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Splendid! An Absolute unit of a novel. Compared to other transmigration novels that I've read this one stands out completely, I can see the author takes inspiration from Diablo 2 and added his own unique twist to it. The story pacing is just right, not too fast and not too slow. The dialogues aren't forced and specially they flow smoothly. Extremely high potential, I can see this in the top rankings in webnovel in the near future. I hope to see you there too author-nim ;)
Good dark fantasy is hard to come by, but this one is genuinely interesting. I'm 50 chapters in and I'm not bored yet which is amazing for someone of my patience level. Please keep up the work
Very interesting plot, the chapters are lengthy and gives a good detail of everything thats happening. The literarture is very good as it takes us into the book. Every chapter is interesting, it keeps us curious on how the story will develop. I highly recommend this novel to everyone. I am sure you will love it !
This is a story that, as of roughly chapter 30, I am quite liking. The descriptions of the author are evoking and overall well written. I certainly note some grammatical issues or sentence structure problems while reading (some sentences like 'The man ran. Around the room.') but it does not pull the reader too far from the story and it is easy enough to make sense of what is intended. Updates seem stagnant but author seemingly wrote one hundred seventy nine chapters and if they continue to be held to the same writing quality then it is worth looking forward to─ the story is not marked as complete but I assume that it is. The story is developing well, no real complaints aside from the side-story of the MC looking back on what happened to his hero-students dragging on for a surprisingly long time while not being a split story. With that side story the author in Chapter 27 finally introduced a skip-through-time element to that plot. I believe the entire side plot could have started at the heroes and Stephen training after Stephen had already learned classes and elements. That way you could have the chapter of side story, then do a chapter of scrying back in time (which he did anyways) where you briefly see their meeting, early training, and can then go further back in time to see Stephen's early childhood then the battle with the demons and Naphtalie's sacrifice. As it was done there was a LOT of detail within the side story that drew the reader away from the actual plot─ if it is designed as a parallel plot then for author's future writings I hope they transition more fluidly between them (maybe add in more comments of 'Joan looked on' or the like). As written it almost felt like a separate book entirely, but overall very good development if a bit lengthy. Quite a few characters have been introduced already throughout the story and while some may feel cliché or one dimensional we do see actual growth with those we stick around. A rather large universe has been introduced and though only minor sections of the worlds themselves have truly been touched on the potential is there for massive development and I look forward to seeing it happen. Overall; I enjoy this story, it is not the 'greatest story ever' but that would be a hard thing to be in the first place, haha. This story has an interesting premise, rather pleasing descriptions, and is developing well and seems to have potential for extensive worldbuilding (which I tend to favor) ─ it is one I would recommend to others. I tend to be picky but try to remain logical with my ratings & I hope this provides feedback that benefits the author in future works, any critical statement made is designed with the intentions of helping the author improve.
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A great story, it has some minor grammatical errors but it does not really cause any issues with reading and understanding the story as one can easily understand what the author meant. I would say this is probably one of the better stories that i have read on here.
Love the story, It's extremely interesting, and not super cliche. The grammar could use some work, but over all its a 5/5. I love the story, and I think you should try it .
😭😭Author, you need to compensate me!😭 I started reading chapter 1 and 2 but it already made me cry. Author, why are you so mean to him? *whine* The MC's previous life is a great foundation to him for his survival to another world! I just hope that he can still learn all professions! It's great! Although I'm not good with grammar structure, I can still pinpoint if there's a mistakes but your novel is so great that I almost forgot to check it HAHAHA! Truly, this is gold- No. IT IS A DIAMOND! I'll continue reading this later!
I love to read I can ignore most grammer mistakes easily But this is one of those stories that have grammer mistakes every few sentences that makes you feel like English is the author’s second or third language. The story is by no mrans bad. It’s one of the sites better stories, but the issue is that cause of the grammer pulling you out so often it isnt ranked higher. Author needs an editor to go through the existing chapters and edit out the grammer mistakes
This is a fun read! I like Joan and his story. The author has done a very good job at present thr story. The pace is a bit slow, but I still like it! I almost felt like I was watching an anime! I can't wait to see what happens to Joan, especially his students in his previous life, and what he will do further. Good job, author!
I think this novel has an interesting and yet fascinating concept in my opinion. First of all, the magic in this world is works like an RPG game which is quite unique and the author gives a quite good explanation at the same time. The main character in this one, Joan is also pretty decent compare to some reincarnation novels which is he isn't whiny or I can say quite wise just like he previous life self. However, there is some cons in my opinion which is if you write a long dialogue, I guess it's better to give some space or make into a new paragraph. I think that's all I have to say and thank you. Keep up the good work!!
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What a great story. From the very first chapter i was hooked up into this. The story progressed beautifully. And, author really made all those fight scenes really epic. I could totally imagine all those spells which were thrown and the atmosphere of battlefield. This story deserve a five star rating. Highly recommend to you all!! And one last thing, I love THE MASTER!!!
Warrior MC? Check! Intriguing plot? Double checked! This novel deserves a five star rating because the plot is just unique from the others. And this category is very competitive in WSA, but I believe that this novel has a strong chance at wining the competition. Good luck author on the novel, I know it'll do great. Do update more
I fall in love with this story. I like it sooooooo much. 5 stars is easy for me to give for this work. Also, I can learn alot here. Will continue to read this work. I cant wait for my free time and spend it here
In all honesty, this is my first book in this genre, at first I just wanted to glance through it but then glancing through became reading. This is indeed a good book. To all fantasy lovers out there, this is specially made for your spirit.
Interesting plot, author gotta say, you have me hooked to this novel, still have to finish the chapters, but till now it's looking awesome. Just keep it up the same way.
The cover of the novel looks great. I enjoy the premise of leveling in novels although I rarely do it myself, it sets a clear and decisive goal for the Mc and company to achieve.
This book really had me hooked from the start. I love the plot, it's fresh. The author has a good writing style, it's easy to notice the effort put into developing the characters. keep it up dear Author
Kudos to the author! I saw your notes, it was inspired by Diablo 2. Diablo 2 was one of my favorite games! I started reading 2 chapters of the story and I could say it's a bomb. I recommend this story, guys! I can't wait to finish my current work to start a genre like this! W o W
Just from the first chapter, I could really tell that this is going to be awesome! Each page kept me on my feet on what the character will do next or the obstacles they faced. A thrilling adventure indeed!
I really love how the story flows goes. Although it was slow-paced, it makes you to go into next chapters continuously. It also had interesting magic types and systems! Last but not least, the author is very hard working and I knew from first glance that he paid a lot of effort in this novel! It will definitely will grow more and more popular in the future! Rooting for you!
This novel is very very well written, has a quick pace and the theme of the novel is awesome as well, expecting a lot of this novel, (only ch 11 now) but I will catch up to you guys, I really hope this story continues and evolves in a long story.
I loved the story. It is truly a master piece that captures your attention from the very beginning. I truly recommend reading this. The characters have a strong personality making this book truly one of a kind. This should be on everyone's reading list. 5 stars to the author. Amazing job.
I would like to thank MizA for commissioning the novel's book cover! I am not worthy of her grace and so I will make a review purely of just thanking her and giving her the credits. Upon reading, she voluntarily made one for me without making a requests for her to make one for me. And then I was surprised that she made an artwork based on the vibes she has read so far! I am inspired to see such support from my readers and thus will do my best not to disappoint her. Kudos MizA! And this review is for one and only you! This 5 stars are for your work! 😉
This novel is very rich in imagination which made the author special😄 The ML is a true hero and a warrior (I love warriors)😆 I love the world-building which is always a challenging task for authors but this author nailed it😉 Keep going, author🤗
I feel like I am watching the lord of the rings again. It feels magical and amazing. I like to read things like this when things I do get bored. it motivates me to push forward and be brave with obstacles in life. Great Book.[img=recommend]
It's quite awesome. It has a right amount of lore and the plot is quite on par with the setting. Overall, it totally deserves a five star rating.
I really like the way this novel is setup. Like the beginning of a legend except the legend is that of the MC who's about to start again. I'm already interested in how the previous experiences with classes will affect the MC's new life and growth. It gives me a slight bit of Avatar the Last Airbender vibes where the classes are like bending style. I like the almost epic style the narration is written with. Definitely a lot of potential!
I love D2. I think your story really brings out the essence of the mechanics in that game. Good job with the consistent chapter releases. Very impressive.
A novel inspired by Diablo 2, Torchlight, and, Elder scrolls Skyrim. Also, the action scenes were inspired by One punch man. And transmigration was inspired by many isekais that I have read till now. I hope this novel will be something that will be treasured and someday will become what I am proud of. Not sure though but Readers will still have the final say. Peace to you all!
Let me preface by saying I have a hard time getting in to most transmigration stories. That being said, this story is incredible! I was thoroughly entertained and invested. The author has done a great job with pacing, world building, and characterization. I would definitely recommend this! Good luck with WSA, author! (:
Wasn't surprised as this turned out to be one of the great books on this Platform. Even so, this book remained vast and unique. The language is clear and relatable. This book will get the applaud it deserves i am sure.
Splendid! An Absolute unit of a novel. Compared to other transmigration novels that I've read this one stands out completely, I can see the author takes inspiration from Diablo 2 and added his own unique twist to it. The story pacing is just right, not too fast and not too slow. The dialogues aren't forced and specially they flow smoothly. Extremely high potential, I can see this in the top rankings in webnovel in the near future. I hope to see you there too author-nim ;)
Good dark fantasy is hard to come by, but this one is genuinely interesting. I'm 50 chapters in and I'm not bored yet which is amazing for someone of my patience level. Please keep up the work
Very interesting plot, the chapters are lengthy and gives a good detail of everything thats happening. The literarture is very good as it takes us into the book. Every chapter is interesting, it keeps us curious on how the story will develop. I highly recommend this novel to everyone. I am sure you will love it !
This is a story that, as of roughly chapter 30, I am quite liking. The descriptions of the author are evoking and overall well written. I certainly note some grammatical issues or sentence structure problems while reading (some sentences like 'The man ran. Around the room.') but it does not pull the reader too far from the story and it is easy enough to make sense of what is intended. Updates seem stagnant but author seemingly wrote one hundred seventy nine chapters and if they continue to be held to the same writing quality then it is worth looking forward to─ the story is not marked as complete but I assume that it is. The story is developing well, no real complaints aside from the side-story of the MC looking back on what happened to his hero-students dragging on for a surprisingly long time while not being a split story. With that side story the author in Chapter 27 finally introduced a skip-through-time element to that plot. I believe the entire side plot could have started at the heroes and Stephen training after Stephen had already learned classes and elements. That way you could have the chapter of side story, then do a chapter of scrying back in time (which he did anyways) where you briefly see their meeting, early training, and can then go further back in time to see Stephen's early childhood then the battle with the demons and Naphtalie's sacrifice. As it was done there was a LOT of detail within the side story that drew the reader away from the actual plot─ if it is designed as a parallel plot then for author's future writings I hope they transition more fluidly between them (maybe add in more comments of 'Joan looked on' or the like). As written it almost felt like a separate book entirely, but overall very good development if a bit lengthy. Quite a few characters have been introduced already throughout the story and while some may feel cliché or one dimensional we do see actual growth with those we stick around. A rather large universe has been introduced and though only minor sections of the worlds themselves have truly been touched on the potential is there for massive development and I look forward to seeing it happen. Overall; I enjoy this story, it is not the 'greatest story ever' but that would be a hard thing to be in the first place, haha. This story has an interesting premise, rather pleasing descriptions, and is developing well and seems to have potential for extensive worldbuilding (which I tend to favor) ─ it is one I would recommend to others. I tend to be picky but try to remain logical with my ratings & I hope this provides feedback that benefits the author in future works, any critical statement made is designed with the intentions of helping the author improve.
Spoiler enthüllen A great story, it has some minor grammatical errors but it does not really cause any issues with reading and understanding the story as one can easily understand what the author meant. I would say this is probably one of the better stories that i have read on here.
Love the story, It's extremely interesting, and not super cliche. The grammar could use some work, but over all its a 5/5. I love the story, and I think you should try it .
😭😭Author, you need to compensate me!😭 I started reading chapter 1 and 2 but it already made me cry. Author, why are you so mean to him? *whine* The MC's previous life is a great foundation to him for his survival to another world! I just hope that he can still learn all professions! It's great! Although I'm not good with grammar structure, I can still pinpoint if there's a mistakes but your novel is so great that I almost forgot to check it HAHAHA! Truly, this is gold- No. IT IS A DIAMOND! I'll continue reading this later!
I love to read I can ignore most grammer mistakes easily But this is one of those stories that have grammer mistakes every few sentences that makes you feel like English is the author’s second or third language. The story is by no mrans bad. It’s one of the sites better stories, but the issue is that cause of the grammer pulling you out so often it isnt ranked higher. Author needs an editor to go through the existing chapters and edit out the grammer mistakes
This is a fun read! I like Joan and his story. The author has done a very good job at present thr story. The pace is a bit slow, but I still like it! I almost felt like I was watching an anime! I can't wait to see what happens to Joan, especially his students in his previous life, and what he will do further. Good job, author!
I think this novel has an interesting and yet fascinating concept in my opinion. First of all, the magic in this world is works like an RPG game which is quite unique and the author gives a quite good explanation at the same time. The main character in this one, Joan is also pretty decent compare to some reincarnation novels which is he isn't whiny or I can say quite wise just like he previous life self. However, there is some cons in my opinion which is if you write a long dialogue, I guess it's better to give some space or make into a new paragraph. I think that's all I have to say and thank you. Keep up the good work!!
Spoiler enthüllen What a great story. From the very first chapter i was hooked up into this. The story progressed beautifully. And, author really made all those fight scenes really epic. I could totally imagine all those spells which were thrown and the atmosphere of battlefield. This story deserve a five star rating. Highly recommend to you all!! And one last thing, I love THE MASTER!!!
Warrior MC? Check! Intriguing plot? Double checked! This novel deserves a five star rating because the plot is just unique from the others. And this category is very competitive in WSA, but I believe that this novel has a strong chance at wining the competition. Good luck author on the novel, I know it'll do great. Do update more
I fall in love with this story. I like it sooooooo much. 5 stars is easy for me to give for this work. Also, I can learn alot here. Will continue to read this work. I cant wait for my free time and spend it here
In all honesty, this is my first book in this genre, at first I just wanted to glance through it but then glancing through became reading. This is indeed a good book. To all fantasy lovers out there, this is specially made for your spirit.
Interesting plot, author gotta say, you have me hooked to this novel, still have to finish the chapters, but till now it's looking awesome. Just keep it up the same way.
The cover of the novel looks great. I enjoy the premise of leveling in novels although I rarely do it myself, it sets a clear and decisive goal for the Mc and company to achieve.
This book really had me hooked from the start. I love the plot, it's fresh. The author has a good writing style, it's easy to notice the effort put into developing the characters. keep it up dear Author
Kudos to the author! I saw your notes, it was inspired by Diablo 2. Diablo 2 was one of my favorite games! I started reading 2 chapters of the story and I could say it's a bomb. I recommend this story, guys! I can't wait to finish my current work to start a genre like this! W o W
Just from the first chapter, I could really tell that this is going to be awesome! Each page kept me on my feet on what the character will do next or the obstacles they faced. A thrilling adventure indeed!
I really love how the story flows goes. Although it was slow-paced, it makes you to go into next chapters continuously. It also had interesting magic types and systems! Last but not least, the author is very hard working and I knew from first glance that he paid a lot of effort in this novel! It will definitely will grow more and more popular in the future! Rooting for you!
This novel is very very well written, has a quick pace and the theme of the novel is awesome as well, expecting a lot of this novel, (only ch 11 now) but I will catch up to you guys, I really hope this story continues and evolves in a long story.
I loved the story. It is truly a master piece that captures your attention from the very beginning. I truly recommend reading this. The characters have a strong personality making this book truly one of a kind. This should be on everyone's reading list. 5 stars to the author. Amazing job.
I would like to thank MizA for commissioning the novel's book cover! I am not worthy of her grace and so I will make a review purely of just thanking her and giving her the credits. Upon reading, she voluntarily made one for me without making a requests for her to make one for me. And then I was surprised that she made an artwork based on the vibes she has read so far! I am inspired to see such support from my readers and thus will do my best not to disappoint her. Kudos MizA! And this review is for one and only you! This 5 stars are for your work! 😉
This novel is very rich in imagination which made the author special😄 The ML is a true hero and a warrior (I love warriors)😆 I love the world-building which is always a challenging task for authors but this author nailed it😉 Keep going, author🤗
I feel like I am watching the lord of the rings again. It feels magical and amazing. I like to read things like this when things I do get bored. it motivates me to push forward and be brave with obstacles in life. Great Book.[img=recommend]
It's quite awesome. It has a right amount of lore and the plot is quite on par with the setting. Overall, it totally deserves a five star rating.
I really like the way this novel is setup. Like the beginning of a legend except the legend is that of the MC who's about to start again. I'm already interested in how the previous experiences with classes will affect the MC's new life and growth. It gives me a slight bit of Avatar the Last Airbender vibes where the classes are like bending style. I like the almost epic style the narration is written with. Definitely a lot of potential!
I love D2. I think your story really brings out the essence of the mechanics in that game. Good job with the consistent chapter releases. Very impressive.
A novel inspired by Diablo 2, Torchlight, and, Elder scrolls Skyrim. Also, the action scenes were inspired by One punch man. And transmigration was inspired by many isekais that I have read till now. I hope this novel will be something that will be treasured and someday will become what I am proud of. Not sure though but Readers will still have the final say. Peace to you all!
Let me preface by saying I have a hard time getting in to most transmigration stories. That being said, this story is incredible! I was thoroughly entertained and invested. The author has done a great job with pacing, world building, and characterization. I would definitely recommend this! Good luck with WSA, author! (:
Wasn't surprised as this turned out to be one of the great books on this Platform. Even so, this book remained vast and unique. The language is clear and relatable. This book will get the applaud it deserves i am sure.