My Faᵵe System

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MellowGuy

I think some clarification is needed, so here's my review! The synopsis mentions necromancy, but the system doesn't have that function. The protagonist goes back in time and gets the ability to manipulate probability. Using his knowledge and his new bloodline, he'll learn the art of Necromancy. The system will act as a support for Necromancy and summoning/creating the undead. If you're impatient to get to the necromancy point, this novel isn't for you. I don't want to mislead you. The necromancy is crucial to the story, so I'm not going to throw that in just yet. :) I promise, however, that you'll have an interesting read. Not because of the cheat the mc has, but because the story development is unique. :)

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Althea_Diona

this is currently my fav novel on this platform and i'll do my best to recommend it to my frinds. the mc's character is realistic but cynical, smart but not a genius, he's not too op but still is strong. and what ii ike nost about this is his bloodline, it is unique and not used by most authors. the concept of necromancy and system might be too overused but this story is a fresh breath of air. world buildung is superb, plot is amazing and writing quality is great. honestly this one is an all rounder, now all i need is a webtoon/manhwa out of it and i can die happy.. thank u author for the hard work, i'll always try my best to support you! please never stop writing!

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MightBeMex

I have just read through all of the 71 currently available chapters for this story and have to say that it definitely is an interesting story with a unique premise, and definitely worth the time to read. The actions and twists with the plot are almost impossible to see through much less guess, which makes the world and the main character that much more interesting, as you discover more about the MC's fate and the changes he is making to the world. The pacing of the story is just right to allow you to not get bored with constant grinding for the tiniest gain in power but not make you bored with the MC becoming an over powered God in say 30 or 40 chapters. The authors talent for amazing world building, character development, and in depth planning of his story's and where he wants to take them which is easily seen in his other work Level Up Legacy, is easily found in this story as well. Besides the occasional misspelling, the story is an amazing read, with nothing else quite like it available.

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light_yagami_5097

Why doesn't the Mc hate Valkyrie? she ruined his life but when he found out that all of the awful stuff he went through in his early life was caused because of her he didn't even get mad, he still joined her party and is trying to impress her I mean I thought he would be trying to take her head. Not only that people who tried to get close to him felt the wrath of his tormentors to and Valkyrie knew and she still let it happen even if she moved because he was a lost case in his previous life, she still left all the trouble on his shoulders and while his life was getting torn apart she was with her guild enjoying all the riches

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Master_Of_gu

A hero with high morals and a sense of justice, yes, same stupid Chinese clichés, saving children, helping innocent people, etc. Don't be fooled by him killing his classmate in the first seasons. He's not evil and his words are contradictory, meaning friends, justice and pretty girls around him as usual.

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Time_Zekrom_4361

The writing quality is smooth and breathtaking to read. I am hoping for daily uploads if possible but we will see in the coming days or when the author responds. The story development is moving smoothly but there are some occasionally parts of the story that felt off. The character design is vague right now but I just hope he doesn't go making enemies left and right (you know young masters out there XD). As for the world background, it still developing so I suggest giving more info about the world and spread more evenly in the coming chapters so it doesn't become a massive info dump chapter!!! (Currently waiting for new chapter on chapter 23) Anway, amazing read so author don't stop!!!

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YOURS_TRULY

it's a basic cliche story about going back in time for revenge, unfortunately the character don't have any defining features. they all act at the whim of the almighty author, people comment how the MC did "X" act or thought "y" thought and the author jumps to correct it in the latter chapters, this diminishes the origin of the characters and their motives especially for the MC. which drops the quality of the story. The story development also lacks because of this, there is no realistic way to make a story progresses without it feeling shallow with bad characters. good luck in your future endeavours author and I wish you the best of luck.

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Thee_AngryBird

lemme tell you a little story... hahahahahahahahhahahahahahhaahhahahahahahahhaahhahahahahahahhahahahahhahahahahhahahahahahahahahhhahahahahhahahahah

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MurderByNumbers

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cluiz

This is so basic that i needed to write here i woupd give 3 star for everything but that one line saying that the cristals should go to the person who last hited is beyond stupid so 2 stars for everything

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Thomas1231

So just started the book it might get better later on but the start is not great from world building to character Design Most of the things are not strong the mc character Acts weird he time travel after suffering So much but when he see his school bully He is still scared a little, i cant not understand Why he thinks like a kid some time and They dont explain Much of what happened to him before He traveled back in time

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Petru_3777

The story is great, but why it stopped? I mean, it's about a month since the last chapter. I'm not a writer so i can't judge the difficulty of writing, and i'm not close tot the author to know his personal life, but a reminder that the story is în an indefinite pause would be nice. If you're the author and you see this, just you know, i'm watching 😑😑

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Webs_Noves

readers will find it hard to find. sometimes title is the key but your novel can't even normally search by typing my fate system. Vanity LoL

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MarkinUrMum

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I_Zero_I

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GMaster

I liked the first iteration but the reworking Increased the quality. I look forward to the progression if the story in the next 40 chapters but i like what I read so far.

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Mohand_Mouloud

I liked it at first, but the PC becomes more and more inhuman, especially when he kills innocent people I can't stand :'( (chp 183, I didn't really understand why he killed her, there was no reason . sad, I stop here personally )

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Brother59

Its a good story about changing fate. Necromancy still hasn’t popped in, but the story is progressing at a decent pace. The main character vengeful to a moronic degree, but the author tries to fix it later on. Last gripe is the updating stability, but besides this stuff solid story.

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Mr_Babbles

well I've read to chapter 3, the Grammer is near flawless but, the mc is the "I'll kill everyone who wronged me and my main personality is revenge and edge" so I already can't stand him, but other than that looks like he planned a story behind his system and has a ploy in the brew, but I absolutely cannot stand characters with black and white personalities

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Don_Brown_7174

Well, this is a 1st. for me... I feel compelled to write this review based not on the story i read so far but on the actual reviews posted. I do not mean 2 offend when i say in reply to some comments. #1 Spend less time doing your math homework//proving how clever you are by talking about odds calculation accuracy #2 Spend your time learning that human character-behaviour, (unlike odds), is not easy to define or quantify. Character is formed//behaviour is determined by nature vs. nurture, life experience, environmental influence, personal propensity to act & react (according to innate traits). You do not need a rule-book or psych. degree. As humans we are constantly evolving, learning, changing & adapting. Be patient, read story to the end. Only then will you come to understand MC. That is the beauty of the story. Character development & growth, not fancy maths. But that is just me. As i said no offence, just give the story more time. Also, how we act does not always equate how we feel. Complex characters need time & space to grow. As do we. Let us support Author's hard work and encourage through honest, respectful words of assessment//opinion. I am not an expert in any field, just a simple reader. Please excuse my rant. Wish you all a happy & safe read during covid times & beyond.