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After chapter 78 all the chapters a messed up. I was wasted coins for nothing. Its become a favourite story of mine, once this issue is fixed I will change it to 5 star
it was going good other than some minor inconsistencies between chapters but after 78 it's all just random junk idk whats going on but I'm disappointed
I really like this book!! The plot is interresting, you don’t have stupid thing like a father abandonning is son at the first occasion. And I think this book should have more fan! 🍿🍿
all the chapters after 78 are just random letters and symbols and bits and pieces of previous chapters. not sure if my mobile app is messed up or if the author is just posting random things. prior to chapter 79 i would have given this novel 4 amd 5 stars but now i have to give it 1 stars sincr i just purchased about 30 chapters of no content.
It's a good read to pass the time, so far MC and other characters are likeable, story line is easy to follow and can't wait to discover more
The story and character development is nice, especially with absence of calamity which you would normally see in stories like this, the only problem is the repetition on chapters and different scenes in the middle of another, it makes the reading unenjoyable, I do hope the author sees and gets a new translator or something
What the heck happened after chapter 78???? It was going great then the chapters just started repeating and a bunch of random letters all over the place? Someone please explain.
the writing quality sucks. If the author just reviewed it once it could be a bit better. The story idea is like just the General idea where the mc is forced to be special. hope the author improves his writing quality and gives his novel a read before posting
I haven't written many reviews on this site so maybe my words aren't very credible, however i must say that this story is bad, perhaps the idea of the story itself is good, but the way the author writes is simply subpar at best, it reminds me of an essay one could read from a second grader. if it could be rewritten by someone else then perhaps I could give this a much higher rating but 2/5 is already the highest I can give this.
Lol it the same novel over and over again but with different twist, it that he doesn't have a bloodline or no magic, or no talent but then the stupi author finds a stupid way to make him strong, it getting boring and annoying finding novels that are the same but different plot and twist. Why can't he have a bloodline or come from a powerful family, y does he have to be the unlucky one???
Well the story seems to be good but the grammar sucks. The most frustrating thing is that most of these errors can be resolved by just a simple review before posting. Hope the author corrects this.
really a special pearl. Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. Author i really want mooooooooooooooooooooreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I am currently only at chapter 13 but the story is a really good one! At first it seems like a normal MC is weak but gets strong story but this novel is somehow different! A must read!!
I am loving the fact how synchronous the language and actions are with setting. The author is giving clear and concise outlines of characters and things in every scene. one thing that I really loved is the smoothness and flow of words. Excellent work. Keep it up. Eager to read more.
First of all I really love the synopsis, I really do since every time I would read a story I always look at the synopsis since I believe that the synopsis defines the inside of my book and you will know if it will be pretty interesting or nah. So kudos to you for making an interesting synopsis. Next, the title chapters are pretty interesting too, makes you excited to read the next ones. The flow of your story is great, the world building is pretty interesting and amazing. Keep writing!
Nice book, well described background world 🌍 the author made his characters complete and deep, enhancing the readability of the story. Nice one, keep going!
5/5 Wow, a work that displays the author's imagination （三ФÅФ三） I think that this book is descriptive enough that you can imagine the scenes (●ↀωↀ●) Good job, please continue this! (=^-ω-^=)
The book is so interesting... The plot is amazing, the style of writing is kinda interesting too. Not to mention the very attractive title. I love everything about this book so far 😍
The story is quite interesting. It is an unfamiliar storyline. Love it! As it's your new work, you did great! Synopsis is great and plot is well defined. Keep it up! I cheer you!
Even though at first it feel like a typical weak to strong stories there is something in this book that is not in other books of same genre, the world ground. Compared to the other novels the world background is different in this book making it standout. With a little editing this will become an outsatnding book t o read!!!
Just like the mysterious man said and I paraphrased it "the path of cultivation novel is arduous even more so path of everybody-called-him-trash MC that learn the sword dao trope." I'm eager to know how the MC will developed and how the author will depict the beauty of the swords.
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉 ADVICE None, the author was a better writer than me...... Kudos!
Author supporting his own work. This is a story that will be updated daily with chapters, Please read my work and share it if you liked it...
Must say that this book is quite an addiction especially for people who enjoy the action with a nice blend of romance......The ML is determined, devoted, and extremely strong and tries to rise up at the top. Highly recommended for fantasy and action lovers, the way the author describes the emotions and incidents is just splendid! Best of luck to both the author and the book.
it was amazing at first but when the newer chapters starting from new its just gotten very confusing if you can can you please correct the chapters as I really enjoyed it at in point
After chapter 78 all the chapters a messed up. I was wasted coins for nothing. Its become a favourite story of mine, once this issue is fixed I will change it to 5 star
it was going good other than some minor inconsistencies between chapters but after 78 it's all just random junk idk whats going on but I'm disappointed
I really like this book!! The plot is interresting, you don’t have stupid thing like a father abandonning is son at the first occasion. And I think this book should have more fan! 🍿🍿
all the chapters after 78 are just random letters and symbols and bits and pieces of previous chapters. not sure if my mobile app is messed up or if the author is just posting random things. prior to chapter 79 i would have given this novel 4 amd 5 stars but now i have to give it 1 stars sincr i just purchased about 30 chapters of no content.
It's a good read to pass the time, so far MC and other characters are likeable, story line is easy to follow and can't wait to discover more
The story and character development is nice, especially with absence of calamity which you would normally see in stories like this, the only problem is the repetition on chapters and different scenes in the middle of another, it makes the reading unenjoyable, I do hope the author sees and gets a new translator or something
What the heck happened after chapter 78???? It was going great then the chapters just started repeating and a bunch of random letters all over the place? Someone please explain.
the writing quality sucks. If the author just reviewed it once it could be a bit better. The story idea is like just the General idea where the mc is forced to be special. hope the author improves his writing quality and gives his novel a read before posting
I haven't written many reviews on this site so maybe my words aren't very credible, however i must say that this story is bad, perhaps the idea of the story itself is good, but the way the author writes is simply subpar at best, it reminds me of an essay one could read from a second grader. if it could be rewritten by someone else then perhaps I could give this a much higher rating but 2/5 is already the highest I can give this.
Lol it the same novel over and over again but with different twist, it that he doesn't have a bloodline or no magic, or no talent but then the stupi author finds a stupid way to make him strong, it getting boring and annoying finding novels that are the same but different plot and twist. Why can't he have a bloodline or come from a powerful family, y does he have to be the unlucky one???
Well the story seems to be good but the grammar sucks. The most frustrating thing is that most of these errors can be resolved by just a simple review before posting. Hope the author corrects this.
really a special pearl. Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. Author i really want mooooooooooooooooooooreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I am currently only at chapter 13 but the story is a really good one! At first it seems like a normal MC is weak but gets strong story but this novel is somehow different! A must read!!
I am loving the fact how synchronous the language and actions are with setting. The author is giving clear and concise outlines of characters and things in every scene. one thing that I really loved is the smoothness and flow of words. Excellent work. Keep it up. Eager to read more.
First of all I really love the synopsis, I really do since every time I would read a story I always look at the synopsis since I believe that the synopsis defines the inside of my book and you will know if it will be pretty interesting or nah. So kudos to you for making an interesting synopsis. Next, the title chapters are pretty interesting too, makes you excited to read the next ones. The flow of your story is great, the world building is pretty interesting and amazing. Keep writing!
Nice book, well described background world 🌍 the author made his characters complete and deep, enhancing the readability of the story. Nice one, keep going!
5/5 Wow, a work that displays the author's imagination （三ФÅФ三） I think that this book is descriptive enough that you can imagine the scenes (●ↀωↀ●) Good job, please continue this! (=^-ω-^=)
The book is so interesting... The plot is amazing, the style of writing is kinda interesting too. Not to mention the very attractive title. I love everything about this book so far 😍
The story is quite interesting. It is an unfamiliar storyline. Love it! As it's your new work, you did great! Synopsis is great and plot is well defined. Keep it up! I cheer you!
Even though at first it feel like a typical weak to strong stories there is something in this book that is not in other books of same genre, the world ground. Compared to the other novels the world background is different in this book making it standout. With a little editing this will become an outsatnding book t o read!!!
Just like the mysterious man said and I paraphrased it "the path of cultivation novel is arduous even more so path of everybody-called-him-trash MC that learn the sword dao trope." I'm eager to know how the MC will developed and how the author will depict the beauty of the swords.
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉 ADVICE None, the author was a better writer than me...... Kudos!
Author supporting his own work. This is a story that will be updated daily with chapters, Please read my work and share it if you liked it...
Must say that this book is quite an addiction especially for people who enjoy the action with a nice blend of romance......The ML is determined, devoted, and extremely strong and tries to rise up at the top. Highly recommended for fantasy and action lovers, the way the author describes the emotions and incidents is just splendid! Best of luck to both the author and the book.
it was amazing at first but when the newer chapters starting from new its just gotten very confusing if you can can you please correct the chapters as I really enjoyed it at in point