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it was the best DC story I have ever read and that's saying something because I have read a lot of DC story's. most stores on here the mc is either really edgy and says stuff like I'm not a Saint or villain I'm just a regular human then proceeds to murder and r*p* babies or saving every single being in existence and literally becomes a Saint or they are really serious and depressed. so when I read this that actually feels like it is about a regular ish person who makes jokes that normal people make and well it just feels different but then you go and drop it. I REALLY REALLY REALLY want to punch you in the d**k multiple times. and again it was a really good story please continue. also the fact that you didn't know where to go with it somehow added on to how good the story was.
Beta MC, inconsistent plot, plot holes, the MC is just plain stupid..... .................................................................
I read it and this guy doesn't know the timeline or much of dc, It was good for some time but there was no hope for the story since every good thing happened before Drystan came there he should've started a few years before. Anyway, if anybody is looking for a fanfic like this search up Cujo
Everybody is an atheist until they clogged a toilet in someone else's house. - Sun Tzu yeah.. I don't have any idea on what to write so? 😅
Bro, why do you leave this work? It is very good. Continue it. I do not ask you to be followed if there are no ideas or other things, but many I know they liked it and they would not want it to end. Do it for them.
Good so far. I like it. Just want MMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!
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The story has flaws for sure, but it doesn't deserve this really low rating. There are stories here that have horrendous grammar yet they get 4.5 or higher ratings. Some also have glaring plot holes yet they also get the same. This story is far from perfect but it's definitely better than some I've read. You guys need to see a doctor
It was good at first untill the mc suddenly became a Beta and let Everyone pUsh him around I thought he was supposed to be an Assasin what happend to Tht ??
at first it's fine but after he chose to comfort his colleague who is hacking his laptop to attack batman without good reason or plan then the way he treats scarow attack and the aftermath it's garbage and author give use info that he is smart and observant at later chapter and I was like where that trait go at earlier chapter ? yeah it's bad story for me
its good.............................................................................................................................................
I Really like this story. Don’t drop it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Haven't read the story but just looking at the bad reviews and that all the good reviews are spam I dont think I ever will. 1star just to get this ranking down
It started out fine for the first few chapters but after that it became pure and utter trash ...............................................
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you know i keep hoping they kill the mc for his super weak mentality ...................................................... .................... ..........................................
Good story I like how it's going so far I know the character and the setting 99999(999
My main problem with this fanfic is that the mc is going through an existential crisis every other chapter, so sadly I won't be able to complete this story, it already had shaky start but now where it's decently far into the story, I'm good.
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Would have preferred him just doing his own thing, as an assassin and gathering info until the heroes approach him, but instead he approaches them like a stray dog meeting it's owner... sigh don't like how much this MC acts like a sidekick.
It's really good. The character design of the mc needs a bit of work; he's always saying he would refrain from hurting innocents yet he did (with a reason but I didn't really like it), he's supposed to be really smart, logical, and calculates his moves but he often does dumb things every now and then. This is the only "flaw" I'd point out in this amazing novel. The writing is superb and the author actually has a proper plot. This is criminally underrated and you deserve more readers.
pretty good but he's an assassin and he keeps going on and on about not killing innocent and also when he is fighting batman sidekick he tries not to hurt them idk why. Maybe when he's not soft anymore tell me and I'll delete this review
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Hello there. May I ask where you are able to get info about these DC universe, is it just wiki, movies, or is there a site where a person can read comics for free?
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it was the best DC story I have ever read and that's saying something because I have read a lot of DC story's. most stores on here the mc is either really edgy and says stuff like I'm not a Saint or villain I'm just a regular human then proceeds to murder and r*p* babies or saving every single being in existence and literally becomes a Saint or they are really serious and depressed. so when I read this that actually feels like it is about a regular ish person who makes jokes that normal people make and well it just feels different but then you go and drop it. I REALLY REALLY REALLY want to punch you in the d**k multiple times. and again it was a really good story please continue. also the fact that you didn't know where to go with it somehow added on to how good the story was.
Beta MC, inconsistent plot, plot holes, the MC is just plain stupid..... .................................................................
I read it and this guy doesn't know the timeline or much of dc, It was good for some time but there was no hope for the story since every good thing happened before Drystan came there he should've started a few years before. Anyway, if anybody is looking for a fanfic like this search up Cujo
Everybody is an atheist until they clogged a toilet in someone else's house. - Sun Tzu yeah.. I don't have any idea on what to write so? 😅
Bro, why do you leave this work? It is very good. Continue it. I do not ask you to be followed if there are no ideas or other things, but many I know they liked it and they would not want it to end. Do it for them.
Good so far. I like it. Just want MMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!
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The story has flaws for sure, but it doesn't deserve this really low rating. There are stories here that have horrendous grammar yet they get 4.5 or higher ratings. Some also have glaring plot holes yet they also get the same. This story is far from perfect but it's definitely better than some I've read. You guys need to see a doctor
It was good at first untill the mc suddenly became a Beta and let Everyone pUsh him around I thought he was supposed to be an Assasin what happend to Tht ??
at first it's fine but after he chose to comfort his colleague who is hacking his laptop to attack batman without good reason or plan then the way he treats scarow attack and the aftermath it's garbage and author give use info that he is smart and observant at later chapter and I was like where that trait go at earlier chapter ? yeah it's bad story for me
its good.............................................................................................................................................
I Really like this story. Don’t drop it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Haven't read the story but just looking at the bad reviews and that all the good reviews are spam I dont think I ever will. 1star just to get this ranking down
It started out fine for the first few chapters but after that it became pure and utter trash ...............................................
хорошо, но русификация имени — такое себе.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
you know i keep hoping they kill the mc for his super weak mentality ...................................................... .................... ..........................................
Good story I like how it's going so far I know the character and the setting 99999(999
My main problem with this fanfic is that the mc is going through an existential crisis every other chapter, so sadly I won't be able to complete this story, it already had shaky start but now where it's decently far into the story, I'm good.
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Would have preferred him just doing his own thing, as an assassin and gathering info until the heroes approach him, but instead he approaches them like a stray dog meeting it's owner... sigh don't like how much this MC acts like a sidekick.
It's really good. The character design of the mc needs a bit of work; he's always saying he would refrain from hurting innocents yet he did (with a reason but I didn't really like it), he's supposed to be really smart, logical, and calculates his moves but he often does dumb things every now and then. This is the only "flaw" I'd point out in this amazing novel. The writing is superb and the author actually has a proper plot. This is criminally underrated and you deserve more readers.
pretty good but he's an assassin and he keeps going on and on about not killing innocent and also when he is fighting batman sidekick he tries not to hurt them idk why. Maybe when he's not soft anymore tell me and I'll delete this review
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Hello there. May I ask where you are able to get info about these DC universe, is it just wiki, movies, or is there a site where a person can read comics for free?
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