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I was intrigued by the story line, but the writing style & wording made it impossible to enjoy fully. There were chapters that repeated. I know English is not the author's first language, but there were times I had zero idea what was trying to be conveyed. Very thin character development. Felt very immature.
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Really enjoyed the story it does play a major part of reality. Characters are great. ML was a bit too macho. FL liked her strength but towards last chapters was portrayed as weak. Overall story was great.
Make it free!!!! I want to read all chapters without 💵💰 tsssss this should be freeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩
Some of the chapters were repeating after another. Other then that it was good story
I was intrigued by the story line, but the writing style & wording made it impossible to enjoy fully. There were chapters that repeated. I know English is not the author's first language, but there were times I had zero idea what was trying to be conveyed. Very thin character development. Felt very immature.
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Really enjoyed the story it does play a major part of reality. Characters are great. ML was a bit too macho. FL liked her strength but towards last chapters was portrayed as weak. Overall story was great.
Make it free!!!! I want to read all chapters without 💵💰 tsssss this should be freeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩
Some of the chapters were repeating after another. Other then that it was good story