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Waiting for the new chapter updates ❤️ Best regards to Author-san! (Insert: Probably one of the best Naruto-verse fanfic I've read) Keep this up. -New Supporter and Reader
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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The grammar is good. The story is slow pace as I usually don't mind it but when I barely read about the Mc and see his family which I don't care about I find it extremely boring. Like I'm here to see the Mc growth it's like almost 30 chapters in and still waiting to know what's going on...what period r we in what is the training like? All of that r things I would prefer to read and not about whatever fight his family is getting into. Also, I know nothing about the Mc who was he before personally wise. Wt r his goals in this world. Why did he choose that as his powers when the question had no rules so if he wanted he could've also been a god? I was excited after the initial start but after a while, I got bored the story turned into something I'm reading n have no clue what was going on and why am reading this when it was not interesting anymore. All in all, it had a good premise but it delve into boredom after a while. I've read worst and I've read good novels. This int the worst but very far from the best...like very.
Waiting for the new chapter updates ❤️ Best regards to Author-san! (Insert: Probably one of the best Naruto-verse fanfic I've read) Keep this up. -New Supporter and Reader
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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The grammar is good. The story is slow pace as I usually don't mind it but when I barely read about the Mc and see his family which I don't care about I find it extremely boring. Like I'm here to see the Mc growth it's like almost 30 chapters in and still waiting to know what's going on...what period r we in what is the training like? All of that r things I would prefer to read and not about whatever fight his family is getting into. Also, I know nothing about the Mc who was he before personally wise. Wt r his goals in this world. Why did he choose that as his powers when the question had no rules so if he wanted he could've also been a god? I was excited after the initial start but after a while, I got bored the story turned into something I'm reading n have no clue what was going on and why am reading this when it was not interesting anymore. All in all, it had a good premise but it delve into boredom after a while. I've read worst and I've read good novels. This int the worst but very far from the best...like very.