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Excelente novela, los diálogos son un poco extraños pero es un ff, así que se entiende, en lo demás me encantó muchísimo, espero pronto la segunda parte. ;)
Since this is a Fanfict, I would not judge the plot or MC that much since that would be a waste of time. I'll give an OK for the narrating as it is quite good even though some parts were limited from the lack of vocabulary. But the interactions of the characters are a bit... off. For instance, there are some parts where the first guy with the dialogue said "Let's go to this place" out of nowhere and the other guy listening to him was like "okay". The reactions of the supporting characters though, it's just there's not much of it. I'm trying really hard not to brand this review as a spoiler. So, if author wants to see parts I've pointed at, please go to your latest chapter's comment section.
fanfics in general are suppos d to be fastpaced, but maintaining that delicate equilibrium is even harder with an op mc. I loved how you made Kakashi from strong to op.
the story is actually okay, the only mistakes are some words missing letters and the storyline is quite good with proper background and good "fleshing" of the characters
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Read tons of Naruto novel and yeee this 1 is good Of course there is shortcomings Sadly MC got strong way to fast(or should i say overpowered) You could build on how he got strong (show us how he struggle for power so readers care more and be more immersive) And show others people perspective on how they see MC Overall good novel TY
hey r u gonna update in Naruto with more more fruit fan-fic on webnovel u are not updating ????????????? ANYWAY this novel is soo good but I hope u don't drop this...👍
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nothing to say, five stars are enough to explain and if you want to know why, just read it .
Muuuy buen fic, apesar que pusiste oc al mc o kakashi esta muy buena la historia(en mi opinion), pero pusiste mi fin mi ship con Ino y Hinata. (#nololis) o si no, espera asta shippuden para tener una relacion, aunque se que es muy mayor pero es bueno xD, si ya es lo que creo que es ya rejuvenecio.
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this is pretty good my one issue with this is how honest this new kakashi is spoilers example he chases orichimoru and tells him a complete path to imortality not only is he belived hes rewarded with copiration in a root battle and get this hasirama and madra cells!!? pretty sad he wasnt scammed tbh. the second case of this was when he gave out an S class secret to a civilian. and finally when he gives his full research notes to tsunade keep in mind he disects people so he basically gave the scared of blood medic his disection notes all in hope of being thought. well he also imroves pretty fast and finally last critique there are no consequences for his actions things always go his way
▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ - not really 5☆, but I will give 5☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ - too fast. but it's ok ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆
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Okay amazing so far. I will have to wait to stockpile some chapters. When there will be at least 40 i will be back. Also you are doing a lot of things (interesting things) before cannon. It is great and all but i would like to see some stuff done when cannon start. Hope you have some ideas.
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pretty good so far, only read up to ch 15 the reincarnated mc is pretty likeable, there's just a questionable bit, where mc told Orochimaru about the rinnegan where to get it, but i guess mc still profit from it since he got THE HASHIRAMA CELLS, the plot is also fresh and never done before i hope in the future make the mc cut all the loose ends mc left
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Excelente novela, los diálogos son un poco extraños pero es un ff, así que se entiende, en lo demás me encantó muchísimo, espero pronto la segunda parte. ;)
Since this is a Fanfict, I would not judge the plot or MC that much since that would be a waste of time. I'll give an OK for the narrating as it is quite good even though some parts were limited from the lack of vocabulary. But the interactions of the characters are a bit... off. For instance, there are some parts where the first guy with the dialogue said "Let's go to this place" out of nowhere and the other guy listening to him was like "okay". The reactions of the supporting characters though, it's just there's not much of it. I'm trying really hard not to brand this review as a spoiler. So, if author wants to see parts I've pointed at, please go to your latest chapter's comment section.
fanfics in general are suppos d to be fastpaced, but maintaining that delicate equilibrium is even harder with an op mc. I loved how you made Kakashi from strong to op.
the story is actually okay, the only mistakes are some words missing letters and the storyline is quite good with proper background and good "fleshing" of the characters
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Read tons of Naruto novel and yeee this 1 is good Of course there is shortcomings Sadly MC got strong way to fast(or should i say overpowered) You could build on how he got strong (show us how he struggle for power so readers care more and be more immersive) And show others people perspective on how they see MC Overall good novel TY
hey r u gonna update in Naruto with more more fruit fan-fic on webnovel u are not updating ????????????? ANYWAY this novel is soo good but I hope u don't drop this...👍
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nothing to say, five stars are enough to explain and if you want to know why, just read it .
Muuuy buen fic, apesar que pusiste oc al mc o kakashi esta muy buena la historia(en mi opinion), pero pusiste mi fin mi ship con Ino y Hinata. (#nololis) o si no, espera asta shippuden para tener una relacion, aunque se que es muy mayor pero es bueno xD, si ya es lo que creo que es ya rejuvenecio.
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this is pretty good my one issue with this is how honest this new kakashi is spoilers example he chases orichimoru and tells him a complete path to imortality not only is he belived hes rewarded with copiration in a root battle and get this hasirama and madra cells!!? pretty sad he wasnt scammed tbh. the second case of this was when he gave out an S class secret to a civilian. and finally when he gives his full research notes to tsunade keep in mind he disects people so he basically gave the scared of blood medic his disection notes all in hope of being thought. well he also imroves pretty fast and finally last critique there are no consequences for his actions things always go his way
▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ - not really 5☆, but I will give 5☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ - too fast. but it's ok ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆
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Spoiler enthüllen Okay amazing so far. I will have to wait to stockpile some chapters. When there will be at least 40 i will be back. Also you are doing a lot of things (interesting things) before cannon. It is great and all but i would like to see some stuff done when cannon start. Hope you have some ideas.
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Spoiler enthüllen pretty good so far, only read up to ch 15 the reincarnated mc is pretty likeable, there's just a questionable bit, where mc told Orochimaru about the rinnegan where to get it, but i guess mc still profit from it since he got THE HASHIRAMA CELLS, the plot is also fresh and never done before i hope in the future make the mc cut all the loose ends mc left
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