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- Geschichtenentwicklung
- Charakter-Design
- Welthintergrund
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[img=recommend]..now this is how a story should be ........................................................................................................----------------
I am letting you know that MC should not have a harem.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Story was pretty good, but you have to overlook a lot of bad grammar and the use of completely wrong words being used. But there hasn't been an update in 5 months. I would like to see him use the law against the justice league because the Amazons were known for killing and using men (for snu snu) and didn't submit to man's laws. So technically he hasn't broken any laws.
[img=recommend]..now this is how a story should be ........................................................................................................----------------
I am letting you know that MC should not have a harem.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Story was pretty good, but you have to overlook a lot of bad grammar and the use of completely wrong words being used. But there hasn't been an update in 5 months. I would like to see him use the law against the justice league because the Amazons were known for killing and using men (for snu snu) and didn't submit to man's laws. So technically he hasn't broken any laws.