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Mc ve fmc ilişkisi midemi bulandırıyor mc cinselliği biliyor ama tanrının oğlu statüsünün verdiği gücü bilmiyor mcnin yeni doğmuş olduğunu anlıyorum ama bu mayanın da yeni doğduğu anlamına gelmiyor romantizm konusunda er gen en kötüsü sanıyordum ama yazar bakış açımı değiştirip romantizmin en botkan versiyonunu deneyimleneme izin verdi 👍👍👍
MC is a God's son. His Guardian knows this, yet she's stomping all over him, and he lets her! Yeah, he's only just born, but my goodness! after I was done with my 15 mins for a free FP I quit! Horrible!
Author I hope you read this. My true rating is 4.4 but I saw your pitiful overall rating so i decided to improve it a little. It is a good dungeon novel but not enough to be on the top. I think your fighting scene is too long and sometimes you took atleast 10 chapters for just a mini boss fight to conclude. One more thing, I don't particularly like your dungeon set up, it's chaotic and there is no order and logical reasoning on it, Like glaze to forest to interior of the caste? to interior of the castle? to an Ice cavern? last one, your dungeon is already in the cold environment and then the theme of your dungeon is still cold. And I know that Niflheim is on the title but dude, make it warmer. Imagine, you can find a warm place in the coldest place/continent which is the dungeon. It will lure more adventurer for its uniquenes, relative to the environment. If you know Danmachi you can get my point. Remember, a dungeon novel is a sandbox novel, so make a world. Good Luck. I'am writing and giving reviews so I can improve my english. So pls rate my english.
This novel is a work of art. Your writing is beautiful, thought-provoking, and just a nail bitting experience keepingypu waiting for what's next.You put your whole heart into what you write, which I love. The content you publish is just awe-inspiring and addictive I can't wait for more
Great writing overall, with a good dosage of fighting, romance and fun. Great characters and a nice World. I really like the smart mix of clichés and unique characteristics. All character feel organic. Thanks !
I want to say I got to around chapter three hundred before I lost my place due to a glitch.
A really enjoyable dungeon story the best I've read so far. I like the characters and the lack of reincarnation. But it has to be said that the story is very slow. I've ended up skipping chapter upon chapter of really long but no meaningful combat. The author has a lot of details and could probably pull back some. That said, there has been some fight scenes I've really enjoyed they aren't all bad. The actual dungeon part of the story is actually really good.
I love the story, the characters, plot development and how the harem situation is handled in the story, the only thing i wish would be more chapters realesed per week! 🙂👍
So i just reached Chapter 480 and this is a Great novel, one of the best novels I've read. Love the characters they are great side characters are memorable and just about everyone has a perpose. And the dialog is smooth and consistent. Had some worries about Frost becoming a henpecked simp but that didn't happen it actually went the way i was hoping for. I love the dungeon creation aspect of this novel, wish there was a bit more of it. Hopefully there is more after this current arc I'm on is done. Combat is one of this novel's greatest aspects, great combat choreography, battle field detail and side character competence. Now for some cons, This novel like many others suffer from "talking to much". I will never understand the need to spew out full blown sentences and have full blown conversations during high speed combat and time sensitive situations. Speaking of combat I enjoy it immensely but I do think there was a bit to much, it's almost back to back with almost no reprieve on top of battles taking up a lot of chapters at a time. Heck this current monster stampede is over 120 chapters at LEAST. The in-between fight chapters are almost taken up completely by the two settlements Frost has been to. Mind you I actually liked Frost's time there but the thing is, it was dragged on for so long I'm beginning to dread him going to any other settlements. What I'm getting at is from dialog to combat, scenes are dragged on for a bit to long. Take out a third of both and it'll still be a great novel while also moving things along faster. I genuinely hope that we get to see Frost focus more on his dungeon as well as a few time skips just to show some time progression considering Frost is only two months old.
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It's a great story and an interesting story type. I have enjoyed this webnovel alot. I look forward to the future releases
Writing this at the 470+ chapter mark The overall story is amazing and I see a lot of potential when it comes to world building and the overaching story. one minor problem is slow story development but currently it's bearable and at the current pace, I see this novel going over the 1000 chapter mark before it ends.
Got through 20 chapters and could no longer handle it Amazing premise, far too slow for my tastes. Example: it takes the first 150 chapters for in world time to pass. The female fenrir named maya is an insufferable character and forced romance makes it all the more worse. She is cruel to the mc, who up until chapter 20 is barely 36 hours old. She is lazy and incompetent as a guardian. skills and strength she has in spades, but only uses it to traumatize and nearly kill the mc. The story clearly states at one point that if one misstep was made during a “training (misspelled from purposeful torture)” session, he would have died. It’s genuinely sad to me that a character that is only 20 chapters old is the whole reason I have to drop the book. I’m well aware this sounds like a hate review but without that character I would have read every chapter and kept up with the book. Some characters just kill books.
Enjoyable story with good characters and an interesting setting the Dungeon building aspect is honestly my favorite part my only complaint on that is how short those parts actually are id like to see a better balance between the adventure and dungeon building, other than that my only complaint is the short amount of chapters uploaded id like to see more. Overall I do believe this novel is worth supporting and am eager to see where it goes.
The MC ist the Son of GOD and his Character is like: An Idiot and that nearly kills himself in the first 10 chapters. An Coward who fears his Guardian who is half his size (don´t forget he is the SON OF GOD) and lets command himself arount by HIS HELPER. Why make the MC SON OF GOD if you want to tell the Story of a standart Loser
why does every action between male/female have to turn sexual? carrying cos there's no choice or waking up and stretching. Would be awesome if this random occurrence actually could be imagined as random, and not EVERY SINGLE TIME!
my main issue is that there's too much detail and spends about 2 chapters in the dungeon not using it very well and then 75 chapters outside the dungeon and complaining about issues that could be easily solved if he used the dungeon more instead of like a training for 2 minutes or something and actually made progress in it.
I know this question is dumb but Why would he need to grow as a person when 'he's' a dungeon core? It's like asking a donkey to become a better lion😅. Also that paragraph that supposed to be hyping the story always crack me up, I mean "Evil gods introduced new species that have the ability to change the world! will the so called righteous god allow? or nah?" or something so obvious like this🤣
Like others have said the author includes WAY too many unnecessary details wasting time and basically reducing the length of each chapter in terms of actual things happening the random 'romance' also is just more annoying than anything it's not done in a nice way or a funny way most of the time it's just to be perverted for no other reason and this happens a LOT if there's any female or male character together there's a high chance it will happen which adds in a lot of basically filler also I've read quite a bit of this and maya's defining trait is... alcoholic and that's mostly it also explain why minor spoiler that two I believe rank c adventurers were teaching frost better than Maya was teaching him and Maya and frost also don't have any real chemistry and I mentioned it slightly before but the filler is heavily out of control and is seen in a lot of chapters overall it's not bad but it needs much more work and I hope I'll find it later on in the story
Great story really! Though I have a few major flaws to point out! First is plot development! It's too slow! Like super duper slow. Author created a very big world yet the story development is super slow! It would get boring as time goes by since nothing exciting comes up! I dont have that much patience to keep reading about irrelevant minor stuffs. Second is MC's personality. It's Childish! I mean if author wants to make it something funnier with this Childish MC then it's not working, Annoying even. Now for the good parts of the story! First is the uniqueness of the story! You can rarely see an NPC with Ice Magic! Or his dungeon is frozen themed! Always fire, undead, darkness, the usual edgy stuff! His main weapon isnt even a sword! Plus points with that! Second Grammar! There's no noticeable flaws in the writing! One of the many flaws that authors have and never even improve on it! But this! For a first novel you did well! Now! Although you have this good points, the flaws I listed will weigh more on why people stop reading, most people dont have that much of time to be patient. Goodluck!
I don't do this often, actually I never did this, but I'm going to write a second review. My previous review ended with me dropping the beginning of chap 49, and I feel I was being a bit too biased because that day wasn't that great for me, let me just jump in to he review. As of the beginning of chapter 49 up to chapter (??) I have started reading again and found the author does the slow pace of the story well, but interactions could be better (or I just have high standards), writing quality is reading so its a 5, SoU is a 5 b/c there are already chapters for me to read, story development, as I said feels slow, but I wasn't getting into this novel thinking it was going to be on par with my top novels, and even if not on par, story development is still really good so 5, and the slowness doesn't bother me at all, after I started reading again I felt that the character design started improving so good job for that author you get another 5, and world background, can't really make anything of it as of yet so still 3 star. I last review I felt was too harsh, this is the kind of review I would regularly give, keep doing good author.
(chap.49) I am giving an honest review before I drop this story. I don't really know if you have a lot of mistakes in writing b/c my brain just makes it right for me if it isn't to bad, so you get a 5-star for decent writing. Stability of updates, well I found this when it had like 300 chapters already, so you get a 5-star for having a lot of chapters. Story Development....one word, slow, I could see if you wanted to start it off slow and let the reader get used to the dungeon system chakra ect but after chapter 40 I began seeing that this story would probably never speed up, my main reason for dropping, but you get a 3-star b/c I saw the effort at least, just too many unnecessary details, chapters, ect. Character Design, I have only seen what like 16 people, two adventure groups, bandit group + knight, Frost(mc) Maya(mc protector) Dark(god) Light(god) and like 3 other people, and I swear the adventurer group(first one) had more personality than the mc, they were just more fun(to me at least), Maya, I can't really say anything about her, she does nothing, she gets mad sometimes and gets embarrassed sometimes, that's it. Dark/Light god, don't really know anything about them, but that is okay for now, considering that they are gods, and Dark god so far is actually pretty decent. Maybe it was b/c I'm at chapter 49, but I would say take some time to get the main people of the story more depth and personality, I would give you a 2-star but since your a new author I will cut you some slack and give you a 3-star. World Background, something that can make or break your story, this is how I see it, you introduce us to this world that is suppose to be huge many species called Nova, then a few chapters later you dump us with information about where the mc is located all in one chapter and you basically don't really go over it again, at least up till chapter 49, all I really remember was he was in a mountain that had strong monsters the deeper you went, I honestly debated if I should have given you one star for World Background, but I went ahead and gave you a two since you did at least explain it in one chapter and went over albeit very little in later chapters. Don't get the wrong idea, I like the idea of your story and maybe I'll come back and read sometimes b/c at the end of things my entire life is reading, that's what I do for hours upon hours, and your story has a lot of potential, every story does, so keep working hard or don't really your choice, this is like my first real review of a story, so it's a bit long, but hope the authors sees this and tells me if it gets better later on.
this book has some amazing world building and character development that dont seem rushed at all showing how much effort sword immortal (the author obviously) put into creating it, i definitely recommend anyone looking for a potentially long lived novel to start reading this novel. i also cant help but notice that in the description it says our mc (frost) is called a first generation dougeon core 😏
I love this book. I especially love the main character being a dungeon master with a system that show what he buys. I hope you dd pictures for the characters and the background setting
Started pretty good, a bit slow paced, maya was kinda annoying but absolutly okay. At this point I was quite confident this novel was good… But the helping leos family arc was really boring in my opinion and I hate nothing more than the mc getting slaves … it’s so annoying and that he cares so much about people he just met … he’s a dungeon, helping some adventurers for fun? Okay but it’s just too much. Don’t understand the dark tag, more like wholesome most of the time… Don’t misunderstand it’s not bad, but I was firstly looking forward to a dark story and hate slaves in stories, at least with mcs that have them only in name
Mc ve fmc ilişkisi midemi bulandırıyor mc cinselliği biliyor ama tanrının oğlu statüsünün verdiği gücü bilmiyor mcnin yeni doğmuş olduğunu anlıyorum ama bu mayanın da yeni doğduğu anlamına gelmiyor romantizm konusunda er gen en kötüsü sanıyordum ama yazar bakış açımı değiştirip romantizmin en botkan versiyonunu deneyimleneme izin verdi 👍👍👍
MC is a God's son. His Guardian knows this, yet she's stomping all over him, and he lets her! Yeah, he's only just born, but my goodness! after I was done with my 15 mins for a free FP I quit! Horrible!
Author I hope you read this. My true rating is 4.4 but I saw your pitiful overall rating so i decided to improve it a little. It is a good dungeon novel but not enough to be on the top. I think your fighting scene is too long and sometimes you took atleast 10 chapters for just a mini boss fight to conclude. One more thing, I don't particularly like your dungeon set up, it's chaotic and there is no order and logical reasoning on it, Like glaze to forest to interior of the caste? to interior of the castle? to an Ice cavern? last one, your dungeon is already in the cold environment and then the theme of your dungeon is still cold. And I know that Niflheim is on the title but dude, make it warmer. Imagine, you can find a warm place in the coldest place/continent which is the dungeon. It will lure more adventurer for its uniquenes, relative to the environment. If you know Danmachi you can get my point. Remember, a dungeon novel is a sandbox novel, so make a world. Good Luck. I'am writing and giving reviews so I can improve my english. So pls rate my english.
This novel is a work of art. Your writing is beautiful, thought-provoking, and just a nail bitting experience keepingypu waiting for what's next.You put your whole heart into what you write, which I love. The content you publish is just awe-inspiring and addictive I can't wait for more
Great writing overall, with a good dosage of fighting, romance and fun. Great characters and a nice World. I really like the smart mix of clichés and unique characteristics. All character feel organic. Thanks !
I want to say I got to around chapter three hundred before I lost my place due to a glitch.
A really enjoyable dungeon story the best I've read so far. I like the characters and the lack of reincarnation. But it has to be said that the story is very slow. I've ended up skipping chapter upon chapter of really long but no meaningful combat. The author has a lot of details and could probably pull back some. That said, there has been some fight scenes I've really enjoyed they aren't all bad. The actual dungeon part of the story is actually really good.
I love the story, the characters, plot development and how the harem situation is handled in the story, the only thing i wish would be more chapters realesed per week! 🙂👍
So i just reached Chapter 480 and this is a Great novel, one of the best novels I've read. Love the characters they are great side characters are memorable and just about everyone has a perpose. And the dialog is smooth and consistent. Had some worries about Frost becoming a henpecked simp but that didn't happen it actually went the way i was hoping for. I love the dungeon creation aspect of this novel, wish there was a bit more of it. Hopefully there is more after this current arc I'm on is done. Combat is one of this novel's greatest aspects, great combat choreography, battle field detail and side character competence. Now for some cons, This novel like many others suffer from "talking to much". I will never understand the need to spew out full blown sentences and have full blown conversations during high speed combat and time sensitive situations. Speaking of combat I enjoy it immensely but I do think there was a bit to much, it's almost back to back with almost no reprieve on top of battles taking up a lot of chapters at a time. Heck this current monster stampede is over 120 chapters at LEAST. The in-between fight chapters are almost taken up completely by the two settlements Frost has been to. Mind you I actually liked Frost's time there but the thing is, it was dragged on for so long I'm beginning to dread him going to any other settlements. What I'm getting at is from dialog to combat, scenes are dragged on for a bit to long. Take out a third of both and it'll still be a great novel while also moving things along faster. I genuinely hope that we get to see Frost focus more on his dungeon as well as a few time skips just to show some time progression considering Frost is only two months old.
Spoiler enthüllen It's a great story and an interesting story type. I have enjoyed this webnovel alot. I look forward to the future releases
Writing this at the 470+ chapter mark The overall story is amazing and I see a lot of potential when it comes to world building and the overaching story. one minor problem is slow story development but currently it's bearable and at the current pace, I see this novel going over the 1000 chapter mark before it ends.
Got through 20 chapters and could no longer handle it Amazing premise, far too slow for my tastes. Example: it takes the first 150 chapters for in world time to pass. The female fenrir named maya is an insufferable character and forced romance makes it all the more worse. She is cruel to the mc, who up until chapter 20 is barely 36 hours old. She is lazy and incompetent as a guardian. skills and strength she has in spades, but only uses it to traumatize and nearly kill the mc. The story clearly states at one point that if one misstep was made during a “training (misspelled from purposeful torture)” session, he would have died. It’s genuinely sad to me that a character that is only 20 chapters old is the whole reason I have to drop the book. I’m well aware this sounds like a hate review but without that character I would have read every chapter and kept up with the book. Some characters just kill books.
Enjoyable story with good characters and an interesting setting the Dungeon building aspect is honestly my favorite part my only complaint on that is how short those parts actually are id like to see a better balance between the adventure and dungeon building, other than that my only complaint is the short amount of chapters uploaded id like to see more. Overall I do believe this novel is worth supporting and am eager to see where it goes.
The MC ist the Son of GOD and his Character is like: An Idiot and that nearly kills himself in the first 10 chapters. An Coward who fears his Guardian who is half his size (don´t forget he is the SON OF GOD) and lets command himself arount by HIS HELPER. Why make the MC SON OF GOD if you want to tell the Story of a standart Loser
why does every action between male/female have to turn sexual? carrying cos there's no choice or waking up and stretching. Would be awesome if this random occurrence actually could be imagined as random, and not EVERY SINGLE TIME!
my main issue is that there's too much detail and spends about 2 chapters in the dungeon not using it very well and then 75 chapters outside the dungeon and complaining about issues that could be easily solved if he used the dungeon more instead of like a training for 2 minutes or something and actually made progress in it.
I know this question is dumb but Why would he need to grow as a person when 'he's' a dungeon core? It's like asking a donkey to become a better lion😅. Also that paragraph that supposed to be hyping the story always crack me up, I mean "Evil gods introduced new species that have the ability to change the world! will the so called righteous god allow? or nah?" or something so obvious like this🤣
Like others have said the author includes WAY too many unnecessary details wasting time and basically reducing the length of each chapter in terms of actual things happening the random 'romance' also is just more annoying than anything it's not done in a nice way or a funny way most of the time it's just to be perverted for no other reason and this happens a LOT if there's any female or male character together there's a high chance it will happen which adds in a lot of basically filler also I've read quite a bit of this and maya's defining trait is... alcoholic and that's mostly it also explain why minor spoiler that two I believe rank c adventurers were teaching frost better than Maya was teaching him and Maya and frost also don't have any real chemistry and I mentioned it slightly before but the filler is heavily out of control and is seen in a lot of chapters overall it's not bad but it needs much more work and I hope I'll find it later on in the story
Great story really! Though I have a few major flaws to point out! First is plot development! It's too slow! Like super duper slow. Author created a very big world yet the story development is super slow! It would get boring as time goes by since nothing exciting comes up! I dont have that much patience to keep reading about irrelevant minor stuffs. Second is MC's personality. It's Childish! I mean if author wants to make it something funnier with this Childish MC then it's not working, Annoying even. Now for the good parts of the story! First is the uniqueness of the story! You can rarely see an NPC with Ice Magic! Or his dungeon is frozen themed! Always fire, undead, darkness, the usual edgy stuff! His main weapon isnt even a sword! Plus points with that! Second Grammar! There's no noticeable flaws in the writing! One of the many flaws that authors have and never even improve on it! But this! For a first novel you did well! Now! Although you have this good points, the flaws I listed will weigh more on why people stop reading, most people dont have that much of time to be patient. Goodluck!
I don't do this often, actually I never did this, but I'm going to write a second review. My previous review ended with me dropping the beginning of chap 49, and I feel I was being a bit too biased because that day wasn't that great for me, let me just jump in to he review. As of the beginning of chapter 49 up to chapter (??) I have started reading again and found the author does the slow pace of the story well, but interactions could be better (or I just have high standards), writing quality is reading so its a 5, SoU is a 5 b/c there are already chapters for me to read, story development, as I said feels slow, but I wasn't getting into this novel thinking it was going to be on par with my top novels, and even if not on par, story development is still really good so 5, and the slowness doesn't bother me at all, after I started reading again I felt that the character design started improving so good job for that author you get another 5, and world background, can't really make anything of it as of yet so still 3 star. I last review I felt was too harsh, this is the kind of review I would regularly give, keep doing good author.
(chap.49) I am giving an honest review before I drop this story. I don't really know if you have a lot of mistakes in writing b/c my brain just makes it right for me if it isn't to bad, so you get a 5-star for decent writing. Stability of updates, well I found this when it had like 300 chapters already, so you get a 5-star for having a lot of chapters. Story Development....one word, slow, I could see if you wanted to start it off slow and let the reader get used to the dungeon system chakra ect but after chapter 40 I began seeing that this story would probably never speed up, my main reason for dropping, but you get a 3-star b/c I saw the effort at least, just too many unnecessary details, chapters, ect. Character Design, I have only seen what like 16 people, two adventure groups, bandit group + knight, Frost(mc) Maya(mc protector) Dark(god) Light(god) and like 3 other people, and I swear the adventurer group(first one) had more personality than the mc, they were just more fun(to me at least), Maya, I can't really say anything about her, she does nothing, she gets mad sometimes and gets embarrassed sometimes, that's it. Dark/Light god, don't really know anything about them, but that is okay for now, considering that they are gods, and Dark god so far is actually pretty decent. Maybe it was b/c I'm at chapter 49, but I would say take some time to get the main people of the story more depth and personality, I would give you a 2-star but since your a new author I will cut you some slack and give you a 3-star. World Background, something that can make or break your story, this is how I see it, you introduce us to this world that is suppose to be huge many species called Nova, then a few chapters later you dump us with information about where the mc is located all in one chapter and you basically don't really go over it again, at least up till chapter 49, all I really remember was he was in a mountain that had strong monsters the deeper you went, I honestly debated if I should have given you one star for World Background, but I went ahead and gave you a two since you did at least explain it in one chapter and went over albeit very little in later chapters. Don't get the wrong idea, I like the idea of your story and maybe I'll come back and read sometimes b/c at the end of things my entire life is reading, that's what I do for hours upon hours, and your story has a lot of potential, every story does, so keep working hard or don't really your choice, this is like my first real review of a story, so it's a bit long, but hope the authors sees this and tells me if it gets better later on.
this book has some amazing world building and character development that dont seem rushed at all showing how much effort sword immortal (the author obviously) put into creating it, i definitely recommend anyone looking for a potentially long lived novel to start reading this novel. i also cant help but notice that in the description it says our mc (frost) is called a first generation dougeon core 😏
I love this book. I especially love the main character being a dungeon master with a system that show what he buys. I hope you dd pictures for the characters and the background setting
Started pretty good, a bit slow paced, maya was kinda annoying but absolutly okay. At this point I was quite confident this novel was good… But the helping leos family arc was really boring in my opinion and I hate nothing more than the mc getting slaves … it’s so annoying and that he cares so much about people he just met … he’s a dungeon, helping some adventurers for fun? Okay but it’s just too much. Don’t understand the dark tag, more like wholesome most of the time… Don’t misunderstand it’s not bad, but I was firstly looking forward to a dark story and hate slaves in stories, at least with mcs that have them only in name