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Once again it falls on me to give a correct rating anyways the grammar is “Ok” readable i would say but the logic and little thing are in outer space i feel as if the author doesnt put much into this novel his updates are slow and his novel is posted in the real world normally this would make it more realistic but theres certain things that make No sense there are also many unnecessary scenes, and the Mc is average nothing special about Him, and idk whats up with the authors sense of money but he doesnt Even try to simply go to google and look up how much a building in japan costs since 200000 yen aint gettin you anywhere, anyway the book is readable but in the lower spectrum of webnovel Sorry to be harsh but this is criticism.
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webnovel is really full of garbage FF. reading this is boring as fvk sleeping is better . ....... ......... .... .... ...
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10 Review, 69 Fans. ...................................................................................................................
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Great novel, keep going. Hopefully webnovel doesn't mess with this one as well. Webnovel nae naed on the other good ones. ...............
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Once again it falls on me to give a correct rating anyways the grammar is “Ok” readable i would say but the logic and little thing are in outer space i feel as if the author doesnt put much into this novel his updates are slow and his novel is posted in the real world normally this would make it more realistic but theres certain things that make No sense there are also many unnecessary scenes, and the Mc is average nothing special about Him, and idk whats up with the authors sense of money but he doesnt Even try to simply go to google and look up how much a building in japan costs since 200000 yen aint gettin you anywhere, anyway the book is readable but in the lower spectrum of webnovel Sorry to be harsh but this is criticism.
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webnovel is really full of garbage FF. reading this is boring as fvk sleeping is better . ....... ......... .... .... ...
Love it don’t drop pls ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. …………….
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I like the story ....................................................................................................................................
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10 Review, 69 Fans. ...................................................................................................................
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Great novel, keep going. Hopefully webnovel doesn't mess with this one as well. Webnovel nae naed on the other good ones. ...............
Amazing keep it going … :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
Me encanta la historia por favor sube más capítulos🤗 Me encanta la historia por favor sube más capítulos🤗 Me encanta la historia por favor sube más capítulos🤗 Me encanta la historia por favor sube más capítulos🤗 Me encanta la historia por favor sube más capítulos🤗 Me encanta la historia por favor sube más capítulos🤗 Me encanta la historia por favor sube más capítulos🤗 Me encanta la historia por favor sube más capítulos🤗 Me encanta la historia por favor sube más capítulos🤗
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Spoiler enthüllen good chapter and good history. **************************************************************************************************************************************************************
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