How I Become a Flaming Turkey

LV 4

Great_Young_Master

The story was doing great till the "system" came. Now, the MC gets summons, etc. The MC at the beginning was doing great with the powers he has from his bloodline but when the "system" came it pretty much slaps us in the face.... When the "system" came a bunch of info dumps came and made the story horrible.

LV 5

AlienWarlord

I haven’t read it yet, but I love the idea of being reborn as Raiser

LV 5

Mike_Wolfez

I would have preferred it if the story stayed focused on dxd. Otherwise, i do like that Riser is training and taking it seriously. .

LV 14

4thSeeker

Love the idea... love the main character. However sorry you lost me when gacha waifu and throwing shades on real life religion are introduce in the later chapters. The story is good but it is not for me.

LV 3

ShanTr

Like the premise but the entire thing with his powers not from DxD is not to my taste.. Would've preferred just focusing on the DxD world, no slutlife inc, no other worlds etc. but that's just my opinion. The grammar is good and story is readable. I'm dropping it but good luck author.

LV 14

Queen_Karina

This story started of great, but like many of the other reviews, as soon as it gets to the fate arc and shirou is introduced it goes downhill. The author puts extreme focus on shirou, having the mc add him to his peerage along with shirous harem. it keeps going even after the fate arc and into the mcs world where even the gods and higher beings get interested in shirou. The mc during this time doesn’t even get any power ups or anything all he does is spit his phoenix flames and that’ all It’ just frustrating

LV 5

Zero_619

This is a nice fanfic where SI Riser is not only actually taking things seriously but also the CYOA adds a certain uniqueness to the story. Hope you continue and keep up the good work.

LV 10

Tokyo_Not_Ghoul

I was left very disappointed. I read up to ch 10 before I had to stop. The writing was lazy with slutlife Inc and some chapters were just copy pastes of other authors works. Rather than make MC stronger on their own, the beta gets a "System" to getting stronger faster. It cheapened the story and the dialog 6was so bad I couldn't stand it.

LV 11

Demiurge_Ohara

writing- It has its flaws but still readable if you're patient, recommend grammarly. S. development- Decent, but nothing exceptional and anything new. It is predictable and generalised. Character- A bit bland for the Mc and the side characters, predictable and forgettable to put it bluntly. also why are they easily indoctrinated with little to no resistance? for the 'plot'? update- Not sure. perhaps decent I guess. World - It's DXD, but it lacks the exposure of cultures, society, and etc.

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

Writing quality: 4/5 star World background: 0/5 World anime: High school DxD Character design: 2/5 MC is Riser Phonix, but have stupid hero complex. 🙄 MC buy Hermione Granger... is your "waifu" 💩... is the first choice for your haren / member of your nobility. MC is stupid? There are better options in world: High school DxD. I am disappointed in the story.😔

LV 6

Weirdo

Just finish this riser phenex fanfic. Nicely done although his cheat is a bit weak, or more like too much restraint and limitation. He also not too strong but maybe it just me. I wish for author add more other anime with fire power... Its interesting to see him with giotto zero breakthrough point...

LV 4

Lucy_Carla

there cthulhu , there islam ..... 2 very rare element in webnovel... enough to give this 5 star..............................................

LV 4

FrogGodKing

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

LV 4

TheGehrmanSparrow

Writing Quality: 4: Pretty good until the Fate arc where he adds SHIROU EMIYA AND THE ENTIRETY OF SHIROUS's INTO HIS PEERAGE WASTING ALL 8 OF HIS PAWN SLOTS, and no one likes Hermione so Hermione as FIRST CHOICE seems pretty STUPID TO ME Stability of Updates: 1 Obviously. Story Development: 1 Character Design: 1: No comment World Background: 5 star: Its DxD

LV 4

Noah_Starrysky

This book is very good ❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 4

ThoTslayer_10l

Continue this loving it I don't know why someone hate it maybe cause of the summon tingy but I like it I'm the harem type guy so yeah... [img=update]

LV 14

0Zagreus0

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LV 14

unknown_daoist

Its a good read, but i recommend author to chamge to tags (it will only help you get more readers, pls lets be serious its nit sliceoflife...) PS: i was also kinda dissapointed at the start with the whole Slutlife inc. addition, bjt the religious thinkgs stopped pretty early and were only a one time thing (hopefully it stays that way) + the addition shows MCs character splendidly and now i only see it as a unique part of the fic👍