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Alright story, basically I have found the story very dull. There's nothing rly to it. Not something that I would recommend other to read it... This was my honest opinion so do not be mad at me.
Status: Chapter 67 Is it good? -Yup it is. And all those who wanted a fast-paced story would miss the fun I get. Is there a romance? -Love Elina and Yei. Just read it, okay? The story was kind of generic in the beginning, and it's not a bad thing for me as I was looking for familiar things rather than messed-up world background with loopholes. I already wrote a review but it was when I was at 30+? Forgot it. But even there, the story was progressing. The writing was good, even though the author was claiming it is bad since it was an MTL, don't believe him, it is not bad. His writing is even better than those who are at the ranking, to be honest. But not in exaggerating since I haven't read all novels on this platform, I just noticed that overrated trash novels can't be compared to this one. Now... I just expressed my emotion, let's jump into the downsides of the book. Plot Armor. -Well, his system is the freaking heck plot armor since the beginning. Dense MC. - Sometimes he/she gets clueless about things when in the first place, the world was just the same as the game. But I understand the MC since there are changes in the current era as it was supposed to be years have passed since his known era of the game. Nothing else. Will leave a review after another 30 chapters.
putanginamo bebe chupain mo ako ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
It has a good story and good character development. Also has strong world background. There are some spelling and grammatical errors but the story is still understandable.
A good premise with plenty of room to grow. The main character hasn't yet shown his/her individual character so far (chap 67). A little slow to get started so it would be good to build up a backlog of chapters.
Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.
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Like other reviewers have said the story is extremely bland. I don’t often give reviews, especially so early in the story, but this one really just feels like reading cardboard. The MTL quality is... ok, but not that good. Overall the story was not interesting enough to get me to overlook the quality. 2/10
TRASH STORY, No progress whatsoever and it's an MTL... Really? Please don't read this story. It's not worth the time. Better read others novel that have a good plot than this one.
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I personally thought that it was really good. You have amazing talent, and you've created a very intriguing world. your story seems well thought out and your main character is good too. Keep it up!
This is so good! Thanks for making my day with this novel! I really hope you never drop this and will stay here to read whenever! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
wow transmigration into a game! now that is something i have not read about before! what a wonderful intriguing concept that requires the author to master a game and at the same time writing how it will be inside the game. the idea is intricate, exciting, and new! I live for the joy of finding such novels! I loved it!
I read this till the end of the chapter. This was a great novel right here. No offense, they might some careless mistake but I love the way you write it.
It's good... Would I recommend it? Probably not. There are some mistake but I see the author was already well aware of that fact... and maybe the author was doing some fixing. For me, I will add this to my collection... just to see how it will turn out in the future.
Well I already love novels of this genre and didn't regret starting it. Since not many chapters are yet published it would be too soon to make a judgement, but it seems well going so far.
Really liked the story. No visible grammar mistakes to address and the pacing is pretty good. Of course I really enjoyed reading the chapters! The 'Email' writing thing was pretty interesting. Overall, a good experience. (p.s. the cover art is amazing too! :))
[Author Review] I simply a clone of EXC... 1. MTL so it was bad. 2. Update? 3 times per week or daily... depends 3. Even the author doesn't have any idea. 4. Only the important character would have their art shown. 5. It's a game
Alright story, basically I have found the story very dull. There's nothing rly to it. Not something that I would recommend other to read it... This was my honest opinion so do not be mad at me.
Status: Chapter 67 Is it good? -Yup it is. And all those who wanted a fast-paced story would miss the fun I get. Is there a romance? -Love Elina and Yei. Just read it, okay? The story was kind of generic in the beginning, and it's not a bad thing for me as I was looking for familiar things rather than messed-up world background with loopholes. I already wrote a review but it was when I was at 30+? Forgot it. But even there, the story was progressing. The writing was good, even though the author was claiming it is bad since it was an MTL, don't believe him, it is not bad. His writing is even better than those who are at the ranking, to be honest. But not in exaggerating since I haven't read all novels on this platform, I just noticed that overrated trash novels can't be compared to this one. Now... I just expressed my emotion, let's jump into the downsides of the book. Plot Armor. -Well, his system is the freaking heck plot armor since the beginning. Dense MC. - Sometimes he/she gets clueless about things when in the first place, the world was just the same as the game. But I understand the MC since there are changes in the current era as it was supposed to be years have passed since his known era of the game. Nothing else. Will leave a review after another 30 chapters.
putanginamo bebe chupain mo ako ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
It has a good story and good character development. Also has strong world background. There are some spelling and grammatical errors but the story is still understandable.
A good premise with plenty of room to grow. The main character hasn't yet shown his/her individual character so far (chap 67). A little slow to get started so it would be good to build up a backlog of chapters.
Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.
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Like other reviewers have said the story is extremely bland. I don’t often give reviews, especially so early in the story, but this one really just feels like reading cardboard. The MTL quality is... ok, but not that good. Overall the story was not interesting enough to get me to overlook the quality. 2/10
TRASH STORY, No progress whatsoever and it's an MTL... Really? Please don't read this story. It's not worth the time. Better read others novel that have a good plot than this one.
Spoiler enthüllen I personally thought that it was really good. You have amazing talent, and you've created a very intriguing world. your story seems well thought out and your main character is good too. Keep it up!
This is so good! Thanks for making my day with this novel! I really hope you never drop this and will stay here to read whenever! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
wow transmigration into a game! now that is something i have not read about before! what a wonderful intriguing concept that requires the author to master a game and at the same time writing how it will be inside the game. the idea is intricate, exciting, and new! I live for the joy of finding such novels! I loved it!
I read this till the end of the chapter. This was a great novel right here. No offense, they might some careless mistake but I love the way you write it.
It's good... Would I recommend it? Probably not. There are some mistake but I see the author was already well aware of that fact... and maybe the author was doing some fixing. For me, I will add this to my collection... just to see how it will turn out in the future.
Well I already love novels of this genre and didn't regret starting it. Since not many chapters are yet published it would be too soon to make a judgement, but it seems well going so far.
Really liked the story. No visible grammar mistakes to address and the pacing is pretty good. Of course I really enjoyed reading the chapters! The 'Email' writing thing was pretty interesting. Overall, a good experience. (p.s. the cover art is amazing too! :))
[Author Review] I simply a clone of EXC... 1. MTL so it was bad. 2. Update? 3 times per week or daily... depends 3. Even the author doesn't have any idea. 4. Only the important character would have their art shown. 5. It's a game