Hopeful that the author enjoyed wring this as much as we enjoy reading it.
All I can say is that I am completely satisfied with this fic and you've done a great aśš job keeping the story interesting 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😉
Good couple of chapters in the new arc. Hopw we get a good answer about how voldemort returned. Also a pov from terrified death eaters would be great.
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Superb story....well writting brother....its a pleasure to see someone exploring Indian culture & history as we have a rich amount of it.....the okot is fabulous to boot
A good read its not cannon but it is entertaining... ............. ...................... ............................. .....................................
you finally came back, you finally came back, you finally came back, you finally came back, you finally came back!!!!!! you finally came back, you finally came back, you finally came back, you finally came back, you finally came back!!!!!!
Great chapter. In my opinion this version is miles better than your previous version. Great chapter. In my opinion this version is miles better than your previous version.
Well. It was cool in the begining, but then author started NERF MC. And he does it constantly. I haven't read orginal version, so can't compare.
Good so far love the development of the story, I love the concept of going that far back in time and his creation of the Repository. Can't wait for more chapters as this story has a lot of potentials and can't wait to see what Mason does next. If I would suggest anything it would be that you focus on a certain aspect of magic that you haven't extremely covered, that of Spell Creation. I believe that he could create tomes of spells and hide them at Hogwarts and set a few parameters so that when he eventually gets back to the present or for descendants or the Golden Trio to find it. Another aspect that I would love the MC to follow is Artifact Creation. I would love for the MC to create an active 'family tree tracker' and place it in the Repository. I believe that this would be a 'good' gift to the goblins so that muggle-born students could have the chance to trace their ancestors to a possible squib ancestor. I hope you implement these ideas but I won't feel bad if you don't. Can't wait to see what comes next. Sukuna
Spoiler enthüllen Not a bad tale if your just out to be mildly enterained it's a fan fic the author made it for fun don't expect Lord of the rings that said I liked it
Huh One of the Characteristics of Your Created Fanfic !! (Indian MC, Promote Hindu Gods, Indifferent To Non Indians, Naive And Stupid MC, Have No Ambition) !! MC Character Development When In The New World Becomes (God, Witch, Celestial, Alien) And MC Has Lived 100-Million Years Remains Indian Mentality. Are You Stupid And Stupid Don't Need To Tell Your Suffering And Indian Culture Which Is Not Relating To The Story In Every Fanfiction!!!
I really loved this story, it is a shame that the end was a summery and not finished. I think this is one of the only stories where the mc goes to the past, in which I didn't skip it.
Hello to the author from Russia, I read all your fanfiction through Google translator, as well as the message that I am writing to you, I also write through it, why am I, because despite the incomprehensible text in places, I, like other readers, fell in love with this fanfic and your author's work, I will hope that you will not give up this business and continue to delight all readers, good luck.
Overall it's good, I don't like the whole idea of going to the past.....if he just develops in his time it would be better... There are so many things in marvel to explore...you can even try different gods of other beliefs
Well written well worth a look it's a light novel so don't expect Tolkien but that said I enjoyed it for what it is ....................................................................................................................................
Thank You ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~
very good, read it, i recommend it . intelligent, some what OP MC.... amazing partner for MC, excellent plot.
Boring that's all I wish to say. I have been using this story to help me with my sleep problems. I'm still figuring out how it has 4 stars.
One of the best fan fictions I have ever read. Normally with this sort of thing mc gets op way to quick or suddenly gets unstoppable but that dosnt happen here while he is op it is gradual and he dosnt suddenly become a god.
the author likes to nerf the character to create new scenes, when the character is powerful enough the author makes him lose to a random mage who isn't even strong
The story is not the problem itself, the problem is that the author subliminally promotes the international LGTB agenda. Homosexuality is one of the ingredients in this story. I am NOT critical of anyone's taste or sexual preference, but the least I could do is add warnings and labels. It's already infuriating that Hollywood, Netflix and other media outlets force the LGBT agenda down their throats.
Howard Rosier on Frederick Seidel’s Selected Poems (Poetry Foundation) Rosier does a great job bringing paratext to bear on the text itself, in this case interviews and Seidel’s other work. “For a poet as revered as Seidel, there are scant mentions of turns of phrase being Seidelian, few poetic narratives or structures construed as Seidelesque. Chalk it up to the oddity of a formalist disassociating form from content; Seidel uses form like a hypnotist to mesmerize readers so that they are sedated, or at the very least put at ease, in spite of his content.”
Spoiler enthüllen Well written, with a pretty good setup. Any plotholes made by time nonsense is just time nonsense. Hopeful that the author enjoyed wring this as much as we enjoy reading it.
All I can say is that I am completely satisfied with this fic and you've done a great aśš job keeping the story interesting 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😉
Good couple of chapters in the new arc. Hopw we get a good answer about how voldemort returned. Also a pov from terrified death eaters would be great.
Spoiler enthüllen 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Superb story....well writting brother....its a pleasure to see someone exploring Indian culture & history as we have a rich amount of it.....the okot is fabulous to boot
A good read its not cannon but it is entertaining... ............. ...................... ............................. .....................................
you finally came back, you finally came back, you finally came back, you finally came back, you finally came back!!!!!! you finally came back, you finally came back, you finally came back, you finally came back, you finally came back!!!!!!
Great chapter. In my opinion this version is miles better than your previous version. Great chapter. In my opinion this version is miles better than your previous version.
Well. It was cool in the begining, but then author started NERF MC. And he does it constantly. I haven't read orginal version, so can't compare.
Good so far love the development of the story, I love the concept of going that far back in time and his creation of the Repository. Can't wait for more chapters as this story has a lot of potentials and can't wait to see what Mason does next. If I would suggest anything it would be that you focus on a certain aspect of magic that you haven't extremely covered, that of Spell Creation. I believe that he could create tomes of spells and hide them at Hogwarts and set a few parameters so that when he eventually gets back to the present or for descendants or the Golden Trio to find it. Another aspect that I would love the MC to follow is Artifact Creation. I would love for the MC to create an active 'family tree tracker' and place it in the Repository. I believe that this would be a 'good' gift to the goblins so that muggle-born students could have the chance to trace their ancestors to a possible squib ancestor. I hope you implement these ideas but I won't feel bad if you don't. Can't wait to see what comes next. Sukuna
Spoiler enthüllen Not a bad tale if your just out to be mildly enterained it's a fan fic the author made it for fun don't expect Lord of the rings that said I liked it
other than the protagonist being an incompetent retard everything is great